((kk)) the hississ claws slashed del as 2 more distracted him. he screamed out in pain and fell to the ground. he used force blast to shove the three away. he stood trembling and limped to the elevator, cutting down a lanvarok.
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Glenn watched his master and several other use the heal power on the poor Selkath. He wanted to ask, but he knew his master wouldn't pay attention right now.
He then turned down to the Shadowlands. He noticed there were still lightsabers shining in the darkness... the he turned to see the ropes holding the lift. They were moving.
"Someone else is coming up!" He shouted, making sure everyone listened.
del sputtered and coughed up blood as the lift carried him up. he fell to the floor and blood poured from the gash. the lift reached the top and he groaned at the sudden stop. david ran up and tried to drag his master off of the lift. "i need help!"
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Master Jel-Kor, who was still treating the Selkath, turned around to see Del.
"Oh, crap... not another one," He said. "Alright, you, you... and you, go help him!" He ordered two of the Padawans who were aiding him with Coryn, and another one, who he knew had the ability to heal, as well. "I'll take care of Coryn myself,"
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Rei jumped to her feet and ran to help David with his master. "My god what's happening down there?!" She lifted Del's feet and helped to carry him from the lift. "Get soem water from my pack David. We need to keep him awake until someone who knows how to heal can help." She ripped part of her robe off and waited for David to bring her the bottle of water.
david and the others dragged del off of the lift. "your gonna be ok, dont worry." tears bordered davids eyes as he tried to heal. "come on... come on... come on!.." but he couldnt. david had never been good at healing. "COME ON!" all of a sudden, force power surged out of davids hands. he watched as the glowing energy rippelled from his hands, and then...... nothing. david realised he had been imagining things. only a second had passed since he had tried healing his master. someone had pushed him away and called him useless. he looked at his master.
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del felt the force trying to heal him. he turned and faced the padawans. "no... it is... usele.. usele-" he went limp. jedi night, del gona, was dead.
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At the bottom of the massive crevice was a metal walkway. It extened on until an openeing down at the end.
"Come on, Coryn!" Mety yelled, and they both swam on into a great opening, with open ocean as far as the eye could see. But just to the left was a factory...
"It's the underwater Kolto facility! From the Jedi Civil War!" Mety exclaimed, and swam over, followed by Coryn.
An old computer panel sat in front of two containers, both containing liquids. The one of the left was cracked.
"I wonder if it works..." Mety pressed a button, and the panel emitted 'Warning! Tank one damaged, comencing emergency overload procedures.'
"Um... Mety, what does tha-" Coryn was inturrupted by a loud mechanical grinding, and the tank on the left was emptied, and the tank on the right began to fill rapidly.
"Mety, I think we should go!" Coryn yelled, sensing something was wrong.
"Calm down, tadpole, it's just making sure nothing goes wrong."
The tank at the right had filled, and for a moment, nothing happened.
"See. Told you!"
And then the tank gurgled, clanked, and a huge explosion occured, causing both Mety and Coryn to be sent rocketing backwards. Chemicals shot out every which way, and when Coryn got his bearings and looked back at the tank, he was hit in the eyes by something that burnt, and smelt like rotting fish.
Mety yelled, and Coryn started thrashing and flailing, and he couldn't get his eyes open... It was all so bad...
Coryn jerked awake, his Force Vision returning, and sat up screaming.
"NO! METY HELP ME! I'M BLIND! BLIND!" Coryn thrashed out of Jel-Kor's reach, and took off down the Wookiee's tree-built pathway, but mistook the railing for a continuing path in his madness, and flipped over the side, plummeting to the ground below.
Jel-Kor tried to get him before he fell, but it was too late. He looked back at the Padawans. They were in a shocked state. *Everything's just going horrible...* He thought.
He looked back at the darkness of the Shadowlands and noticed his friends had already killed the remaining dragons and were heading towards the lift.
"Stay here, all of you," He ordered the Padawans. "I'll be back in a few minutes." He said, and then he tapped the button on the wooden machine and started heading down once more.
It was dark all around. Images of the past swirled around, distorted images of Hssiss, Mety, Jel-Kor...
But all that was pushed out by one, large, growing image. Coryn, garbed in a dark cloak, standing on the bodies of fallen Jedi in the deserts of Korriban.
Korriban... Is this really it, am I free from the Order?
Coryn scrambled to his feet, his Force Vision returning to it's normal state, and he could feel the last of the Dark Side Poison leaving his body.
I have to get out of here...
Coryn found he was in one of the Dark Side spots he'd seen above, and quickly glanced around, and then looked up.
The platform he'd fallen off of was nowhere to be seen... It wasn't that far up, and it wasn't that dark out. Coryn looked down at the ground, and saw footprints leading towards him, and a drag mark containing some of Coryn's Force Essence-that now held a considerable shade of red- stopping right at his feet. The footprints continued past Coryn, and all the way deep into the forest.
"It's like someone got tired of carrying me..."
Coryn followed the footprints for a while, and found that they led to a small hut in the middle of the dark woods. The hut was lit from the inside, and Coryn could hear rusting. He reached for his saber, only to find that it was gone. Where would it have gone? Gathering his senses, Coryn burst into the hut, to find a lone wookiee sitting at a small table, who lept up in suprise.
"Rnnnng! What are you doing here, Jedi? Why do you intrude in my home?"
"I should ask you why you drug me away from the platform, and stole my weapon!" Coryn yelled, fuming, and pointed at the saber hilt on the table.
Anger... This is an emotion I haven't felt in years! It feels great, to feel so... Mad.
"I-... I just wanted something that might help me get out of the Shadowlands! If I played the part of a Jedi, it might buy me a ticket on a freighter, or something like it." The wookiee looked scared, but slightly crazed, as if this was his last hope, and didn't want Coryn to take it.
This thing stole from me, and left me in the forest to die!
"Sorry, but you've left me to die in the wilderness... Time to return the favor."
With a very evil, cynical smirk, Coryn stuck his hand out and the hilt flew into his hand.
The Mad-Claw roared.
The Selkath laughed.
The Mad-Claw swung his claws.
The Blade ignited, cutting off the arm of the Wookiee, and with another graceful motion, the Wookiee's head slid off of the tall shoulders.
For minutes, Coryn basked in the wonderance of murder... The great feeling swept over the Selkath, as if bathing in the Wookiee's blood.
Finally, Coryn silently gathered himself together, and followed his dragged path back to where he'd fallen, but kept to the shadows. He traces his steps around the perimeter to where the Jedi faught the Hssiss, and found the Hssiss slain. Jumping behind a tree, he stalked his way back over to a mound, and began stalking the Jedi silently, waiting to see what would happen.
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Jel-Kor had already stepped down in the Shadowlands. The Jedi were looking at him, disoriented.
"What happened?" They asked, with a confused look in their faces.
The Jedi Master was silent for a few seconds.
"Master Del is dead... the Hssiss sliced his claws through his throat. He had no chance..."
The eyes of his fellow Jedi widened; some jaws dropped. But before they were able to answer back, he continued.
"And Master Coryn ran away. I was trying to heal his wounds, and I was succesful, but suddenly he jumped up, screaming. He said something about someone called Mety... my guess, a fellow Selkath... and about his blindness. Then, he ran off to the lift and fell. His body is nowhere to be found."
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~ a lanvarok is a sith (species) weapon that shoots discs, not a creature~ "ohh ya this i like od times" coran taughted jacen and disengaged the sabers
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Jel-Kor had to explain everything to the Padawans. They had to know. He stepped on the lift and awaited for his fellow masters to join him. He tapped the button and the wooden machine started to move. There was an uncomfortable silence as the lift took the Jedi to the surface. He knew the mission had started as a complete failure. One dead master, another gone mad. What could be worse?
"Padawans... you know Master Del is dead, and you deserve and explanation. Master Del was killed by a fierce creature called Hssiss. We sensed dark side energy nearby, once we reached the Shadowlands. We decided to head there and check it out. When we got there, we saw nothing, but still felt the energy boiling. Suddenly, seven Hssiss appeared out of thin air and attacked us. Somehow, the Hssiss are able to conceal themselves, but none of us knew they could. They were both injured; sliced through by the dragons' claws: Master Coryn and Master Del. One is dead, and the other has gone mad. He is alive, somewhere down there. It has been a terrible start for us, I know. But our mission still stands: find and eliminate the Terentatek hidden in the Shadowlands. And we will not make the same mistake twice. We will take you down there with us. There's no sense in leaving you up here," He explained, with a serious look on his face. He meant it. "Now, let's not waste any more time. Let's head down there and show those beasts what we are made of."
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lets see if i can do this without getting the cold shoulder again.))
Reki nodded and started towards the lift. "Yes Master Jel-Kor... Thank you for the explanation." She stepped in cautiously, avoiding the blood on the floor, and waited for the others to step in as well. She put her hand on the butt of her saber. 'I wont end up like them... I'm not going to die.'
"you scare even me sometimes reki" juno said stepping on with her friend. jacen and corran stayed down in the shadowlands infront of the elavtor waiting....
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a lanvarok is a sith (species) weapon that shoots discs, not a creature~ "ohh ya this i like od times" coran taughted jacen and disengaged the sabers
