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Warning Harry Potter and the Hallows Eve(My Fan-Fic)

Eh,I'm starting a new fan-fic called Harry Potter and the Hallow's Eve.It is,of course after 6th year.It should be rated PG-13,but it might cross the line to R,because I can describe violence really good. sad Don't think that even matters.Here is chapter 1-The Final Goodbye




Harry sat at his desk,half-asleep.It was just around a week before he could finally leave the Dursleys forever.The Daily Prophet was laying in front of him,but he wasn't exactly reading.The newspaper itself was fatter than usual.All the usual headlines would be filled with murders and deaths of wizards and muggles,but there was one that Harry was re-reading over and over again.It said:


THE END OF AZKABAN
LAST NIGHT,ALL OF THE DEMENTORS OF AZKABAN
HAVE ESCAPED AZKABAN.FOLLOWING THAT,ALL THE
PRISONERS HAVE ALSO ESCAPED,INCLUDING LUCIUS
MALFOY,A CONVICTED DEATH EATER,AND A LOT OF
OTHERS.THE MINISTRY IS WORKING HARD TO STEP UP
A NOTCH ON THE SECURITY PLANS.ALSO THE MINISTER
SPOKE JUST AFTER THE ESCAPE."The wizarding world
is in more danger than ever before.This breakthrough
is just the beginning.I suggest everyone that cares for
their own,or for their families',safety,read the article on
Pg. 14
ALSO,THERE WAS SPECULATION THAT SOME
THING LIKE THIS WOULD HAPPEN.ALBUS DUMBLEDORE,
TWO YEARS AGO,TOLD THE WHOLE WIZENMAGOT THAT
THE YOU-KNOW-HOW WOULD FINALLY GET CONTROL OF
ALL THE DEMENTORS OF AZKABAN.(PG. 6 FOR MORE.)

Harry read the article one last time and got up to check for any signs of movement outside.Everywhere was dark except for the light coming from Miss Figg's house.Harry raised an eyebrow and went to bed.




Next morning,Harry woke up to a rainy morning.Harry got dressed,and went downstairs for breakfast.

The rest of the day passed by,as usual.The Dursleys wouldn't talk as much,ever since they heard that one of Uncle Vernon's relatives has been found dead,of natural causes,on his backyard patio,but,of course,
Harry knew that he didn't die just out of natural causes.

Harry finished his meal,and went upstairs.When he opened the door,a tiny owl twittered around and dropped a letter with Ron's writing on Harry's head.As Harry catched it,the owl flew out of his window.Harry closed the door and sat down to read the letter.It was really short.It said:

Hiya mate,
Moody and Tonks will be here on your birthday to pick you up
around 9. Your best friend,
Ronald Weasley
P.S. Can't wait until you get here.

Harry read the letter over twice again befor putting it on his desk.
Harry went to bed and went fast asleep.


The rest of the week passed by without anything important happening.On the morning of Harry's birthday,Uncle Vernon was the one that woke up Harry,with his bellowing yells.Harry got up,remembering this being his last few hours with the Dursleys.He quickly went downstairs to eat breakfast.Before doing so,he told the Dursleys that a few people would be here at 9 to pick him up.Usually,Vernon would argue,but he simply nodded.Harry finished his breakfast and went to pack.He opened his trunks,and started picking up as much stuff as his hands could hold,and stuffed it into his trunks.He repeated this process several times before finally finishing up.Merely seconds after finishing up,Harry heard shrieks from downstairs.Harry opened the door to see Tonks followed by Mad-Eye coming upstairs.

"Wotcher,Harry!" Tonks,this time with long silver hair,greeted Harry.

Mad-Eye Moody took out his wand and muttered a spell on the trunks.The trunks floated up a few inches and floated downstairs.

"We must hurry up." Mad-eye Moody quickly grunted.

Harry,Tonks,and Moody went downstairs.Moody looked at Vernon.Vernon whinced a little.Tonks threw some Floo Powder into the fireplace,as emerald green flames burst through.

"The Burrow!" Tonks replied calmly.

"After you,Harry." Moody,for the first time smiling,said.

Harry went into the warm flames,looked at the Dursley's living room one last time,and took off.Harry immediately felt the dizzy sensation again.Harry could see quick glimpses of other living rooms before finally appearing at the Burrow.Fred and George were sitting in the living room and immediately started announcing Harry's appearance.








So,should I continue?Any suggestions? big grin


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that'a good... you should keep going. you shouldnt quit because people dont like it

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Re: Harry Potter and the Hallows Eve(My Fan-Fic)

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Originally posted by Truce_or_Dare
Eh,I'm starting a new fan-fic called Harry Potter and the Hallow's Eve.It is,of course after 6th year.It should be rated PG-13,but it might cross the line to R,because I can describe violence really good. sad Don't think that even matters.Here is chapter 1-The Final Goodbye




Harry sat at his desk,half-asleep.It was just around a week before he could finally leave the Dursleys forever.The Daily Prophet was laying in front of him,but he wasn't exactly reading.The newspaper itself was fatter than usual.All the usual headlines would be filled with murders and deaths of wizards and muggles,but there was one that Harry was re-reading over and over again.It said:


THE END OF AZKABAN
LAST NIGHT,ALL OF THE DEMENTORS OF AZKABAN
HAVE ESCAPED AZKABAN.FOLLOWING THAT,ALL THE
PRISONERS HAVE ALSO ESCAPED,INCLUDING LUCIUS
MALFOY,A CONVICTED DEATH EATER,AND A LOT OF
OTHERS.THE MINISTRY IS WORKING HARD TO STEP UP
A NOTCH ON THE SECURITY PLANS.ALSO THE MINISTER
SPOKE JUST AFTER THE ESCAPE."The wizarding world
is in more danger than ever before.This breakthrough
is just the beginning.I suggest everyone that cares for
their own,or for their families',safety,read the article on
Pg. 14
ALSO,THERE WAS SPECULATION THAT SOME
THING LIKE THIS WOULD HAPPEN.ALBUS DUMBLEDORE,
TWO YEARS AGO,TOLD THE WHOLE WIZENMAGOT THAT
THE YOU-KNOW-HOW WOULD FINALLY GET CONTROL OF
ALL THE DEMENTORS OF AZKABAN.(PG. 6 FOR MORE.)

Harry read the article one last time and got up to check for any signs of movement outside.Everywhere was dark except for the light coming from Miss Figg's house.Harry raised an eyebrow and went to bed.




Next morning,Harry woke up to a rainy morning.Harry got dressed,and went downstairs for breakfast.

The rest of the day passed by,as usual.The Dursleys wouldn't talk as much,ever since they heard that one of Uncle Vernon's relatives has been found dead,of natural causes,on his backyard patio,but,of course,
Harry knew that he didn't die just out of natural causes.

Harry finished his meal,and went upstairs.When he opened the door,a tiny owl twittered around and dropped a letter with Ron's writing on Harry's head.As Harry catched it,the owl flew out of his window.Harry closed the door and sat down to read the letter.It was really short.It said:

Hiya mate,
Moody and Tonks will be here on your birthday to pick you up
around 9. Your best friend,
Ronald Weasley
P.S. Can't wait until you get here.

Harry read the letter over twice again befor putting it on his desk.
Harry went to bed and went fast asleep.


The rest of the week passed by without anything important happening.On the morning of Harry's birthday,Uncle Vernon was the one that woke up Harry,with his bellowing yells.Harry got up,remembering this being his last few hours with the Dursleys.He quickly went downstairs to eat breakfast.Before doing so,he told the Dursleys that a few people would be here at 9 to pick him up.Usually,Vernon would argue,but he simply nodded.Harry finished his breakfast and went to pack.He opened his trunks,and started picking up as much stuff as his hands could hold,and stuffed it into his trunks.He repeated this process several times before finally finishing up.Merely seconds after finishing up,Harry heard shrieks from downstairs.Harry opened the door to see Tonks followed by Mad-Eye coming upstairs.

"Wotcher,Harry!" Tonks,this time with long silver hair,greeted Harry.

Mad-Eye Moody took out his wand and muttered a spell on the trunks.The trunks floated up a few inches and floated downstairs.

"We must hurry up." Mad-eye Moody quickly grunted.

Harry,Tonks,and Moody went downstairs.Moody looked at Vernon.Vernon whinced a little.Tonks threw some Floo Powder into the fireplace,as emerald green flames burst through.

"The Burrow!" Tonks replied calmly.

"After you,Harry." Moody,for the first time smiling,said.

Harry went into the warm flames,looked at the Dursley's living room one last time,and took off.Harry immediately felt the dizzy sensation again.Harry could see quick glimpses of other living rooms before finally appearing at the Burrow.Fred and George were sitting in the living room and immediately started announcing Harry's appearance.








So,should I continue?Any suggestions? big grin




Here is Chapter 2-A New Task


The Malfoy Mansion stood afar off.The thunder rumbled angrily.A man with black hair and with black robes was walking towards the mansion.
When he got to the enterance gate,he took a wand from the inside of his
robes and muttered a spell,which unlock the gate with a click.The man went in and muttered a spell again,this time locking the gate.He walked up towards the door and knocked as hard as he could.Lightning struck a
huge tree standing near the gate and split in two.A light turned on in the
house and followed by footsteps.Lucius Malfoy opened the door with
caution.Even though Lucius was in Azkaban for a few years,the prison
changed him very much.His long white hair now had gray streaks in
them,long scars were on his hands and all over his face,and his eyes
bloodshot.

"Who is it?" Lucius demanded.

Snape smirked and walked in.

"Where is Draco?" Snape asked while looking around.

"He is upstairs,sleeping." Lucius sleepily replied.

Snape lookedat the stairs and then faced Lucius.

"The Dark Lord wants you and Draco to meet him tomorrow at the Riddle
house at dawn." Snape spoke as if reading from a book.

Lucius stood motionless for a few moments and then looked at Snape.

"He's going to kill Draco and me.Isn't he?" Lucius said calmly.

Snape didn't respond immediately.

"No.He's giving you one last chance to prove your loyalty to him.He's
giving you a new task.He will tell you tomorrow at dawn." Snape said.

Lucius,a bit shocked,replied,"You get Draco,while I get fully dressed."

**************************************************
**************************************************
********************

Harry went downstairs sleepily next morning,almost tripping over
Crookshanks,who was playing with a loose piece of thread.Mrs. Weasley
was already awake and was making breakfast.Harry yawned and sat
down on an empty seat.

"What would you like dear?Tea or water?" Mrs. Weasley asked Harry.

"Tea would be great.Thank you." Harry,yawning again,said.

Mrs. Weasley took a cup,poured some tea in,and gave it to Harry.Mrs.
Weasley went back to work,making breakfast.Harry took a sip put the
cup down.Harryfelt miserable as usual.

Firstly,he lost his parents,then Sirius,and now Dumbledore.Harry wouldn't
imagine what he would do if he lost one of his friends.As Harry was
drowned in thought,the table was being filled with the Weasley family,
along with Lupin,Mr. Lovegood,Luna Lovegood,and Hermione.

"Good morning,Harry." Luna,in her dreamy voice,greeted Harry.

Harry got out of his thoughts and smiled.In a few minutes the whole
kitchen was filled with noise of people talking and laughing.The noisiness
was interrupted by a loud knock.Mr. Weasley,a bit surprised,got up to
answer the door.Mr. Weasley opened the door.Mad-Eye Moody was standing
in the doorway,covered in sweat.

"Dementors."Mad-Eye Moody grunted."A whole city under attack."

Everybody,all anxious,got up.

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Well,that's chapter 2. stick out tongue


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