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REXXXX
Networking
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I hate writing poems, but I can stand reading them.
Good stuff peeps.
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May 23rd, 2003 03:39 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Thanks
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May 23rd, 2003 03:39 AM |
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REXXXX
Networking
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Location: San Diego Moderator |
Your welcome. 
At first I thought this was going to be a "Stories I've written" thread, but it's poems and songs.
Why doesn't anyone write stories!?
*goes insane*
Oh wait...Lauren writes stories...
*smiles and realizes something*
But she's not here...
*goes even more insane than the first time*
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May 23rd, 2003 03:46 AM |
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Ushgarak
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Hey, *I* write stories Rex! Remember?
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May 23rd, 2003 10:21 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
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Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
Gordon, I have been writing for nearly 8 years. I didnt mean to patronise you, I was just offering some tips! not just for you, but for every one here.
no offence was intended.
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May 23rd, 2003 10:44 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
Gender: Unspecified
Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
I write stories too but there to long to type and some of my stories or not complete.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:02 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
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Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
I tried story writing and it went really wrong so I stick with what I know.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:04 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
The Watcher
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Let us say I have been writing far longer than you Lara and have more practical experience in writing.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:06 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
Yeah I tried writing song lyrics but it went terriblely wrong and so I converted it into a poem.Story writing hard because when your on page 12 and you decide to go back and change something on page 4 veerything after has to be changed to fit it.But I normally do poems.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:08 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
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Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
can we stop the "I'm better than you" crap, cause thats not what I intended. I'm just good with words and getting them down on paper thats all, and I'm sure some of your stuff is better than mine. so, peace? *offers hand*
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May 23rd, 2003 11:10 AM |
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Ushgarak
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Aww, it was just getting interesting...
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"You've never had any TINY bit of sex, have you?"
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May 23rd, 2003 11:11 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
Well were all good at something guys some better then otherrs.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:13 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
But when it comes to poems even if someone else doesn't think it's right or it makes no sense to someone else all that matters is that the person writing it understands for that should be he's only concern.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:17 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
Gender: Female
Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
idd! some excell where others flounder.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:17 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
The Watcher
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Amen.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:18 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
I'm trying to find another poem so everyone relaxes even though my poems aren't relaxing anyone of you got anything also to share.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:24 AM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
Gender: Unspecified
Location: "In Kevin Smith Base |
Hey guys got anything else to share I'll try to look for a poem in my computer or think of one wrtie now.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:26 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
The Watcher
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No I ain't offended Lara.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:34 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
Gender: Female
Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
ok, quick on the spot creation:
Realisation Dawning
the morning sunlight drenches my skin
for one second I forget about my kin.
I wipe my eyes,
then realise that it was all a dream.
the taps running!
some ones awake.
the space next to me is empty,
like it always has been.
the questions remain,
who will take away my pain?
who will fill the emptiness I feel?
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be who you are not what they want you to be!
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May 23rd, 2003 11:36 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Very nice Lara. I would post some more of my own but somehow I don't think I can take any more criticism at the moment.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:39 AM |
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