Gender: Female Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy
Watching you as you sleep,
Feeling your skin against mine,
I am absolved,
I am revived.
What I gave so willingly the first time round,
Now I see, was foolish.
It was acknowledged and abused.
I was manipulated and used.
Now here with you I feel so much more!
Your deserving of what I have to give.
You give so much yourself,
And of that I'm unworthy.
In the darkness, tucked in your embrase,
I know I'm here in the right place.
And if I get lost I know you'll find me,
There is no one else I'd want to be with.
Gender: Female Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy
Back to the earth,
Down I slump.
An abused and battered mess,
Bruised and bitter, sobbing again.
The sinking feeling my mistress.
I feel the darkness surrounding me,
Closing me in.
It calls me out, withdrawing me,
Reminding me, I've always been less.
And with this affirmation I know she walks again.
Lonely, black and frozen.
Blue in mind and heart.
So fulfilled with the company of dispare,
sickend to the pitt.
Stomach churns and nightmares stir,
The nonsense in her head.
In with the tide that just keeps coming,
Just letting it roll over head.
No urge to fight, to swim for air.
Closed eyes calling upon death.
its good, i like your style, it feels different.
im sorry i cant concentrate right now, i felt i owed you, but i am not being very helpful. perhaps in the near future i could come back.
Gender: Female Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy
aw thankyou, yeah I kow it kinda sucks but I havent written for so long, I need to ease myself back into it slowly if you know what I mean
I have another thread here too, its old but I've posted loads there. I stopped posting there as it has a rep for being very morbid so if you're in the mood for that sort of thing feel free to browse http://www.killermovies.com/forums/f83/t330335.html
Gender: Female Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy
I'm working on a few at the moment but I'm not sure what the outcome will be and I'm O-so not impressed with myself at the moment so I apologise, for me even these are bad!!!
In your poem's I see truth,
As if the very foundations of life,
Could be so easily described.
In you words I find your emotions,
The way you feel when you put to words,
The wrongness of ur world.
I understand this world we live in,
I can see it, hear it, smell it, fear it, hide from it,
Nothing but dark corners of dark street.
Suffering and misery,
Our world is lost,
Gone; its dark bloody trail but a wishfully fogotten memory.
How in our short time on this Earth we have brought the planet to destruction,
What with drugs, pollution, lies, dispear, deciet, jealously,
All things must come to an end.
So if I say good night,
It will mean my parting from this world,
I leave behind this message.
Inspiried by your poems, Lara.
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A long time have I waited for this, my little green friend!
Gender: Female Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy
Wow, thankyou Reaper
Take these thoughts,
Break them down.
Still the equation,
Equals a frown.
Nothing more,
Nothing less.
What is this before you?
A wretched mess!
Take me away,
Bring me peace.
A holiday of sorts,
Some temporary release.
Give me some silence,
Deafen my ears.
Bind my eyes,
Wind back the years.
Back to the begining.
Where it all began,
When you should have explained to me,
This life and its horrid plan.
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