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Dreams of our father.
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Dreams of our father.

As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.


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As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.


Thats some preety deep stuff i wont lie it gets you thinking, again another great poem look forward to more of your stuff.


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Aww I agree it's pretty deep damn u can right my stuff sux compared 2 urs mines the one that says A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal

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Aww I agree it's pretty deep damn u can right my stuff sux compared 2 urs mines the one that says A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal


Nah i thought you poem was amazing i loved it.


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As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.


That is niiiiice. yes


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Nah i thought you poem was amazing i loved it.

That stuff is nuttin compared 2 urs the only poem I like of mine now is the one I wrote thats on pg 5

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That stuff is nuttin compared 2 urs the only poem I like of mine now is the one I wrote thats on pg 5


Your compliments are received thank you so much, i personally think you have a lot of talent and i enjoy reading your stuff.


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thx same 2 u

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