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America, #@^& yeah!

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By all rights and rational thought he should be dead. He knew this well. The dizziness had begun to take over. Blood loss. Wouldn’t be long at all now. The human body was amazing in its fragility. The smallest of injuries in the right places could cause death. An artery here, there, and the added pumping of blood the body did in times of stress could mean death within twenty minutes. The blare of an eighteen wheelers horn jerked Malcolm back into reality, and he had to turn the wheel several times to get back into the right lane. He shouldn’t be driving right now, he knew. But at least it beat the indignity of dying silently next to the road, unnamed, and probably unnoticed for several hours. And by that time, whatever bastards that had done this to him would have plenty of time to get long gone. No, Not now. Focus. Need to focus on the road. God, it would have been damn comforting to know exactly why he was doing this. Why his neck and leg gushed forth pints of blood. That knowledge, however, would be useless if he didn’t know who did it to him. And, sadly, he didn’t know that either. ****… Focus! Keep your eyes open, damn it! So tired…. So, so tired….. He didn’t feel a thing when the car swerved off of the road and into a snow bank. He heard sirens then. So tired…


God bless america, bitches! smokin'
Thanks beta ray howard!!!

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