Mistakes (Story)
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Neobi Kenobi
Title: Mistakes
Author: Neobi
Spoilers: Jedi Apprentice 6 and Jedi Apprentice 16, very minor spoilers.
Summary: Lets just say it is going be a long line of mistakes.
// = Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan bond
italicized = thought
** = From the book (beginning and ending)
Disclaimer: All names and planets, except Tikatee and a few others, are part of Lucas Books.
Hope you like it.
~Neobi
Neobi Kenobi
Hello? Anyone there? Any comments?
~Neobi
Gundark
Good story !!!
Thanks for sharing it with us !
Julie
uh...interesting, but I don't see the point (to put it bluntly) ...is this just some of your fanfiction?????
Neobi Kenobi
Yep, pretty much. It did ok at another forum and thought I would try it here. So far I'm not to sure I will keep putting it up here.
~Neobi
LanceWindu
Nice story.
You like to type a lot in one post don't you?
Neobi Kenobi
Kind of at the other forum the fans that read your story would eat you alive if your posts are short.
~Neobi
Julie
What forum?....and is that a threat?...a promise?...or just an observation?
Well, then I'll have to make sure to be longwinded
Neobi Kenobi
Force.net, and I don't quiet understand, is what a threat or a promise?
~Neobi
Julie
Being eaten alive b/c of posting short......anyway I was J/K...I tend to be sarcastic at times..don't mind me
Neobi Kenobi
Don't worry I won't and yes, if you are not careful they will eat you alive.
~Neobi
Julie
hmm...remind me to steer clear of them....
so when the next chapter of your story come out?
Neobi Kenobi
When ever you want, I want, you know when ever. I could put it up now if you want.
~Neobi
LanceWindu
So how many chapters is your fan fic?
yerssot
it's very impressif, but I'm not going to read it all, I'm too lazy for that, sorry
Neobi Kenobi
Its a work in progress.
~Neobi
LanceWindu
Oh, so it could get to be around 50+ chapter's if you're not done with the story and want to explain more?
Julie
actually it could go on forever if Neobi wants to keep it going that long.....I hope not, but so far I like it...errr most of it
LanceWindu
What part don't you like?
Julie
The part where Obi wan is not the innocent little boy....
Julie
yea....I was like "oh MY"
Julie
Obi-wan wanted a child
LanceWindu
How could he want a child? He knows that's against the code.
Neobi Kenobi
I never said he wanted a child. But he knows he can't change the past and what he did. He is willing to accept the bad in order to make it good.
~Neobi
Julie
I'm glad this is just fanfiction.....no offense to the author....I do like the story....
Neobi Kenobi
No offence taken. And thank you. So when would you guys like the next part?
~Neobi
LanceWindu
Right now if possible
Julie
ohhh...a cliffhanger....what's next?
Neobi Kenobi
You'll see...
~Neobi
Julie
go on....
Neobi Kenobi
// = Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan bond
Julie
oh...talking throught he force?
LanceWindu
It's been awhile Neobi.
Neobi Kenobi
Yep, sorry about that. If you want the next part just tell me and I'll post it as soon as I can.
~Neobi
Captain REX
Good story. I like writing stories myself, although I don't write Star Wars.
This reminds me of the Witch in the LOTR forum here...
Captain REX
So, who wants me to get back to making a second thread about my story where every body says "Wait till later, I'm too lazy to read it" ?
Gundark
Good story ! I'm enjoying it.
Freedon Nadd
Back when people cared about what was important.
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