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Jack Diavolo
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Location: United States

Jacks poems

ive been writing poetry for a few years but its never been something i decided to pursue

but heres a couple ive just had or just written.

heres an old one.

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I've got a small confession
These butterflies wont quit
In your hand, Mine is woven
It's funny how they fit.

Your heart it beats in tune with mine
A dark enchanted flow
I feel your heart right next to mine
It's funny how they glow.

I suppose we call this love
A feeling that I miss
So light my my heart, that with a start
It stops within your kiss.


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Lara
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wow, this one is very sweet I like it. it flows well and is simple. the message is clear and tbvh its made my heart go all funny so its great.

very nice, jack. very nice indeed


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