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The Dark Knight
Gender: Male Location: Mors ultima ratio |
DeathReapers select poems
Fallen Skies
The sky is falling.
a raging storm on the rampage
so much damage its appalling.
The earth weeps as the thunder strikes
people falling left and right
for man can not stand against its terrible might.
Sun Rise
Life giving light
really is an awesome sight
its hue falls upon white colored walls
its light absorbing the darkness of the halls.
When it shines the flowers bloom
Washing away all the gloom
This is the power of the Rising Sun
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Venienti occurrite morbo
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Apr 21st, 2007 02:06 AM |
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IM_HALF_DEAD06
Junior Member
Gender: Male Location: D-Town Tx |
ummmmmmmmmm,i like panocha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Apr 22nd, 2007 01:51 PM |
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*=DeathReaperr'
The Dark Knight
Gender: Male Location: Mors ultima ratio |
With every undignified step i weep
Feeling like dirt that one must sweep
I walk alone in this torrid earth
With Feelings of regret and a dearth of mirth
My heart is empty now its time to search for something to fullfill it
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Venienti occurrite morbo
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May 8th, 2007 04:16 AM |
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chillmeistergen
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Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom Account Restricted |
Sort of ok, but the rhymes are extremely basic and lack imagination.
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May 8th, 2007 03:42 PM |
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i dislike basic rhymes (not that I'm accusing you of this). It's as though you think of the word you're going to rhyme, before you've thought of the rest of the line.
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May 11th, 2007 09:58 AM |
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