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An Untitled Fantasy Prelude

The sound of rain dropping to the weathered pavement from the black sky could be heard for miles. Lightning flashed in the distance, with thunder following seconds later. The landscape was barren, without any trees, without any buildings or any sense that there should be something standing above the ground. Structures that can only be described as large hundred-foot tall spears were erected every so often around the landscape; electricity raged from their tips toward the heavens. Other than the large spears that reached for the sky, only pavement remained; one single road that stretched both forward and backward as far as the eye could see, the ground otherwise covered in black sand. The pavement’s color made it hard to distinguish from the skyline, forever tarnished with soot. Only one being dared to contrast with the flatness.
This man stood about six feet tall, drenched a black cloak. The cloak had made best friends with the ground; it did not drag, but there was almost no space between the cloak’s end and the ground below it. Six black buttons lined the front of the cloak, sealing its wearer inside. His feet could not be seen, making the figure look like it had the ability to hover above the ground. His arms hung from the shoulders, long tubes of cloth. His hands could not be seen, only the sleeves. And his head was enveloped in the blackness of the cloak as well; a hood came above and over his head, stopping only above what one could assume was the man’s eyeline, so he may see. With no significant light source in sight, the hood’s inside was blackened as well.
He walked down the everlasting road in impossible silence. The figure was in a meditative state, clearly thinking. The rain rolled down the cloak, unable to moisten it with its dampness, and quietly trickled to the pavement. Another light show erupted in front of the man, and thunder, this time following closer. He paused for a moment, pausing his journey westward. The pitter-patter of the rain continued to fall, making black puddles in the sand, and making the road slick to continue walking on. A minute passed, and the cloaked figure stood still. The sound of the rain was less constant, it sounded like the rain was beginning to let up. The man brought his head to look at the sky. The charcoal sky was beginning to brighten to a dull gray. The storm seemed to be over as the rain stopped. Then, everything went black. No sky, no ground, no cloak could be seen.
A bolt of lightning pierced the air, meeting with the pavement feet in front of the cloak. The landscape was lit for a split second. The man looked at where the bolt struck and saw encapsulated in the electricity a figure with silver hair. Another crack could be heard as a bolt destroyed the pavement behind the man. He swerved as quick as he could to try and see the figure again, but as lightning is, it was gone. He was now breathing heavily, unknowing of what to expect next in the pitch black. But before he had any chance for his mind to wander further, he heard above him an incredible crackle as a bolt of lightning streamed down from the sky directly to the spot he was standing on.
The man in the black cloak was launched backwards, stunned and in a daze. He tried to see his attacker, but could not muster the energy to move his head as he was flying away from the source of the lightning. He was startled when he hit the ground, as he could not see where it was, and thus could not judge when he was finished with his flight. He slid for another twenty or so feet before he slowly came to a stop.
The black-cloaked figure could not move; he was incapacitated from the electrical surge that went through his body. A minute passed, and his attacker had not come to finish him. He finally had the strength to lift his neck from its parallel position with the ground to look forward. It was no use; the only thing to be seen was blackness. It was as if someone shut the world’s light off with the flick of a switch.
The mysterious man attempted to stand up. He rolled onto his knees, and brought his left foot to meet the ground. Standing, wounded, the man waited. Then the faintest bit of light came from above. It looked like a star, glowing magnificent in the sky. But stars did not leave streaks in the sky, or move this fast. The light grew brighter and larger, and as it was about to hit him, the man brought his shoulder back, making his hand a fist inside his cloak, and he brought it down with all of his might to the ground, where he punched a hole at least half a foot deep into the pavement.
A ripple in the air made a dome shape around the man, encompassing him in a protective bubble of energy. The lightning rammed into it, electricity spraying in every direction as it pummeled the dome’s north pole. The cloaked figure looked up and for a moment thought that he saw what he had only seen in a dream – blue sky. But this was not sky; he was staring into the two sky-blue eyes of his attacker. She was bathed electricity, as if it was her clothing. Their eyes were locked in an understanding of mutual hate. There was no reason to this hate, not yet. The landscape was brighter than it had been in many years now. The electricity woman jumped backward off the shield and shot her arms outwards, bolts of energy shooting in every direction from her fingertips. The hooded man stood up, the shield evaporating.
Two things happened at the same time. The woman brought her outstretched hands together in a clap, shooting bolts of pure energy straight at the man. The man in the black cloak reached for one of the buttons on the front of his cloak and snapped it off. He brought his arm back, and a purple energy emanated from his hand. As his arm came forward, a purple sphere of energy with a black core left his hand; growing larger the more distance it traveled.
The purple and white energy met in the exact middle of the two figures. A bright explosion of light emanated from the clash, blinding temporarily both of the figures. Then the bright white quickly faded to a deep purple as the orb of energy swallowed the electricity, only further intensifying the sphere’s size. Before the woman could move, the ball of sheer power greeted her, electrifying and burning her, then throwing her straight backwards. Then she hit something, and stopped suddenly. It felt as if someone erected a brick wall in the middle of the road; she was traveling straight backwards. It was dark now, only the electricity that encompassed her body gave any light, and even that was dimmer than before. She felt two hands, one on each of her shoulders. They spun her around in place, in an about-face. She stared up to see the cloaked man, there, right in front of her. It had to be at least a thousand feet she had traveled, probably more. And he had moved faster than her.
She looked up into the black hole, where his face should have been. Her gaze only met blackness. Still in his grasp, she attempted to bring her right hand, charging a ball of electricity in the palm of her hand, above her waist to try and get one shot at him. She screamed as she let the ball go, careening at his head. It was deflected by the black hole, but not before a flash lit up the inside of his hood for a brief second. She saw a pair of golden eyes staring at her, and a frown of disgust. Her sky blue eyes widened when she saw what was revealed to her. Then she let out a slight whimper of fear.
“Stupid *****,” the man’s deep, bass voice escaped from the hood. His right elbow arched back, a transparent purple blade appearing at the end. It slid down his arm toward where his hand should be, and with his left arm, he grasped the woman by her lower neck, and the purple blade of energy sliced her throat. She crumpled to the ground, lifeless, her sky-blue eyes forever staring toward the charcoal sky. The hooded man turned around, and continued walking.


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The black cloak moved onward. The man walked in silence, lightning still littering the sky, bringing the barren landscape to life for a split second, and then darkening once again. He walked for days, without food or water, without rest or sleep. On the third day after his encounter with the woman with the sky blue eyes, he finally began to see what he was walking all this way to get to.
A massive castle with crooked protruding towers from every side lay in front of him. The only thing that made it stand out from the blackened sky was the gleam it gave off when lightning hit the rods that surrounded the castle. The rods remained electrified after the lightning hit, and small strands of electricity could be seen jumping from rod to rod; there wasn’t two inches around the castle that didn’t have a rod. The seemingly impenetrable fortress stood in the middle of the road.
The man raised a hooded arm, perpendicular with the ground. Then, he muttered,
“Incanium arsona penevare!” he bellowed, making the world seemingly shake. The protective rods that surrounded the castle looked like marionettes that had been freed of their strings, dropping downward to the earth. Before they could make contact with the ground however, they burst into flames and joined the blackened sand as dust.
The man proceeded forward, coming to what could only have been the entrance to the castle. He extended his arm again, but this time his hand emerged, flesh meeting with what felt like hardened magma. A blue line of light trickled from his thumb, inching its way up the castle to the apex of the door. A low rumble could be heard as the black doors slowly retreated into yet more blackness. The man could not see inside, but he entered all the same.
His footsteps echoed on the hard floor as he advanced inside the structure. From the reverberations, it was obvious that the hallway he was in was empty of any furnishings. Continuing forward, his senses began to warn him of a presence that was inside the building. He ignored them, knowing full well of what he was diving into.
The echoes changed; now he was inside a much larger room. The doors that he should have had to open were already open, as he realized that he already passed through the doorway without having to unlock them. This was not going as planned anymore. First, an attacker that was not planned on. Not entirely unexpected, but certainly an unwelcome hindrance. But how could these doors be open? Nobody had set foot in here for decades.
As he was contemplating the suspiciousness of the doors, he heard air move above him. He stopped walking and listened. Silence. There was nothing moving in the building. He must be imagining things; that woman must have hit him harder than he thought previously. But he was not going to take any chances this time. Not like the last time he was here.
He stood there for near an hour, waiting for something to attack him, some invisible force to seize his throat, or even have the woman who tamed the lightning return to life somehow, punishing him for the pain he inflicted upon her in the desert. Although he grew impatient of waiting, he knew better than to ignore what he had heard, rethinking it over. He was not imagining anything. Then a cold tear of sweat trickled down the back of his neck, making its way down his back. His eyes widened and his face became as serious as his muscles could allow him. He knew now.
“I’m glad you’ve finally figured it out!” roared a voice from deep within the darkness. Instantly, the darkness became light. The walls were lined with cobalt, littering the room with the reflective silver. As the black hooded man looked around, he heard the same noise as before from the ceiling. He looked up and saw a shirtless man with white hair descending slowly. The most noticeable feature of the newcomer was that he had the wings of an angel, white feathers and all. They flapped slowly, protruding from his back. The hooded man was in disbelief at what he was seeing. He instantly dropped to his knees, sprawling his arms on the floor, with his head pressed against the ground.
“Nefeous,” the angel mused, “not quite the greeting that I was expecting.” He was on the ground now; his voice was very close to Nefeous. “Rise, old friend.”
Nefeous rose, slowly. He drew the hood that was covering his face back behind his head, and looked at the winged man with his eyes of gold. The black pupils made his stare look menacing at all times. All times, except this. Fear replaced the menace, the danger. He slowly brought his eyes to meet the gaze of the being in front of him.
“Is that really you, Altima?” He sounded far more confident than he looked. “How did you escape? Where are the others?” Altima turned his back on Nefeous, walking away from him now.
“We were overwhelmed,” he began, “with creatures that I can only guess were from the Abyss. Both Terime and Roxim fought by my side until the end. Somehow, we were not as strong; our powers were limited. I wasn’t really sure what happened, until very recently.” He stopped walking, and turned his head so he could see Nefeous. His green eye stared him down, and Nefeous knew. He knew that Altima knew.
“You opened the Gates of the Abyss, and gave the creatures a spell to suppress our magic. I don’t know how I could have been so stupid as to trust you, of all people.” Altima continued. “Your sorcery cost us our lives. All of our lives. And now, you come to this place, this sanctum, for what? To kill me again? When you caught wind that not all of the Micite were killed in battle, you had to come finish the job.” Nefeous’s jaw dropped. “Oh yes, Nefeous, you can’t hide any more secrets from me. Your days of deceiving me are over.”
There was nothing that Nefeous could say. Somehow, Altima knew everything. Who could have told him? Who had he even told?
“Nobody had to tell me. I can see into that pathetic meatsack that you call a mind.”
“Then why don’t you just kill me now?!” Nefeous cried. “Why are you telling me all of this? If you’re indeed as all-knowing as you think you are, then you must know that it was not my choice! Do not blame this all on me. I may be at fault for the deaths of all your kind, but I am not the cause of this.”
“Yes, I know,” Altima resigned, “and that is why I won’t kill you yet.” As Altima spoke these words, Nefeous began to sprint for the door. Altima let him run all the way to the doorway that would bring him to the desert. As Nefeous was about to escape, nearly out of breath already, Altima snapped his fingers, and Nefeous disappeared in a puff of black smoke.


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