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I think here is a good place to say I really want to see Jack and Liz sword fight each other in a "mask of Zorro" sort of way. They're probably evenly matched by now and their could be all sorts of innuendo. I think Jack would find it really hot. He doesn't really get to see her fight that much.
Gender: Female Location: at the second star to the right
Oh, I'm really blanking right now. Please go to fanfiction.net, search my name and read POTC3 and 4, or find one of the threads where I have written some scenes. I'll try to be original soon.
Gender: Female Location: I'm American, but I live in Beijing
Yeah that would be cool to see Elizabeth and Jack swordfight. Or her and Will.
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ha^^^ i like that idea maybe will finds out she chose jack and jacks life is on the line and will was going to hurt him and liz fights him to save jack
Gender: Female Location: Drinking rum with Jack in a dingy
I love this thread too.....Yes, I think it would be so hott to see Jack and Lizzie swordfight...and I too, would love to see Liz tend to Jack's wounds after he is wounded by Davy or Beckett..and we can feel the tension oozing between them.....
Liz: Lie still, Captain Sparrow...this will only hurt a little but I must tend to this gash in your side...
Jack: (gasping, barely able to talk): I'm not sure I can entirely trust you....Miss Swann....you sure you mean to heal me or finish me off...
Liz: Ja...Captain Sparrow, How can you say such a thing to me,...of course I mean to heal you
Jack:...of course....it's not like you haven't tried to kill me before (coughs)
Liz: I thought we were past all that....Please be still....I think you may have to remove your shirt so I can see to it better....
Jack's eyes clashes with Elizabeth's
Jack: you'll have to do it for me..I haven't the strenght to....Miss.....Swann...
Liz:...okay, but this will hurt, can you at least lift your shoulder up so I can remove your shirt....
Once the shirt is removed, lIz struggles not to caress Jack's chest...their eyes are intently staring into each other...
Liz breaks the stare and begins administering care to Jack's wound....
Jack asks for rum to help ease the pain.....and so on.....
Liz finishes up the doctoring and just before Jack collapses into a pain-ridden sleep we hear him whisper...as he grabs Elizabeth's hand..
Jack: thank you, Eliza...(defeated) Miss.... Swann ( and drops her hand)
We see a tear fall down Elizabeth's cheek as she is looking out the window of the cabin on the Pearl....
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Gender: Female Location: Drinking rum with Jack in a dingy
and Kate...yes, after the tender scene we would need a light-hearted scene....maybe Jack and Liz are drinking rum again together at some point after he has healed....Liz tells Jack she must learn to dance for her wedding....so he says that he can teach her...and we see them start to dance...."one, two, three"....we can see laughter and them having fun...but then when he dips her and pulls her back up close to him we see an tense moment where they are mouth to mouth....(the teaser kiss)...and then jack pushes her away and says "I'm sorry Miss Swann...forgive me, I got a little carried away. I forgot the last kiss you kissed a Pirate it was just a form of distraction..there's only one man you want to be kissing and it's not this said Pirate...." and he storms out of the cabin....Liz is left gaping at him and we see the big look of confusion and disappointment on her face...and she talks to herself "I really need to stop spending so much time with him and stay focused on Will and how much I love him and how I want to marry him....right?" or somthing to that effect.
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OMGSH lovethemtigers you are OUT OF CONTROL AMAZING>>>>>>
Im literally crying a little. sheesh im SUCH A HORMONAL WOMAN.
I'm just going to save those little gems to my computer so i can read them whenever i need therapy. seriously.
i LOVED the line you gave Jack during the dancing bit!!!