this really is a tough one,
+ Nice choice of Sprite
+ Great Colours and Background
- there is an awful lot going on, on the right hand side, but nothing on the left, it seems a little odd on the left to me.
- not a fan of the text.
overall a good job for your first sprite.
+ Great Flow
+ Great Colours, they go well,
+ like the border
- it's a little boring, and by that I mean the sprite looks dead, there is no character to it, with some nice lighting effects you could have brought it alive.
- I struggled to read the "Lt Valerian" text
this is a tough one, because it is both your first sprite sigs, I have to base it on what I think is nicer and easier on the eyes,
The Sig I think I would be most happy to wear would be...
once again, Lt Valerian
overall a great sig, very elegant although a little bland.