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Crisis
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ok then here is the next part:

The station was quite as Morpheus and Lance sat waiting for their train. They stood up as the train slowly pulled into the station. Morpheus walked to the front carriage and Lance went to the back. Lance looked around and saw that the carriage was empty, the train was about half way to the station that lance was heading for. He looked up as he heard the sound of the electric doors connecting the carriages together open. An agent walked in, and sat in front of Lance
“You may have escaped me at the school but here and now is when you die”
“I don’t think so” lance pulled out an Uzi and put it to the agents head. Bullets came whizzing out. Lance dropped the gun in horror as not a single bullet hit the agent. The agent started throwing punches at Lance, he just blocked every punch. Lance looked up than jumped though the roof, the agent did the same. They kept on fighting, then the agent kicked lance, sending him flying. Lance looked up and saw a bridge coming, he then looked at the agent and smiled. He jump onto his feet and ran towards the agent and jumped, he jumped over the agent and over the bridge the agent turned round and saw the bridge, he was knocked off the train as he hit the bridge.

Lance smiled, he turned back round and jumped back as another agent stood there, the agent pulled out his gun and pointed at Lance. Lance ran forward and kicked the gun out of the agent’s hand. The agent looked at his hand and then pulled another gun out of his jacket, and grabbed Lance by the throat. The agent hanged Lance over the side of the train “Goodbye Mr.Reton”. Lance looked down the track and saw another train coming, the same way, but faster. Lance looked back at the agent. Lance kicked him and the stomach and then did a back flip, right off of the train, he was in mid-air, he started falling. Suddenly his feet came into contact with the other train. He had timed it perfectly, doing a back flip off the agent and landing on to the other train. The agent jumped onto the train, Lance ran towards him bringing his fist back. He launched forward hitting the agent in the face. The agent flew backwards, off the train.


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we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!


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Alias Neo> this is some good stuff eek!

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Crisis
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thanks big grin


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Crisis
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here is the next part

Lance could see the station in the distance, getting closer and closer. He ran to the front of the train and looked through the driver’s window, no one was there.
Lance looked up at the station again, he could see people running for the exits as a small unit of swat members came into the station. He could see the platform, the track would end and then the platforms all join up. The train was going to crash.

The train had entered the station and was getting closer and closer to the end of the track. Lance pulled out two pistols, and stood waiting for the train to crash.
He could now see the end of the track. The train hit the end, lance was flung off the train glass shattered as an explosion filled the train. Lance flew through the air shooting down at the swat. He land, halve of the swat were dead. Lance ran up to the last swat and whacked his head with the end of his pistol. Lance ran out of the station and looked for the car, he pulled out his phone
“Link where is the car!”
“How did you get there so quick?”
“I got a faster train”
“The car is around the corner, it’s a white sports car”
Lance ran down the street and stood in amazement as he saw the car. Then he called link again
“Link did you ever consider that I’m only 14 and can’t drive!”
“Isn’t Morpheus with you?”
“No, he’s on a different train”
“Ok then, one driving course coming up”…….


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this is really good u should be a writer

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Crisis
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i'm thinking of sending the story to the Wachowski bros


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kewl!! u must!!!!!

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Crisis
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they could make it into a movie (day dreams)


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ohhhhh i should send my script laughing out loud

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Crisis
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(still day dreaming)


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me too lol

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Crisis
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rite now , as i speak i am writing the next part of the story


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kewl wink

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ok 1 we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!

2. how can you contact to wachowski bros. ive tried to contct them for months


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hello im waiting here


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Crisis
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quote:
Originally posted by Alias Neo
rite now , as i speak i am writing the next part of the story


READ!


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where is the next part


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Crisis
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Location: Kent, England

here it is:

Morpheus’s train slowly pulled into the station, he got out off the train and saw the blown up train on the other side of the station, “Lance”. Morpheus ran outside, he looked around for Lance. He jumped back when a sleek white sports car suddenly turned the corner and stopped in front of him.
“Get in!”
Morpheus opened the door and got in, the instant the door shut the car sped off.
“This is police car no.42, request immediate attendance, in pursuit of a white Porsche, with a licence plate reading ME9 9SL”
“We’ve got company” Lance shouted
Morpheus looked out of the car and saw a large number of police cars following them “Where are the weapons?”
Lance pointed to the back seat. Morpheus turned his head and saw pistols, machines guns, 2 grenade launchers and 2 LAW’s. A black car suddenly pulled up next to them. Lance looked at the car “Agent!” Morpheus reached into the back of the car, he grabbed hold of the grenade launcher and pointed out the car window. The agent’s jaw dropped as he saw morpheus point the grenade launcher at the car. There was a loud sound as the grenade launcher fired, then an even louder sound as the agent car exploded and screeched to a hold.
Lance steered left, into an industrial estate.
“Why did you drive into here?”
“Less chance of seeing an agen…” Lance faded off as he saw a huge truck drive up next to him with an agent in it. Lance saw a long line of boxes with a small gap down the middle, to small for the truck to drive down. The car sped up and drove into the narrow gap. Up ahead Lance could see where the line of boxes ended. All of a sudden the truck drive past the gap and stopped, blocking it off.
Lance picked up speed,
“Lance, what are you doing? Turn around, Lance!”
Lance wasn’t taking any notice. The car was getting closer to the truck.
“Duck!” Lance shouted out, Morpheus and Lance dropped down as low as they could. The car hit the truck, the top of the car came fly off with an ear-piercing screech. Lance and Morpheus got up again. The agent drove after them. Lance weaved in and out of the traffic.
“Why do you think he chose a truck?” Morpheus questioned.
“Look behind us”.
Morpheus turned his head and saw the truck driving through the traffic, crushing anything that got in its way.
Morpheus pulled out his phone “Link, how do we get to the building where trinity is held?”
“Keep on following this road until you come to the road that’s on the seafront, and then follow that road until you see the tallest building on the skyline, that is the building where trinity is held”
Link’s voice was silenced out by the sound of sirens. Morpheus reached into the back again and tried to find the biggest machine he could find.
“This is car no.42… oh shit” morpheus pointed the gun at the police cars and opened fire. The police cars all stop, mostly because most of them had been shot.
“This is car no. 14, cars no. 42, 34,67,45,37 and car no. 10 have been shot. Suspects are armed and dangerous. Set up road blocks and send in air units.
“There’s the seafront” Morpheus shouted out
Lance did a handbrake turn round the corner, the truck, the agent was driving skidded out of control and went over the wall, into the sea.

Up the road, ahead of Lance and morpheus, two roadblocks are being put in place. One in front of the of the lift bridge going over the river and another blocking the road next to the bridge. The river went into the sea, Lance would need to get over the bridge to get to the building.
“What’s that up a head?” Lance asked
“A roadblock”
a helicopter flew in behind them. Two machine guns came out of the sides
“STOP THE VEHICLE, AND STEP OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP!” a voice from the helicopter said. Morpheus picked up a LAW and fired, a rocket came flying out and hit the helicopter, destroying it instantly.
“Morpheus, fire the other law at that police car” Lance pointed at the middle car in the road block. The rocket flew down the road it, and hit the car, sending it fly across the road, clearing the road. The lift bridge started rising, a boat was coming.
“Lance, we are not going to make it”
Lance was not taking any notice again.
The car got faster and faster, now going over 100mph, the car sped past the road block, and drive up the bridge, the car was now off of the ground. In mid-air, flying over the ship. The car hit the ground again on the over side of the bridge.
“There’s the building!” Morpheus pointed to a tall dark building.
“This car isn’t going to last much longer” Lance exclaimed
“What?”
Lance pointed forward where the road did a 90 degrees turn and a huge building made of glass stood on the corner.
“Grab as many of the weapons as you can” Lance shouted
Lance and Morpheus stood up
“Get ready”
The car was about 1 metre away from the building, they both did a back flip off of the car and the same time, they landed and saw the car hit the building, glass flew every where as the car exploded.
They both walked over to the building. a huge sign spread across the front of the building say “The Eagles Skyscraper ”
They both walked in….

i'm not doing the next part till tomorrow, i need to rest after so much story writing


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what time


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