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What Is Your Rating On My Poems
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| Kick Ass |
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22.22% |
| I Like Em |
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22.22% |
| Good Could Use A Little Work |
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44.44% |
| Ok |
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| I Hate Em They Suck |
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11.11% |
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9 votes |
100% |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
 Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Thx immortality but that wasnt my best I was just bored
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Dec 22nd, 2006 09:58 PM |
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Demonic Phoenix
Senior Member
 Gender: Male
Location: Between Realms |
Well then I guess it's safe to say it sucked .....I'm kiddin ya, it's good
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Dec 22nd, 2006 10:34 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Yea and idc if u say it sucked I'd rather know the truth than be lied 2
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Dec 22nd, 2006 10:36 PM |
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Demonic Phoenix
Senior Member
Gender: Male
Location: Between Realms |
Oh trust me, I didn't lie when I said it was good.
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" To all visitors from Transylvania looking for the head of Voivode Dracula: Yes, we have it. Yes, he's dead. No, you cannot see it. No, he will not return and invade you again. It has been over thirty years, please stop pestering us."
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Dec 23rd, 2006 12:35 AM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
ok thx
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Dec 23rd, 2006 01:10 AM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Heres another one it ryhmes but idc
Secrets are told
Heartbreaks are lost
When did love come at such a cost
It's made itself known
That it shouldn't be beat
This new year I hope
My true match I will meet
Hope that was lost is once gained again
Confusion once dropped
Came back to drop in
Questions are asked
Tears are now falling
For no one knows what answers are calling
Let this new year bring one I want most
Please God I pray we are each others host
Falling off a cliff of rocks
Time ticking away on every clock
Let love give me the one I'm wishing for
One day I hope we'll meet at the door
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Dec 23rd, 2006 11:11 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
 Gender: Female
Location: listening to music |
AWESOME JOB SIERRA!!!!! yay.... good poem, i really liked it. HURRY UP AND GET ONLINE!!! i have things to tell you bout the party lol. anyways like i said b4 good poem. peace out girl scout lol 
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Dec 24th, 2006 03:39 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
 Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
Nice work but you coulda worked on the endin a bit, it sounds....unfinished, if ya get my drift.
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Dec 24th, 2006 05:18 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
I know it sounds unfinished im workin on that I had 2 get off the computer kinda fast
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Dec 27th, 2006 05:27 PM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
No probs, it was a great poem though
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Dec 27th, 2006 09:53 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Ok is it good now
Secrets are told
Heartbreaks are lost
When did love come at such a cost
It's made itself known
That it shouldn't be beat
This new year I hope
My true match I will meet
Hope that was lost is once gained again
Confusion once dropped
Came back to drop in
Questions are asked
Tears are now falling
For no one knows what answers are calling
Let this new year bring the one I want most
Please God I pray we are each others host
Falling off a cliff of rocks
Time ticking away on every clock
Let love give me the one I'm wishing for
One day I hope we'll meet at the door
Our eyes will meet the hope of each others
Our lips will then lock with one anothers
Our hearts will beat three times at quick
Knowing theres no hope makes me sick
But it's all just a dream a stupid illusion
I'm starting to realize I'm in delusion
Unless I'm told to the face by him
Theres no truth not one little wim
So the games will keep going
Until he catches me alone
Until then no pain or confusion will be gone
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Dec 27th, 2006 10:41 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
and that is the truth
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Dec 27th, 2006 10:41 PM |
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Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
Gender: Female
Location: listening to music |
the truth sux hun, but ur poem rox my sox ...... if that boi doesnt make a move soon, ima take him the fuk out
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Dec 28th, 2006 01:03 AM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Yea the truth does suck and I wish sum1 could find out sum goddam answers
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Dec 28th, 2006 01:19 AM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
Gender: Female
Location: Up Shit Creek |
same here, my existance is in chaos!
Good Poem! I was confused for a second if that was the modified version of the one before! Keep 'em cumin!
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Dec 28th, 2006 05:08 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Thx Katz it's ok nobody else is gettin answers so I don't expect u to it's too late anywayz and thx Immortality
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Dec 28th, 2006 10:46 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Don't be callin me a biotch I do think its 2 late and u know that
What will be the final chapter
When will it all end
How will the truth be shown
Why is he doing this to me
What happens after everything is told
When will all of the questions turn to answers
How will we end up as people
Why isn't anything going right
What is the chance of what I want
When will he finally notice how much I care
How is the story going to end
Why is it neverending
Who will we trun out to be
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Jan 1st, 2007 12:36 AM |
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................ awesome poem, but for real we will figure this thing out
