 |
Punkyhermy
like memory in motion
Gender: Unspecified
Location: |
 seep
silence.
creeps.
night.
shines.
two dots.
of light
glows.
cursive.
prints of
hands.
seep.
through the
glass.
alphabets.
glisten the
skin.
dark.
almost thin
path.
door.
partly closed
secret.
white.
chalky pasty
glistens.
laughter.
sneaks. |
Nov 1st, 2006 04:12 AM |
|
|
| |
|
~Forever*Alone~
Empress
 Gender: Female
Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere |
wow that sounded pretty.
__________________
does this work?
|
|
Nov 2nd, 2006 01:01 AM |
|
|
| |
|
Punkyhermy
like memory in motion
Gender: Unspecified
Location: |
thankies.
|
|
Nov 2nd, 2006 01:29 AM |
|
|
| |
|
Punkyhermy
like memory in motion
Gender: Unspecified
Location: |
*bumps*
|
|
Mar 31st, 2007 01:23 AM |
|
|
| |
|
King of Blades
The King
 Gender: Male
Location: The South |
bumps 
__________________
|
|
Mar 31st, 2007 06:42 PM |
|
|
| |
|
Punkyhermy
like memory in motion
Gender: Unspecified
Location: |
|
|
Apr 24th, 2007 04:29 PM |
|
|
| |
|
chillmeistergen
Restricted
 Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom Account Restricted |
It sounds like you're just saying every thought that goes through your head. Also two light does not 'glows' they glow. Keep it up though, you just need to inject a more exciting topic into this rythm structure.
__________________
"All morons hate it when you call them a moron." - Holden Caulfield
|
|
May 4th, 2007 10:28 AM |
|
|
| |
|
pcp
.
 Gender: Unspecified
Location: |
It certainly unique, stylistically. Artistically, however, I'm afraid it is not.
|
|
May 11th, 2007 09:59 AM |
|
|
| |
Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
|
HTML code is OFF
vB code is ON
Smilies are ON
[IMG] code is ON
|
|
Text-only version |
|
|
KMC Community Forums
