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sailorsun004
Make a poem about your favorite/hated anime/manga.

great place to let out your anger! every month we will judge and the best poem will, we havent decided that yet, they might get a book, or a floppy full of images and anime info!

serena&darien
Bunny,Serena Usagi too,
I guess you all know her as Sailor Moon.
She's a ray of sunshine,the best in the world,
She's a truly special all fun girl.
She's bright and she's funny,
her nick name is Bunny.
Dariens for her Seiya is too,
Serena,Serena how I admire you!^.^

serena&darien
mina,mina all for the fun,
scatterbrain openminded girl on the run.
she stands for love and justice too
two of my friends admire you

serena&darien
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serena&darien
moon crystal use your strength
help me peal away this pain
my friends are dead the battle's rough
I want to cry but I've got to stay tough
I'm breaking down I'm gonna cry
evil villain please let me die
my power is worthless without my friends
this is where the battle ends
let me disappear into the night
I no longer have a reason to fight
we will no longer be apart
I will die with your love in my heart

serena&darien
tell me which one you like the best!!!!!!

sailorsun004
i dont know i am still trying to figure out! plus maybe i want to add one, and it isnt the end of the month yet

Blue Dragon
My poem

sailorsun004
that is good!

still creativly thinking

Blue Dragon
Thanks someone likes it! big grin Yeah, creativily.

sailorsun004
creativity is fun!

WindDancer
Poems dedicated to your favorite Anime character? Interesting thread. smile

Blue Dragon
I like it.

Yuna33
i like it, but i can't come up with one right now.

Blue Dragon
Keep thinking...

*Kairi19*
inuyasha is so kool
people see him like a fool
going crazy for two girls
not knowing what to do
when he comes upon with the two
poor lover choose one
or them or loose them to another

*Kairi19*
sorry cant rhyme

soundtrack
This is a poem/story about Rini (Chibi USA) and Pegasus. I wrote this a long time ago (like in 6th grade, lol).

Hear Me But Why?

You hear me cry,
You come to me.
You come and ask
Why do I cry?
I say I cry for you.

You hear my call,
You come to me.
You come and ask
Why do I call?
I say I call for power,
And for you.

You hear my voice,
You come to me.
You come and say,
You ask a question I will answer.
What is this question?

You come if I am in trouble,
I thank you for this, but it is not my question.
My question is
You come if in need,
But do you come for me
Or the dreams of mine of which you are in?

You give me no answer.
You fly away in the night sky and say
I come for you,
And for your love for me,
My Little One.

So now I know
Why I cry for you,
Why I call for you,
And why you hear my voice.
It is because I will always love
My Flying Horse.

serena&darien
that poem is soooooooooo sad *WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*

Blue Dragon
Originally posted by soundtrack
This is a poem/story about Rini (Chibi USA) and Pegasus. I wrote this a long time ago (like in 6th grade, lol).

Hear Me But Why?

You hear me cry,
You come to me.
You come and ask
Why do I cry?
I say I cry for you.

You hear my call,
You come to me.
You come and ask
Why do I call?
I say I call for power,
And for you.

You hear my voice,
You come to me.
You come and say,
You ask a question I will answer.
What is this question?

You come if I am in trouble,
I thank you for this, but it is not my question.
My question is
You come if in need,
But do you come for me
Or the dreams of mine of which you are in?

You give me no answer.
You fly away in the night sky and say
I come for you,
And for your love for me,
My Little One.

So now I know
Why I cry for you,
Why I call for you,
And why you hear my voice.
It is because I will always love
My Flying Horse.

So beautiful.... happy I read it sort of with a rythum in my head...I can't tell you though because you can't hear me... sad If only you could...

soundtrack
Originally posted by serena&darien
that poem is soooooooooo sad *WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*


how is it that sad?
thx b.d.

Blue Dragon
Course it's sad, duh big grin

soundtrack
well kinda, but not anything to cry over erm

Blue Dragon
Well no but still sad

*Kairi19*
itas a nice sad kool poem "soundtrack" thumb up thumb up thumb up bunny

soundtrack
thx k

sailorsun004
sorry i havent been able to post, my brother has been hogging the cpu. well, i think we all agree that blue dragon should win for the chibiusa and elios poem! hooray, lets all clap!

moises
RANDOMNESS

D has no chance,
Arucard would prance,
and still would have time to pull up his pants.

D has his hand,
Arucard would stand,
around they go until Arucard makes a joke.

moises
Asuka and Rei are in pain
Whlie Shinji is bitching about his day
Misato will guide and please
Gendo will ignore everybody eles needs

Rei would sacrifice herself for any reason
Asuka would kill herself for recognition
Shinji would break down and cry eventually he will panic and hide
Gendo will continue looking with selfish eyes

Rei will question everyday acts
Asuka will take it to the max
Shinji would wonder if he will ever have a dad
The world will end soon and everyone will lose their mask.

soundtrack
nice

sailorsun004
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sailorsun004
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PinkDi@monds
um.....sun, what the hell was "i Showed you" about in PMs?

sailorsun004
i did

PinkDi@monds
Originally posted by sailorsun004
i did showed me what? sailor moon is still for little kids, and you shouldnt be here if you're 11, so shut up. you did not "show me" because its still ok for old times sake but i've never taken it seriously since the age of 8/9. so no, you didnt "show me".

i hearby declare Sailor Moon a rubbish kids show

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i use to love that show if they didnt put in all of the "trying to be funny comedy", it would have been a very good show/series.

sailorsun004
I still love that show And i still showed you because you stink and i know people who are 21 and love the show so I showed you

sailorsun004
plus even though im 11 i am mature for my age and so to get back on the i showed you subject I did i forgot in which thread but i did

Blue Dragon
Originally posted by sailorsun004
sorry i havent been able to post, my brother has been hogging the cpu. well, i think we all agree that blue dragon should win for the chibiusa and elios poem! hooray, lets all clap!
I never saw this, I left the thread...awww...ooohh you make me cry, I never thought about winning, yay! happy I'm so happy..obviously, lol. laughing out loud roll eyes (sarcastic)

Kharhmah
Originally posted by Blue Dragon
My poem
eek! That's really good Dom. I love the imagery. yes

Blue Dragon
Ooooh thanks. hug You know, this makes me...feel really really good about myself, it shows I'm good at something & people like what I've done. happy

I see myself as a lower class person because some people don't like me & I think it's because I'm not good enough to know them, this has lifted me high high up! big grin

Sorry if I'm sounding wierd...bag

Kharhmah
Originally posted by Blue Dragon
Ooooh thanks. hug You know, this makes me...feel really really good about myself, it shows I'm good at something & people like what I've done. happy

I see myself as a lower class person because some people don't like me & I think it's because I'm not good enough to know them, this has lifted me high high up! big grin

Sorry if I'm sounding wierd...bag
You're not sounding weird at all. hug

Blue Dragon
That's good... laughing out loud

Alexis_88
kill me till i die..
when i wake i will cry...
when im suicidle ...
im thinking humicidle...
breaking glass is what i do...
to hate the one i bring to you...
to see past the love...
is to break a dove...
when bleeding in pain...
it begins to rain..
so lied to evil..
and pray so that he say revill...
i lie and watch the sun...
when i run...
to stop and go...
but to the people are low...
i thinking of humicidle its the shit....

snehin
Originally posted by Alexis_88
kill me till i die..
when i wake i will cry...
when im suicidle ...
im thinking humicidle...
breaking glass is what i do...
to hate the one i bring to you...
to see past the love...
is to break a dove...
when bleeding in pain...
it begins to rain..
so lied to evil..
and pray so that he say revill...
i lie and watch the sun...
when i run...
to stop and go...
but to the people are low...
i thinking of humicidle its the shit.... isn't this a bit depressing at the begining?

Alexis_88
dud elook at me what do you see???!!!
homicidle.....

Alexis_88
but i got a sense of love....still left in me...

Alexis_88
srry for the pic guys that was my brother...!!!#@!#$#@$

04wayne
Blue Dragon's poem is about 7 out of 10

Dark+Me#1
Here is one
We all love Inuyasha
Whose pop was a demon mutt
He may be just a half-bread
But he still kicks major but
He has a sorwed Tetsiga made from his daddy's teeth
And with his 2 movie he'll cause Nariku greaph
What about the others well they all do there part
But it was that cutie shippo who reall stole our hartes.

Blue Dragon
Originally posted by 04wayne
Blue Dragon's poem is about 7 out of 10
You didn't tell me you posted about my poem, after harassing you to read it! That's quite a good score, coming from you. roll eyes (sarcastic) laughing out loud Ha ha, you're impressed!

That's why Wayne said at school, "You didn't make that up." He thought I wasn't capable of such stuff, although I'll say this, the poem was a little far about, I should change a few bits, because some of it's a bit crappy.

I'm going to think some more up in my bedroom, be back...whenever. smile Chow.

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