Yea true mine always comes from what happens with the guy I like that day cuz otherwise my poems suck or sumthin that hes done 2 me trust me thats been happenin alot lately
Whoa! Guys are starting to sound more like retarded bitches everyday!
Got another poem:
Suppression
I hold down my longing when I see Him.
I hold down my rage political involvement in everything.
I hold down my sadness when I see the poor.
I hold down my aching when I see orphans.
I hold down all my emotions in the face of humanity’s unjustness.
But one day it’s all going to come out.
I pity the one that shall
Be at receiving end
Of everything that’s bottled inside of me,
All the pain,
All the misery,
All the loneliness.
Too long have I been the victim of my own rage.
My heart cannot endure any further.
I’ll make a vow here and now
To dispose of my anger externally
Rather than direct it at my own heart
And tear holes in such a fragile thing.
I will no longer use my soul as a means
Of committing spiritual suicide,
Or using my heart
As a human piñata
To deflect the blows dealt from mental pain.
Why thank you! How kind! I'm been busy lately...well er...doing nothin basically, just takin a break from writin so i haven't written anything new apart from a poem for English Literature class.
I think I'd better explain this a little, we've been going through Carol Ann Duffy's 'The World's Wife' collection and all the poems are a bit feminist, she's basically gotten the names of famous guys in history or mythology and written poems from their wives' points of view and dissed them (well, most of them) so at the end of the collection we had to write our own poems in her style so I chose Mrs Shady, as in Kim Mathers, eminem's wife, here goes:
MRS SHADY
The Thought of a murderous deed crosses my mind.
But contradicting emotions push it aside.
I don’t know what to do.
He pisses me off bad time!
I wanna grab a gun and blow his ****in head off!
Hey Em. EM! Why don’t you love me?
You think I’m ugly don’t you?
Gimme a break!
You sad little bastard
You make me sick.
I wish I’d never met you
You rap freak!
Can’t you just leave my baby and me alone?
She don’t need to see what her daddy is.
Eccentric little shithead!
You ******, you slimy little worm, you insignificant little pest.
I ****in wish you would die mutha****a.
What did the world do to have you in it?
I hope you go to hell *****!
It’s where you belong!
I hope you take an over-dose again
But unlike last time I hope it works!
The music industry needs a break from you
And your shitty music
If you could call that crap music,
I mean personally I think it sounds better when I’m takin a piss.
What you call wicked rhymes
I call tatty crimes
Against music.
It’d be better for all of us if you quit.
Our ears are bursting.
Your head is growing way too big.
You stuck-up mutha****a.
Apologies for any offence I'm caused to anyone, and I LOVE Eminem, do not be fooled!
Thank you very much. Got another one, been thinkin about this guy a lot lately and I so I wrote a poem about how I feel (by the way, the same guy inspired 'Four Feet Away')
My Sunshine.
A darkened night
The moon so bright.
All I can think of is you
As I survey this view,
Everything on my mind is about you,
You’re the reason why I’m not being me.
I fell for you
And you broke my heart,
I was prepared to hand you my soul
But you tore it apart.
After everything that you’ve done,
You’re still the ray from the sun
That guides me forward in a painful existence
I’d trust you with my life
But you won’t take your time to hear
Because what I have to say you believe is not for your ear.
Please just listen
I want you to know how I feel about you
If I could make you understand what you mean to me
You’d realise that
When I said I’d follow you to the ends of the earth
It wasn’t a lie.
I’d die for you if anyone would let me try.
You treat me like dirt
But I follow your shadow everywhere
You don’t talk to me
But I listen to every word you say.
I’m nothing to you
But you’re the centre of my universe.
Don’t turn away,
Please don’t go,
My world is shattering because you don’t care.
Just take one look back
And I swear I’ll stay away forever.
It was a bit random, I was just sittin around thinkin about HIM and why I can't...you know...have him, I needed to express myself.
(I need to get me a life, seriously, I sit in front of a computer screen practically all day, how sad am I?)
wow... that made me wanna cry, ive been in that situation before. it hurts so bad.... guys who make ppl feel like that are assholes, but when u feel so strongly about them, its hard to see that. its hard to see alot of things when u feel so strongly about someone. just never let him bring you down, ur kewl, and he should realize that, man, ive been through this wit sierra so many times about this guy she likes. but if you truly feel that way about him, dont give up, but remember whatever happens, happens, and evrything happens for a reason ....... but sides that, kick ass poem ....... ur not sad at all, i do the same lol
He doesn't do it on purpose, there's just a very strong...cultural barrier in between that can't be crossed. And thanks, I really appreciate the...the (what's the word I'm lookin for?)...kindness.
Just so you know, I don't usually write poems like this, normally dark and foreboding, I specialise in that kinda thing.
Oh, i see, srry, i tend to jump to conclusions sometimes... i need to work on not doing that . Cultural barrier?, srry, nuna my biznezz lol.... anyways your a...... (whats the word im lookin for?)..... oh, yeah... welcome lol . Hehe, i do the same lol, whenever im really pissed off or depressed, i just write poetry
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Dec 17th, 2006 04:53 PM
awesome poem. right on
....... but sides that, kick ass poem 
....... ur not sad at all, i do the same lol
