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What Is Your Rating On My Poems
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| Kick Ass |
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2 |
22.22% |
| I Like Em |
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22.22% |
| Good Could Use A Little Work |
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44.44% |
| Ok |
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0% |
| I Hate Em They Suck |
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11.11% |
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9 votes |
100% |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
 Gender: Female
Location: United States |
I feel as if in a sea of despair,
I think of you constantly wishing you to be there,
We talk for hours but it's not the same,
You don't how bad I'm feeling this pain,
I wish you were here so I could hold you tight,
I wait to hear your voice every morning and night,
I'll never let you go my love is here to stay,
Time lingers by hoping to see you day by day,
One day we'll be together kissing each other every minute,
Cuddling on the couch there's absolutely no limit,
Hoping you won't hurt me trying to trust your love,
My heart is very fragile like a peaceful white Dove,
You say I'm your angel and I hope it's true,
Believe me baby when I say "I LOVE YOU!!"
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Jul 6th, 2007 12:15 AM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Hey yall tell me what ya think its a bit different but idk i felt it from the heart
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Jul 6th, 2007 12:22 AM |
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Weeping Fairy
Senior Member
 Gender: Female
Location: listening to music |
YAY ITS FINALLY HAPPY!! ... .er.... well..... sorta....kinda.....not really, the I LOVE YOU!!! part was happy, tho lmao, tell reggie i said wats up lol, but u should change ur avvy cuz u dont like MC Banana nemore. but yea, i miss u sooo much, when do u get ur cell back?
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Jul 6th, 2007 04:17 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
Thanks Kitty lol yea it's sorta happy....Idk when I get my cell back but my mom says soon...I miss ya too...and yea I know I need to change my avvy lol I thought bout that yesterday....People tell me what yall think plz
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Jul 6th, 2007 05:36 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
plz people tell me what yall think
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Jul 7th, 2007 09:26 PM |
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SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female
Location: United States |
A secret well kept that plays a special role
Knowing I love you but you'll never know
Its painfully hurting never to tell you
Hopefully one day these words will compel you
Wishing you could hold me tight in your arms
All of the secrecy is causing me harm
My body is aching my stomach all flustered
I don't understand why your causing this pain
Unknowingly your killing me in vein
There is no way to tell you how much I care
But I love you entirely and one day I hope "us" will be there.
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May 11th, 2008 08:28 PM |
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Ya Krunk'd Floo
Moving with the swell.
 Gender: Male
Location: West of the Sun. |
bwah
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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
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Feb 20th, 2009 08:59 AM |
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