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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
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Location: Up Shit Creek |
It's ok, I judge people too and it doesn't really matter about the whole cultural thing.
Keep at the peoms though! Your really good, so dya have any ambitions of becomin an official poet any time soon?
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Dec 25th, 2006 08:30 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
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Thank you soooo much, but ur poems are sooooo much better. Me an official poet?!?! haha, no, i couldnt be an 'official' poet, i just write when im depressed or really pissed off lol. But when i grow up, i reeeeeeeeeeeeeally wanna become a writer, ive gotta step up my writing a bit tho lol. After i get outta college ima join the peace corp, then travel around the world, and write about the things i see.... so in the long run i just wanna make a differance in the world when i grow up i guess 
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Dec 25th, 2006 08:37 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Wow, nice. I wouldn't mind travelling the world myself, it's my ambition to live in Venice, Italy, I've read soooo much about it and it's always described as city of wonder and beauty, I'd love to go there some day.
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Dec 26th, 2006 05:02 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
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Location: listening to music |
Venice, Italy does sound nice. My friend Ryan goes to Italy every summer, cause hes Italian.... he says its the most beautiful place ever.... he takes alot of pictures... my god, its absolutely beautiful.
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Dec 26th, 2006 08:41 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Oh, man, I'm gettin jealous now, lol.
But I gotta settle down with a proper career before I move anywhere....
Same ole' boring house for now....
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Dec 27th, 2006 04:46 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
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Nice poems
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Dec 27th, 2006 05:26 PM |
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silver heart
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Gender: Female
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 I was thinking.
What is the purpose of life?
I was thinking.
when I was writing.. when I was playing.
only I will live for moments only
What is the purpose of life?
If the life was end for my ways
If the life was end for my dreams
What is the purpose of life?
yes .. by time .. I remembered that God promised us give us the paradise ..
I smiled
I began think again
when I was writing .. when I was playing
only I will live for moments only
for paradise this is my purpose of life
very nice poetry Immortality
best 
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Dec 27th, 2006 05:59 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Thank you! Nice little poem you got there too
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Dec 27th, 2006 09:52 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
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awesome poem silver heart....... all the poems here are full of feelings... and tons of feelings makes for a good poem, no?
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Last edited by Weeping Fairy on Dec 28th, 2006 at 01:15 AM
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Dec 28th, 2006 01:12 AM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
S'pose.
It's all so confusing,
What exactly is the purpose of life?
Why are we here?
What awaits us in life?
All the religions say it's to worship God,
Some people say it's to find true love
And live happily ever after,
Some people say it's about finding yourself,
And fulfilling your hopes and dreams.
I think the meaning of life will be in death.
Once we enter oblivion
All shall become clear
And we shall see what the purpose
Of this wasteful life is.
That's from the top of my head. Totally rubbish
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Dec 28th, 2006 05:15 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
No way! I just wrote down whatever came to my head. Whenever I do that, the worst of my work shines through.
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Dec 29th, 2006 05:30 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
No way! I write poetry best when I'm mad, lonely or simply depressed. Other times it's completely rubbish.
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Dec 29th, 2006 08:14 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
Gender: Female
Location: listening to music |
Haha.... same here, i think ppl can pretty much tell i was either depressed or really pissed off when i write my poems. but, its really not rubbish, trust me 
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Dec 30th, 2006 06:32 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
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Ur last 2 poems are really really deep I love em
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Dec 31st, 2006 11:39 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Which one was the last two? Sorry, I'm a bit confused, I haven't been coming on here in a few days but thanks anyway
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Jan 2nd, 2007 04:10 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Another poem, inspired by the same ******* from the past few poems:
TOO MUCH TO ASK
Every time that I see you,
I feel like opening up my heart,
But you just turn away,
Not even acknowledging my existence,
And just the thought of your ignorance stabs at my very core
Till I feel as if I can breath no more.
Why are you so blind?
Is it too much to ask that you let me see into your heart?
All I want is a glance into your world,
To understand you better
To know how you feel
And to see the world through your eyes
Is it too much to ask?
The thought of you makes me nervous
But I don’t see why I should be
Because I don’t belong with you, right?
I’m just a nobody in a world of opportunities
There are far greater things out there than me.
I’m the human equivalent of the dirt underneath your shoe.
I’m a human being,
I have feeling,
Some of which are stronger than you’ll ever know,
But all the same you pay me no heed.
Like I’m not there,
And I probably never will be…
Rubbish ending, sorry...
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