Samurai Fiction 2: The Incident at Rokkatsu Pass -OOC and Character Creation

Birth Name: Shinobi Katsosu
Adult Name: Shinobi
Other Names: Shadow blade
Gender:male
Age:20
Social Class: Swords man

Appearance Info
Hair color: Jet black
Eye color: Crimson red
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 150
Scars/Visible Flaws: He has a battle scar on his left cheek and has a stich on his left arm and a scar on his back
Disabilities: Has heart problems doesn't really happen very much

Weaponry: Masamune- Extreamly razor sharp katana that extands up to six feet similar to the battle ready samuri Masamune but longer and sharper and sword's blade is made out of special metal that cannot be broken also engraved with piture of dragon breathing fire.

Jutsu: His own Jutsu (What is that?)

Mental Description: He his silent doesn't usally talk but nice guy around the edges

History/Biography:He lived in a farm but one day his parents were killed by some evil samuris that attacked his farm he managed to escape but one of the Samuri shot him on the back with arrow. He fell to the river luckly someone managed to save him after he was 12 he set out on his own journey to his revenge. So far he has done good and saved people's lives and practiced with his Masamune but his fate calls him for more what awaits for him in the future?

Sample RP: Shinobi walked around the forest and he decided to take a rest by the river the river's cooling water refreashed Shinobi. Then he heard a crackling noise he grabbed his hilt of Masamune and slowly walked over to the sound. "Who's there!?" Shinobi yelled but no answer he walked over little more and slashed the bush he saw a kid crying "Oh great a kid..." Shinobi said and put his Masamune away. He went back to the side of the river and looked at the clear sky "......................" He was silent thinking about his past.

(He said dont post until he made the sheets for Jutsus and weapons! Sorry! n.n)

(( Awwww man...Great....I posted my charcter oh well.. what should I do with it?))

(Just wait, and copy and paste it after he has placed the other sheets.)

A warrior is not confined solely to the weapons he has trained with and the Jutsu he is skilled in. As many weapons have some similarities a warrior can adapt to whatever is at hand at only a slight penalty to his skill. If a man is Excellent in the use of a sword, he can pick up a Jo staff and use it quite well because they are similar. But there are still some differences, so his skill with a Jo would be Very Good instead of Excellent. He has suffered a 1 Level skill penalty. A Primary skill for using a weapon has no penalties, a secondary skill has a 1 Level penalty and a terciary skill has a 2 level skill penalty.
Next to the weapons name is a number, that's it's rarity number.
1 - Incredibly common, found almost everywhere, anyone was allowed to have it.
2 - Not allowed to be held by peasants.
3 - Only select groups knew how to use them. Very rare to see.
4 - A weapon only heard of in mythology.
5 - None knew of it's existence. These were usually ninja weapons.


Bo (Staff) - 1

At around six feet in length the Bo is made of either hardwood or bamboo and was a popular weapon for the peasantry that could not afford bladed weapons of great craft. With such size it's fighting style is characterized by long, sweeping blocks and strikes, powerful parries and the ability to defend against edged weapons by maintaining a safe distance and still being able to strike back.

Primary Skills: Bojutsu
Secondary Skills: Naginatajutsu, Sojutsu
Terciary Skills: Onojutsu


Bokken - 1

Usually between two and three feet in length the Bokken is mainly used by Samurai to practice sword techniques, however because it is made of hardwood in practice some restraint must be used to prevent serious injury. Though mainly used for practice kata, the Bokken has become a popular weapon for ninja. Though it cannot cut, the hard surface can quite easily break bones and cause serious head injuries and also has the advantages of being lighter than a sword and it is very hard to accidentaly cut oneself with a Bokken.

Primary Skills: Kenjutsu, Ninja Ken
Secondary Skills: Jo-jutsu


Chigiriki - 2

A two foot long stick made of either bamboo or hardwood with a two and a half foot weighted chain attached to the end, this weapon is the Japanese morningstar. The heavy weight on the end of the chain is often covered in spikes. If the inside of the Chigiriki has been left hollow the chain can be concealed inside and the weapon used as a mace.

Primary Skills: Chigirikijutsu
Secondary Skills: Kusarigamajutsu


Darts - 3

Darts were a staple weapon of the ninja, ideally suited for eliminating targets from short range using a poison tipped dart, or distracting an opponent with a relatively harmless but painful attack. Darts often had such fine points that they could be removed from a body without leaving a noticable mark. Female ninja would often use poisoned darts to pin up their hair and use them to stab a target at close range.

Primary Skills: Shurikenjutsu


Dotanuki - 3

This sword design was first developed by master swordsmith Dotanuki Kunikatsu. Made to slice through its target with a single cut, a sword of Dotanuki design is characterized by its thicker and heavier blade.

Primary Skills: Kenjutsu
Secondary Skills: Iaijutsu


Fukiya - 3

This blowgun was another useful weapon for the ninja as it was so versatile. Made from a hollow length of bamboo it could be used to fire poison darts and other small objects over a distance. As it made almost no noise at all the ninja was unlikely to be discovered. Also it's hollow shape and look made it resemble reeds, so a ninja could easily use it as a snorkel and remain underwater for hours without being detected.

Primary Skills: Fukiyajutsu


Hanbo - 1

At about the length of the forearm, this length of hardwood was very good for applying painful joint locks or adding extra venom to a strike. As it was much stronger than a forearm, it could be used to block attacks as well and even effect throws, although in this capacity it is not quite as effective as it's larger brothers the Bo and Jo staves, though it is far easier to conceal and use in a confined space.

Primary Skills: Hanbojutsu
Secondary Skills: Aikijutsu, Aikijujutsu


Jo - 1

This staff is of medium length, filling the size gap between the short Hanbo and the long Bo and as such it borrows hundreds of techniques from both weapons. From the Bo it takes it's powerful sweeping attacks and blocks, as well as the ability to block and strike in the same motion and from the Hanbo it takes it's many joint locks. But despite this the underlying technical approach to the Bo is taken from Kenjutsu. Many of the grips, strikes and stances are essential swordplay techniques, though it's blunt edges make it much more versatile than a katana.

Primary Skills: Jo-jutsu
Secondary Skills: Kenjutsu, Ninja Ken


Jutte - 2

With a steel shaft just under a foot in length the jutte has been designed purely for defense against swords and features a finger-width sword-trapper that runs parallel to the shaft. A common tool for police forces the Jutte can be used to quickly twist a sword out of the grip of a lesser swordsman as well as being useful for breaking fingers if someone were to throw a punch. Obviously the steel shaft can be used to strike powerful blows.

Primary Skills: Juttejutsu
Secondary Skills: Hanbojutsu, Ninja Ken


Kama - 1

Almost always used in pairs these weapons were quite formidable in the hands of a skilled user. Swung in various crescents and arcs and combined with a good forward momentum they could be used to deliver a flurry of devastating attacks. The small size of the weapon makes it easier to conceal and when used in pairs they are almost impossible to defend against with a single sword.

Primary Skills: Kobujutsu


Katana - 2

The sword that is almost as famous as the warrior that weilds it. The Katana is one of the most enduring symbols of the Samurai and is his principle weapon. The blade measures between two and three feet in length and the handle (tsuka) can measure anything between six and eighteen inches depending on the weilder's preference, a larger handle giving better balance to the sword. The highest quality of Katana are extremely expensive, but can cleave a fully armoured man in two and will retain a sharp edge for years, however such swords are almost never found outside the houses of master swordsmen or Daimyo.

Primary Skills: Kenjutsu
Secondary Skills: Jojutsu, Ninja Ken
Terciary Skills: Nodachijutsu


Kodachi - 2

A sword much like the wakizashi only a slight bit longer. The two are so similar that the two are usually misused in mistake for the other. Though their looks may be similar, their construction and waza (fighting style) are completely different. The Kodachi's length and speed give it a sleek and swift striking capability as well as precise and powerful parries.

Primary Skills: Kodachijutsu
Secondary Skills: Hanbojutsu, Wakizashajutsu
Terciary Skills: Kenjutsu

Yumi - 2

The original weapon of the Samurai, the Yumi is likely the most powerful bow in the world. The best are made from wood and bamboo lacquered together and they usually measure around half a metre more than their user. Their power is measured by the number of men required to string the bow, with the average bow taking three men. While their power is great, the average bow does not fare well against armor.

Primary Skill: Kyujutsu
Secondary Skill: Hankyujutsu


Zanbatou - 3.5

An incredibly large and unwieldly weapon. It was a large slab of metal, sharpeded to be like a large triangle. This weapon was used in war and often required two men to manage. However, to it's good side, this weapon could cleave through whole horses in a single slice.

Primary Skill: ???
Secondary Skill: Nodachijutsu
Terciary Skill: Naginatajutsu

(I will read over this tomorrow and post my character. Bye!)

Originally posted by At god
Birth Name: Shinobi Katsosu
Adult Name: Shinobi
Other Names: Shadow blade
Gender:male
Age:20
Social Class: Swords man

Appearance Info
Hair color: Jet black
Eye color: Crimson red
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 150
Scars/Visible Flaws: He has a battle scar on his left cheek and has a stich on his left arm and a scar on his back
Disabilities: Has heart problems doesn't really happen very much

Weaponry: Masamune- Extreamly razor sharp katana that extands up to six feet similar to the battle ready samuri Masamune but longer and sharper and sword's blade is made out of special metal that cannot be broken also engraved with piture of dragon breathing fire.

Jutsu: His own Jutsu (What is that?)

Mental Description: He his silent doesn't usally talk but nice guy around the edges

History/Biography:He lived in a farm but one day his parents were killed by some evil samuris that attacked his farm he managed to escape but one of the Samuri shot him on the back with arrow. He fell to the river luckly someone managed to save him after he was 12 he set out on his own journey to his revenge. So far he has done good and saved people's lives and practiced with his Masamune but his fate calls him for more what awaits for him in the future?

Sample RP: Shinobi walked around the forest and he decided to take a rest by the river the river's cooling water refreashed Shinobi. Then he heard a crackling noise he grabbed his hilt of Masamune and slowly walked over to the sound. "Who's there!?" Shinobi yelled but no answer he walked over little more and slashed the bush he saw a kid crying "Oh great a kid..." Shinobi said and put his Masamune away. He went back to the side of the river and looked at the clear sky "......................" He was silent thinking about his past. Oh god... not you... and he said mature RPers...

Birth Name: Kunatokama, Junichi
Adult Name: Hitoshi, Jinn
Other Names: Night Dragon
Gender: Male
Age: 38
Social Class: Samurai

Appearance Info
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Grey
Height: 5"5
Weight: 270
Scars/Visible Flaws: Slight limp on his left leg, large scar across it.
Disabilities: Slightly older and therefore slower than most.

Weaponry: Katana strapped across back, carries a bo staff.
Jutsu: Kenjutsu, iaijutsu, bojutsu
Mental Description: Jinn is a very religious man and caring for all people around him. However, he can also be very stubborn and cold hearted in battle against his foes...
History/Biography: Born in a small village, Jinn also wanted to be a warrior and trained for years with his staff until he became a traveller at the young age of 12 after his vaillage was burnt down by raiding scum. He honed the arts of the sword and sought our revenge, killing every one of his foes. he was noticed by the emperor (? is that right? Emperor?) and became a trusted samurai for over a decade until the last raider, their chief, cam back for vengeance and savagely attacked Jinn. Jinn was lucky to escape with only a wounded leg but now limps and is much slower in battle. He seeks to prove that he is still worthy as a samurai by finding the lost sword!
Sample RP: Jinn sat by the lake, listening. There were faint padding footsteps from the trees, and muttering. He slowly rose from his meditative position and unsheathed his katana from his back strap. He laid his staff down by the bank and limped stealtily behind a tree. As the first assasin passed, jinnj swung his sword in a deadly arc, cutting deep into the ninjas chest. He rounded from behind the tree but he was surrounded now- the assasins had been expecting his sneak attack or had seen him! He tried to duck away as a katana slash came at him and his sword hand was cleaved off! Jinn yelled out in pain and collapsed onto his knees, panting desperately. He shut his eyes and wispered:
"Yes. My time is up. Let me go to my God!"


Any good?

Birth Name: Shitonea, Ashitaka
Adult Name: Ashitaka
Other Names: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Social Class: Ninja/Shinobi

Appearance Info
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Green
Height: 5'6"
Weight:145
Scars/Visible Flaws: Scar down his right eye
Disabilities: Cant see well out of his right eye

Weaponry: Katana, Kama
Jutsu: Shinobiiri(If its okay.) Ninjutsu, Ninja Ken, Kenjustsu, Kobujutsu

Mental Description: Stubborn, and cold to most that approach him. He carries a soft spot for those close to him, but mainly sets out to do his job.

History/Biography: Ashitaka was born in 1681. He lived his life in watch of lords and messngers that came to his small village, searching for able bodied men. He watched his father, brother, and uncle leave for the Emperor, and he new he was next. He watched as ronin and arrogant police came to his village, taking control of women whose husbands were away. But some still were noble and one even taught him the art of the sword. He left his village before he could be drafted into the empire and continued training himself. He took a liking to Ninja, and their line of work. He trained in the art of Ninjutsu and oushed himself to the limit. He now ends up here, in search of work for his stealth, and finds a journey much more than what he expected...

Sample RP:The forest was still. The trees gave no sign of movement. A rustle could be heard in the distance, with the slight thud of someone on a branch. It got closer and closer and seen barely in the trees was Ashitaka, his traditional navy blue ninja wear outfitted him. Green eyes could barely be seen in the light of the moon. He jumped down at a small creek, loud enough so he couldnt be heard. He lowered his face mask, and lifted a cupped hand to his mouth, taking a sip. He quickly placed the mask back to nose height and started to run, speedily and soundlessly through the forest. Only light tapping could be heard, and by someone who was excellent at hearing. Ashitaka froze and jumped on to a small stick of bamboo stuck in the ground, and started to jump higher as to women weilding umbrellas over their heads walked down the path, snickering and laughing. Once they were past, Ashitaka jumped down from his perch, only to catch himself on a branch and begin leaping from tree to tree once more.

(Tell me if I ned to like, change my jutsu or something, if not Im just now adding something else in.)

Birth Name: Unknown
Adult Name: "Onime" no Kyou (Demon Eyes Kyou) :P
Other Names: Thousand Slayer
Gender:Male
Age:25
Social Class: Ronin

Appearance Info
Hair color:Red
Eye color:Red
Height:183 cm
Weight: 66kg
Scars/Visible Flaws:a large crimson cross on his back
Disabilities: none

Weaponry: Odachi(5 feet long) (if allowed to be Odachi)
Jutsu:Odachijutsu, Iaijutsu, Kenjutsu, Nodachijutsu

Mental Description: Will kill whoever provokes him or stands in his way. If he promises someone to do something, he will get it done no matter what.

Physical Description: often travels unarmored. His Nodachi is strapped fimly to his waist, so it won't touch the ground.

History/Biography: He belonged to a secret clan. He was exiled after disobeying an order and killing an elder of the clan. Another elder was sent to capture him, but decide to train him instead. the elder trained him so he could defend himself against the clan when they found out he was still alive. The elder knew of the corruption within the clan, so he trained the boy to destroy the clan. The boy wated years, until he was 20, and attacked the clan by suprise. With the help of his master, he destroyed the clan. His master was killed in the attack. After destroying the clan, he left his dead master behind and travelled his own way. During a bloody battle, he arrived unannounced and slew some of the greatest samurai of a clan. He then escaped. He continued to hutn and kill whomever he liked. He was soon known as the thousand slayer for many rumors say he slew 1000 Samurai in a battle. (Rumors only) Kyou had heard of someone hiring ronin and mercenaries to find a sword. Kyou was running low on money, so he decided to join the group.

Sample RP: Kyou woke up to find that the assassin had found him. He could hear his movements outside. Clearly this was a novice assassin. Professionals would have already attempted to kill him. Kyou unsheathed his sword and stabbed it through a thin wooden wall and heard a cry of pain. He pulled out his bloodied sword and heard one of the assassin's corpse hit the ground. Kyou quickly opened the door and escaped into the night. He felt insulted that someone was only sending novices after him. Either way, whoever sent the assassin was going to have a very violent death.

Originally posted by Agent HUNK
I will choose who the nine other warriors are when they post a sample RP post that explains how they gained the attention of Lord Nagashima . This sample should be written as it would be in the actual Story, and posted following the Character's bio. Each Character will be limited to knowing five martial arts picked from a list along with weapons, and will be given a rank by me depending on their Sample RP.


The Sample Rp needs to explain how your character came under the attention of the Nagashima clan. What makes your character better than the other warriors out there.

Crimson the last battle fought in Japan was in 1638, 66 years before this takes place. Red eyes and hair is more indicative of anime and will not be tolerated. It would be rare to see a Japanese person with outlandish hair colors in 1704. As for the Odachi, as I said before the weapon would be illegal, and in actuality would only have been used by those of Incredible strength.

There is no empire, the emperor does not control things. He is the Pope of Japan. The Shogun runs things, but each province has a Daimyo that commands the people in his province.

5 jutsus is the maximum allowed. I have one major complaint about your characters. Most were born in villages and not trained in anything until something happend. A samurai would not teach a little peasant the sacred arts of the sword. In order to survive in these days you needed to train from an early age. Rework you histories and Sample Rps a little and when you are satisfied I will pass judgement as to your skill levels

Birth Name: Shitonea, Ashitaka
Adult Name: Ashitaka
Other Names: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Social Class: Ninja/Shinobi

Appearance Info
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Green
Height: 5'6"
Weight:145
Scars/Visible Flaws: Scar down his right eye
Disabilities: Cant see well out of his right eye

Weaponry: Katana, Kama
Jutsu: Shinobiiri Ninjutsu, Ninja Ken, Kenjustsu, Kobujutsu

Mental Description: Stubborn, and cold to most that approach him. He carries a soft spot for those close to him, but mainly sets out to do his job.

History/Biography:Ashitaka was born under a clan of skilled ninja, and like them, he trained under the village headmaster. He was taught Ninja Ken, and Kobujutsu, as well as Kenjutsu. When he was around thirteen, he began to train under his father's command, the art of Ninjutsu, and over the course of three years he learned it quite well. His clan gave him several tasks, to see if he was worthy of further training. One lone task presented itself harder than most, and he trekked Japan in search of an object, though its name has been lost. Six years later, he returned to his mountainous village and was welcomed greatfully, though he didnt find the sacred object. He was trained in the art of Shinobiiri for another year before he finally left his village once more, never to return. He arrived at the palace of Nagashima, hearing rumors of the prized sword that was stolen from him, and the reward to find it.
Sample RP: Ashitaka rose from his bedroll in a clearing of the forest. He quickly placed everything as it was, putting out his small fire, and resuming his disguise as a traveling merchant, though the road he was traveling was unoccupied. He kept walking, enjoying the days light when he came across the small foot bridge that led into the domain of Nagashima. As he had expected, the guards asked him what he wanted and what his buisness was. He handed the one that looked profoundly dumb a scroll with some writing on it, explaining next to nothing of what he was doing. The guard looked over the scroll for a minute or two and then grunted, "You may pass." And Ashitaka did. ~Luckily he cant read.~ he smirked as he continued to push the cart forward. He arrived at the large doors to the domain and set his cart aside, and walked in. Another guard, wich looked a bit smarter, asked what he wanted. When Ashitaka told him, he said "Liar! Tell me what you are, and what you are doing here!" Ashitaka bowed and raised a hand, to keep the man from attacking. "I am here to pledge my services, and to help find the lost sword of the Nagashima. As for what I am, only my employer may know." The guard stood there for a moment, his eyes narrowed and his teeth showing, "I will see if your, services, are needed." And with that he left Ashitaka in the lone room, only the two guards by the door and himself remained.
(I dont know if this post is what you wanted, but Im trying here.)

That is much better. Ashiitaka I give you 5th Level - Excellent; Well practiced and rarely fails in his attempts.

As I said as you get better you can ask to be upgraded. Rate your jutsus like i did mine. You don't have to be a 5 at all of them if you don't want to, but you can if you feel up to it.

The sample RP should be like Ashiitaka's. Some can come to his attention through wise advice on the warrior's part, or even through their skill when challenging his best warriors to a duel. it is you decision, but you need to show how you were hired. Sorry if I seem like a total hard-a$$, but I get tired of anime influences and misinformation finding their way into RPs like this one.

Rating my jutsus:

Shinobiiri, 5, Ninja Ken, 4, Kobujutsu, 3, Ninjutsu, 5, Kenjutsu, 5.

(These may change later on if I find it difficult to keep up with them.)

Ehhh... this is getting too complex and fussy I'm afraid... yeah, realism is good but. seriously, dude, there's a difference between a fun but failry realistic RPG and a 100% historically correct RPG ruled with an iron fist that crushes both fiction and fun... sorry, but I quit...

(Darnit!!! We need peoples... I really want to Rp here... *Cries.*)

(Bump)

Hey guys may i join yuor rp ? Please!!It sounds really coool and im into ronin and samurai, plus their weaponry. As a matter of fact i collect samurai and ninja weaponry and own an Odachi, a katana made by Masahiro who is the leading sword comp. today. I also own two kama. please respond soon.

Hey guys can I join your rp please? I know a good bit of info on ronin and samurai and also have some of their weaponry. I own a katana, made of the highest quality. I also own an Odachi,(which is hard to use when dueling). Any way id like to join, so reply asap please.Thanks

ignore the first one

Birth name:Takashime,tao
Adult name:Takashime,Kamakura
Other names:The Crimson Demon
Gender:male
Age:22
Social classamurai
APPEARANCE INFO
Hair color:black
Eye color:black
Height:6'
Weight:163lbs(has muscular build and six pack stomach)
Scars/visible flawscar on his right shoulder going to the tip of his shoulder blade
Disabilities:none
Weaponry: 2 unbreakable, never dulling katanas with blood red cotton ito on the hilts, 1 yumi
Jutsus:Nitojutsu, Noborijutsu
Mental description:warm to people but tries not to make friends. Very protective of the friends he has.
History/Biography:Kamakura ws born into a wealthy and well known samurai family. At an early age, he was instructed in the arts of swordsmanship and Bushido. Growing up he made friends with the servants of his household and a girl who lived on his fathers land, who's name was Taisho,Sakura. After many weeks of pestering,and pleading he got his father to allow the girl into his samurai training dojo under one condition:If she ever slacked just once, his father would expel her from training and never be allowed into the house again. Fortunately, she prevailed and was given her own specially made katanas.the pair grew quite fond of eachother. Sadly this bond was only to last a short time.
Sample RP:Kamakura and Sakura were riding in Edo on horse back to past the time in full Bloodred yoroi armor. "Hey Sakura, lets rest at this teahouse for a bit and have a drink, my treat." caled Kamakura getting off his horse.
"Okay, that sounds relaxing." replied Sakura taking off her helment. They tied their horses to a post and went inside the teahouse to relaxe.They had just sat down to drink when they heard a cry and commotion outside. They exchanged looks, drew their katanas, and ran outside.A group of ronin had entered Edo and began to kill the peasants. "You men, halt!" Ordered Kamakura pointing one of his katanas at them.
"And who might you be, samurai?"asked the leader quizically, eyeing Sakura.
"My name is not important, for you won't be around long enough to remember it." said Kamakura with disgiust.
"Men, dispose of this nuisance." ordered the leader,frowning. With this the leader left the group and ran down the street the opposite direction.
"I'll get him!" yelled Sakura with enthusiasm as she ran with speed after the leader, leaving Kamakura to dispose of the three henchmen.
"Sakura, wait!" yelled Kamakura,but Sakura was already gone.Kamakura faced the henchmen and said, "Who wants to die first?"
"You got a loud mouth samurai, and I'm gonna shut it for you." replied one of the henchmen, challenging Kamakura. The henchman leaped at Kamkura and thrust his sword at his face. Kamakura slapped his sword away and stabbed the henchman in the heart; then quickly, Kamakura threw his other sword at the nearest enemy with great speed,hiting the henchman in the chest. Kamakura removed his blood drenched blade from the henchmas chest and looked at the last one with a grin.The henchman took off running in the opposite direction towards the exit to Edo. Kamakura instanly ran in the direction of the leader and Sakura. He found them in a different street not far from his position and suddenly stopped,somthing was wrong. Sakura just stood there as if in a trance and then suddenly fell and began to pour out blood."Sakura!" cried Kamkura running to his friend. The leader began to laugh.
"She fought well samurai, though as you can see , not good enough." said the leader mockingly.
Kamakura gently proped Sakura's back against a wall and whispered to her, "Don't worry, you'll be fine, I promise." With that Kamakura stood and faced the leader. "You'll pay for this!" cried Kamakura, on the brink of tears. Without a second though he charged the leader and swung his blades at him in fury. THe leaderdodged anddrew his katana. As fast as he had dodged, he lunged at Kamkura and his blade sliced into Kamakura's shoulder and down his back. "When did you do that!" said the leader as he fell over with a huge cut in his chest. Kamakura walked over to Sakura and took hold of her hand and looked her in the eyes, the same eyes he had befriended.Sakura spoke in a low, shaky voice, "Kamakura, I srewed up this time didn't I?"
"No you didn't, you gave it your best" said Kamakura, tears flowing from his eyes.
"Kamakura, I have something I've been meaning to tell you for a while, I love you."
"I'll love you 'till the day I die Sakura."cried Kamakura, holding Sakura close to him.
"Goodbye, love." With this Sakura died in Kamakura's arms.
"Sakura, don't leave me!" cried Kamakura, "Nooo!"

dont kno whats with the smilies i didnt put them on there and cant get them off