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brandino
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Psychotic poetry
Hello im new to the forums and id like to share some of my poetry. I have Acute Psychotic disorder and i wrote some of these when i was having severe psychotic episodes.
here are some haiku i wrote.
People wander to and fro
Causeless bumbling pedestrians encrypted human messaging showing attributes
Headless mindless monsters unparalleled problems
Flowing springtime breezes calming spirits
A sharp wind to minds evened understanding
Toppled and daunting renewed perception
Confused logic
Begin a true infallible act
watch the moderators capture the logical essence
Torch and wither uncoporeal presentations
Concieted idealist
So full of ideas infatuated
seeing the other side but blind eyed
clever to sight blind to reason
One window is all i need
One window is all i need
To watch mans clawing hands
As a day moves by ceaseless untired work
a lie to live by
a mask to play with
We're actors playing parts for others pleasures
i see this and i burn my mask and be of truth
iam he without none other iam for me and for true identity
iam seeing true original thought iam my mind.
Socio eyes
At first my eyes are opaque and a barrier
and then its like a waking grizzly my eyelashes the swipe of its claw it opens.
and then its like a drunk old man slowly falling down with the bars door closing shut.
and now it becomes as an avatar seeing through the shifting liars.
and now it is Deaths cold hand finding the last thread to be snipped as my minds eye watches.
and now it is frozen orbs cold icy is my stare as to what has happened.
and now iam the sociopath cold and heartless as the planets caught in void.
SENSES
planet great potential
ruins coming in air
hear distant battle cry another lost cause
feel breathe before hellstorm
taste metallic steel monsters of war
think man causing problems.
credo
I beleive in the human instrument
the tinkering of its process
the intelligence to have the idea
the stupidity to never give up
the brass to see it through
untired absolute antiquity
I beleive in the smile they sold you
i beleive lost causes are truly lost
i beleive giving yourself to corporate mechanism you damn yourself to be subjected to materialistic robot like lives.
i beleive anyone has a chance you just have to get the courage to take a chance regardless of others thought.
Confined logic
Confined to a box horizontal bars to a vertical thought process, man made boxes a cage a thought to understand the square a jail to life a prison to thoughts. undoubted epiphanies a puncture to our box, the wounds in a square are fresh air to being. believe in a box you believe in uniformed conformed and misinformed regrests and reason how funny we be trapped and gasping. Do as i do and merely remove the top! An epiphimaic explosion of words and thoughts unparralled. In the end just set yourself wild.
Ladder of command
Government is the chain of command the law of the land and the binding dead hands
We play just like puppets waiting to get played delayed in our actions by others who flay
Step by step you think a thought yet don’t realize the spies of the mind are played by the tried. Your caught in a act a play if you will your not really real a marketing ploy that is oh so so skilled. Don’t believe them they tell you lies and tales to cause your fails they say if without this your not true to being I see through the bullshit and see a sight that is freeing. The government lies everyday were the puppets they play to gain and pain. Were like voodoo dolls a pinprick there a sales motto here keep up your self notations of free thought its not even real play to the reel your scripted and don’t even know it. So die another day feel free to stand and pay to your death by the market and soul to the reaper your to understood you bastard child you creature.
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Nov 1st, 2006 07:29 PM |
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~Forever*Alone~
Empress
Gender: Female Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere |
okay technically thats not haiku, but i dont really care, just thought you should know...
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Nov 2nd, 2006 12:59 AM |
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brandino
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Gender: Location: United States |
i only wrote down what i had i dont even remember writing these i was in a deep psychosis i had a pencil paper and i just wrote. i didnt mean all of those were haiku only the first 4
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Nov 2nd, 2006 04:02 AM |
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~Forever*Alone~
Empress
Gender: Female Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere |
no those still werent haiku
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Nov 14th, 2006 01:53 AM |
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