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This isn't perfect.
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LDHZenkai
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Love This isn't perfect.

I think this still needs quite a bit of work ... but it's a rough draft.
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Why is it the love that once made us is killing me right now?
My soul keeps on breaking, my hands wont stop shakin,
and I feel like theres nothing I can do.

So i'm sittin here lonely, waiting not knowing,
When you'll come back to me.
My heart is still breakin', my mind is still racin',
And I don't know what I should do.

The times we had,
The good and the bad,
Made me who I am today.
But now you're not here, and I'm stuck in fear,
With no vision of what the future might bring.

So i'm sittin here lonely, waiting not knowing,
When you'll come back to me.
My heart is still breakin', my mind is still racin',
And I don't know what I should do.

Can you tell me my love,
What happened to us?
That drove you away from me.

Because I'm sittin here lonely, waiting not knowing,
When you'll come back to me.
My heart is still breakin', my mind is still racin',
And I don't know what I should do.

Oh tell me what I should do....
Please dear tell me what I can do....


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Try to stick to one thread for your poetry.


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