What Is Your Rating On My Poems
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Kick Ass
2
22.22%
I Like Em
2
22.22%
Good Could Use A Little Work
4
44.44%
Ok
0
0%
I Hate Em They Suck
1
11.11%
Total:
9 votes
100%
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
Same here. Nowt to do.
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Dec 17th, 2006 07:28 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
I might write sum more but idk
Dec 17th, 2006 07:38 PM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
Hmm, this is ridiculous! I have been sititng at my computer all day! shows how much of a dull person I am don't it?
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Dec 17th, 2006 07:46 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
Well don't feel bad so have I I mean I don't really have 2 much of a social life I gotta ask how old r u I was j/w
Dec 17th, 2006 08:01 PM
Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: listening to music
they are all so flippin good, but i really liked the anger, depression, sadness one 2 very enthusiastic thumbs up (from clueless) , i watched that movie last night, i was good lol
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Dec 17th, 2006 09:18 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
Thx urs r good 2 and omg I have a 5th sense my breast knew u were gonna say that lol
Dec 17th, 2006 09:21 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
LoL
Dec 17th, 2006 09:32 PM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
quote: (post ) Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
Well don't feel bad so have I I mean I don't really have 2 much of a social life I gotta ask how old r u I was j/w
16
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Dec 18th, 2006 04:49 PM
Demonic Phoenix
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: Between Realms
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
nah, im talkin bout the guy lance that hurt her ... thats the boi ima hurt
Oh okay.
Sorry SG for whatever happened between you and that guy.
Anyway, good work, keep it up
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Dec 20th, 2006 02:48 AM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
OMG!!! from reading ur poems, i wouldve thought u were much older than 16
Really? I'm just a lonely person that's why I try to make my poems personal, I woulnd't say I give the impression that I'm like an ancient or anything
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Dec 20th, 2006 07:04 PM
Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location: listening to music
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Immortality
Really? I'm just a lonely person that's why I try to make my poems personal, I woulnd't say I give the impression that I'm like an ancient or anything
Yea really lol . Ur kewl, i dont see y u should be lonely. Nah, not ancient, just alot wiser than most 16 year olds i kno lol
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Dec 20th, 2006 10:10 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
Ok cool I'm 14 btw sry havent been on in a few days and thx Demonic btw here is another poem that I was thinkin of writin walkin on the way home
A day goes by and nothing happens
and another and another until,
Nothing is left but darkness and despair,
Until a light shines within
You know that in that light is happiness and warmth
You feel there is no way to reach it
People walking in and out everyday
You stay alone in the dark
No one to hold or comfort you
You scream but no one hears you
A tear drops from yours face
No one is there to dry it up
You trip and fall onto the ground
No one is there to catch you
Your alone and never see the people around you
You only see the one you want there
Dec 20th, 2006 11:09 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
Thx but I think its kinda sucky
Dec 20th, 2006 11:19 PM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
Aww, I like it! It's cool.
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Dec 21st, 2006 06:54 PM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Yea really lol . Ur kewl, i dont see y u should be lonely. Nah, not ancient, just alot wiser than most 16 year olds i kno lol
Cool, thanks, same to you.
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Dec 21st, 2006 06:58 PM
Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female Location: Up Shit Creek
No probs.
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Dec 22nd, 2006 12:01 AM
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