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ok here is one of my story idea's it's kinda corny but cool.
a new arcade game has just come out called Trons where you pilot a robot defending the earth. but as everybody plays it a evil from another planet is preparing to attack earth, so the milatary created this game to find out what people have the skills and reflexes to pilot the real trons.(based in Canada)

the character sketch:
name: George Michael Danniels
\nickname: blix
age: 18 (no body uner age 12 and no higher than 29)
trons name: Nexus
personality: skilled at video-games, smart, funny and extremely good with mechanics
apearence: (you can describe or post picture)
history: (if you want)
and you can add to it and this picture is my character and the suit is his bio suit

Name: Xavier Charles Montaverius
Nickname: X
Age: 16
Trons name: Exx
Personality: Quick witted, smart funny, dirrect, out going
Apearence: Xavier has long Blonde hair in a pony tail, wears a black shirt with a red skull on it, has rippe djeans, andusually teneshoes.
History: Xavier was never very Athletic, he ususally wsa either on the computer or Playing Video games, he learned teh basics of Compute Hacking years back goes to Arceds in hi spare time, that swhen he saw the Trons game....

lol anyone else?

ya come on wat happened to the other 4 people

well this went over like a led Zeplin

well nothing ventured nothing gained

what

nevermind

lol I guess its not as poplar as it seemed

come on people

name: Ryan Doom
nickname: Von
age: 15
trons name: RyVon
personality: skilled at video-games, intellegent ,wicked awesome
apearence: long Red head wit just ur basic teenager close on
history: grew up miss treted and abondoned,been adopted,likes alcohol ,loves his life even though it sux

sweet

if we don't get a fourth person in the next 3 days we'll start k

wow that was a stretch lol I thougt you had way more lol

me to

ok i'm starting it soon

I guess I'll join.

Name: Xinao Blackegg
Nick Name: N/A
Age: 25
Tron's Name: Diminisher
Appearence: Has black hair and green eyes, clothing is the Blackegg captain's uniform.
Personality: Mysterious
History: When he has a child, he hated video games because they were unrealistic; he preferred the real thing. When his company, Blackegg Corps is asked to build Trons, he accepts hoping to pilot one.
Goal: To create an artificial planet to make his company famous throughout the world.

name: William Victor

\nickname: Shorty (If you want your butt kicked.)

age: 19

trons name: Rush

personality: Quick to fight yet surprisingly easy to get along with. Will knows his mechanics, he can fix most problems with electronics. Will sticks up for his friends, you mess with them you answer to him. Will has a big problem with being called short, don't do it unless you want to live the rest of you life in an iron lung.

appearance: 4'7" tall, 91 lbs, white hair, green eyes, very light tan skin, athletic build.

Well, this might be a good story after all. I hope you have Ush's permission, Mandolorian.

~don't worry i do, this post will be the course of over two months it's the second paragraph in the book, well it says basically the same thing, oh and we don't meet eachother till we are in the base~ George Michael Danniels, son of James walter Danniels, is 18 years old and living in the house his father grew up in, loves video games exspecially trons ~hell it's nothing like the second paragraph~

~sorry had to cut it short~

~any way~ Mike (wat everyone calls him instead of george) was driving home from colledge after his 10th month aniversery of buying an actual arcade game of trons (like he ones that would be in an arcade) when he got home not even his dog could be heard "strange i hope Roody is alright" mike said to his self locking the 350z and going inside and up to his dad's childhood room which was his. he heard papers ruffling and the typing sound a computer makes when someone is typing when he walked in and saw two men searching the room "get him" one said as the other one surpisenly followed the order and knocked mike out

Xinao Blackegg was in the base talking to the Tron company's president, Arjay Kragg, on the phone. "All is going well, Arjay. I sent two spies to retrieve the boy." He started to ruffle through some papers to find George's (or Mike's) profile and looks at it. "If you fail, I promise you that Blackegg Corps will be shut down faster than you could ever imagine." said Kragg. "Are you threatening me, president? I hope you know how powerful my business is. I promise YOU that if you try anything, you'll be dead." On the other side of the line, Arjay Kragg started to sweat. "What- What are you saying?! If it wasn't for me, Trons wouldn't be in your possession! Now, make sure the boy becomes a Tron pilot, or you will no longer have control of the Trons. Good bye."
When Arjay hung up the phone, Blackegg noticed Mike's high score in Tron. The average was 3,000,000. His was 10,000,000.

Xavier walked down the street he was on his way to teh Arcade, The Trons gam eawaited him, he hoped t beat his old score of 10,000,000 today. He smiled wlaking inbside seating himslef into the large seat taking hold of teh Large Handles locking him in place. He put a quarter in and teh Game started he fired off a couple of time sdesimating a few of teh alien eenmies in the game, He was very good at this gam ehis score built up to 900,000 and a crowd around him satrted to watch he smield launching a missile cooly at a group of Th eAliens, The games Score continued to rise . His score, now at 15,000,000, continue dto rise he blasted through the final game, the words. 'Congratulations! the Earth is saved!' were heard X smield hopping out of teh chair as poepel clapped and cheered. he walke dout and saw two strange men walking into his house a few blocks away. X Began to run.....

Originally posted by Ballister
Xinao Blackegg was in the base talking to the Tron company's president, Arjay Kragg, on the phone. "All is going well, Arjay. I sent two spies to retrieve the boy." He started to ruffle through some papers to find George's (or Mike's) profile and looks at it. "If you fail, I promise you that Blackegg Corps will be shut down faster than you could ever imagine." said Kragg. "Are you threatening me, president? I hope you know how powerful my business is. I promise YOU that if you try anything, you'll be dead." On the other side of the line, Arjay Kragg started to sweat. "What- What are you saying?! If it wasn't for me, Trons wouldn't be in your possession! Now, make sure the boy becomes a Tron pilot, or you will no longer have control of the Trons. Good bye."
When Arjay hung up the phone, Blackegg noticed Mike's high score in Tron. The average was 3,000,000. His was 10,000,000. ~thanks for the high score but the trons were made by the milatary and only the 100 people that worked on them know about it~ mike woke up in a bunkbed in a room with all metal walls, two desks, two computers, one bathroom, one bunkbed and one medium sized closet

As Xinao walked to the hangar he marvled at the Trons. He turned to a large metal door that said "DO NOT ENTER" on it. "Ah, my masterpiece."
said Blackegg, walking in. A large rack held Blackegg's personal Tron, The Diminisher. It had the most powerful available weapons, strongest armor, but on top of this, it had Blackegg pliotting it. Xinao Blackegg was one of the most skilled pilots in the world, having gone on 264 successful air battles, he had enough war experience to pilot such a beast. But although Blackegg never considered it, he had flaws. He was too confident. Too sure of himself. Xinao went to his office and tracked down X's home. "Hmm... my spies have finished. A good thing this 'x' character wasn't there."

~no offense but can you just be one of the teens that know nothinng of it, and no it's my fault i didn't post that before~

William sat in his garage, fiddling with a broken clock. "What's with this... stupid spring... lousy... clock!" He mumbled, tightening the springs and coils. He threw the clock across the room and let it smash into pieces. "You're better off broken!" He shouted, tossing his screwdriver back into his tool box. "Jeez. Nothing works around here!"

He sat down and took a deep breath. "Will, time for breakfast!" Will's mom shouted from down the hall. Will shot out of his chair and into the kitchen. "Did you fix the clock?" His mom asked, setting a plate of eggs in front him.

Will laughed as he took a large bite of eggs. "Yeah, I fixed it real good."

lol Mike was brushing his teeth when a man walked in, and because of air cadets he knew he was a leftenant~luitenant for all you americans so try to remember~ mike saluted the officer as the officer did the same he told mike to follow so mike did

Originally posted by Mandolorian
~no offense but can you just be one of the teens that know nothinng of it, and no it's my fault i didn't post that before~

Name: Xinao Blackegg
/NN: Hawk
Age: 15
Tron's Name: The Diminisher
Appearence: Black hair, dark green shirt, black jacket (not leather),
dark jeans.
Personality: Mysterious
History: Prodigy who garduated high school at the age of 15, he has a gift for pilotting. When he saw the game Trons, he noticed that there's airborn combat in it, so he gave it a try.

Is that good? Let me restart my entire story.


Xinao walked to the arcade and saw the Trons game. Just as he approached it, a large kid pushed him to the ground and said "Hey, whimp, make way for the pros. Blackegg got up and said "Pro? At what, eating?" The large kid turned and said "What'd you say, skinny boy?"
Xinao approached and said "Sorry, what I meant is that you're a jackass, lard boy." Xinao grabbed the kid by the collar and threw him at another arcade game. He then sat down on the Trons char and started the game. "Looks stupid. Let's see how long it takes me to beat it."
5 minutes later, the high score screen came up. It said "YOU HAVE ACHIEVED THE HIGH SCORE: 15,000,000. PLEASE INPUT NAME." Xinao typed in "Diminisher" and got off the chair. He walked out and saw a man walking to Xinao's apartment. "A common burglar. When will they learn?" He followed the man into the house.

~not bad~

~guess i have the lowest score~ mike followed the man to a large metal door

~too bad you coul dhav ehad time to beat it liek i did and Xinao an di have teh sme score~

(Will doesn't even have a score yet. He hasn't left his house. But all that is about to change... Watch this.) Will finished his breakfast and left the house. (See, I told you.) He jogged down the street to meet his friends at the local arcade. He was early, as usual, so he had enough time to play a few games. He looked around and saw a new game. 'Whats this?' He thought, reading the title. 'Trons... Sounds stupid.' He thought popping a few coins in the machine. It was only a couple of seconds before the screen flashed "Game Over!" In big white letters. "That was stupid!" Will shouted, putting more coins in the machine. He kept playing until his friends arrived. They didn't bother him as he played, they knew better then to bother him while he was busy. "Come on! Come on!" Will shouted as he tapped the buttons, blasting alien ships. His last life bar was finally depleted. "Yeah! Who rules?" Will shouted, putting his name in the high score screen. Rush, that was the name he used for any game he played. He chose that name because of the rush he felt proving that he was better then someone at something. He turned to his friends. "9,900,000. Beat that!" He said to his friends. They walked out of the arcade to cause some trouble. (See mandolorian, you don't have the lowest score.)

~lol happy now Mandalore?anywho I don't know exaclt how to continue are they going to kidnap me?~

~actually in my book out of the three teens the main is least skilled in the game~

(I don't intend on being the main character. He isn't the best fighter but he'll be good back up.)

~lo lhow do I continue?~

Originally posted by Maleficus
(I don't intend on being the main character. He isn't the best fighter but he'll be good back up.) i didn't say you were the main character i was just saying, and since my two post went over like a 2 week corse i'm just ahead in the time so liker mike would still be seen around you guys~

Alright, so DD and I have the same scores? Anyways...

Xinao walked into his house and hid behind a counter. The man was looking around and then walked into the office room. He sat down in front of Xinao's computer and started opening files. Xinao crept up next to the door and peered inside. The man heard Xinao behind the wall and took out a tranq gun. Seconds later, Xinao dropped to the floor, with an anestexiac dart in his arm.

Will and his friends hung out at a pizza place. They ordered way more pizza then they could eat, so they had enough to throw at cars on the high way. They walked outside laughing at a stupid joke Will told, when a strange man started following them. "Pardon me are you Rush?" He said, pointing to Will.

Will stepped forward. "Who's asking?" He said looking tough.

The strange man chuckled at Will. "You got the high score on that machine. Come with me to receive your prise." He said walking back to the arcade.

Will looked back at his friends. "I'll be right back guys." He said, running after the man. Will never was the wisest of people. When he caught up to the man he was met with a crack on the head. Will blacked out and was dragged into the shadows.

When Xinao awoke, he found himself in a metal room. He got up and started looking around. "What the hell happened... Where am I?" He walked over to the door and opened it. As he walked outside, he heard foot steps and men talking. He turned and saw a tall man with a short guy, probably his secretary. "Who are you?" The man walked to Xinao and said "Hello, you are Xinao Blackegg, correct?" Xinao gave a confused look and said "Possibly. Why?" The man sighed and said "Ok, another question. Are you familiar with the arcade game called Trons?"

Xavier quietly but quickly dashe dot his house sneeking around the back and up to the top floor through windows, He smiled and looked back out the window, he tured around and came face to face with the man that snuck in. "Exx I presume?" He held a gun at him X gulped. "Ye-" he fell to the ground instantly

Xinao was even more confused. "Yeah, what of it?" The short man said "Umm, here sir." handing the man a paper. The man took the paper and looked over it. "High score 15,000,000? Impressive. Diminisher, right?" Blackegg remembered playing the arcade game and said "Yes, and..." The man turned and said "If you'd follow me." Xinao did so.

the large metal door opened up revieling a mission conference like off of star wars return of the jedi with a holographic projecting table in the middle

Xinao walked through a few doors into the place above. "Whoa... What is this?"

Will woke up in a strange room. "Damn it. What the hell happened?" He said, getting up and walking to the door. "Hey! Let me out of here!" He shouted banging on the door.

A man opened a small window in the door. "Shut up. Things will be explained later." He said through the window.

Will reached through the window and poked the man in the eye. "Why did you hit me on the head?" He shouted.

The man held his eye and began to shut the window. "Cut it out kid! Things will be explained later!"

there was a 50 year old man in uniform in the room "i don't believe it how did you become a general?" mike asked him as though he knew him "hard work" the man replied "and i'm very sorry about your father" the man added "i should have known you would know" mike said

Huh

starwars YES!!! I HAVE POSTED THE 50TH POST ON THIS THREAD!!! Anyways, it's on red. starwars

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

confused1 Did I do something wrong again? Oh, did you want the 50th post. Sorry. Anyways, there's always the hundreth post so....


PARTYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

~okay i've gone as far as i feel i can go without anybody else~

(Sorry Mandolorian.)

Will punched at the door until he passed out from exhaustion. That's when another man entered the room. "Sorry for the wait." He said, handing his coat to the guard at the door. "And for all the excessive force. We just didn't want you attacking someone and getting yourself hurt. especially before we had a chance to talk."

Will got up and sat in his bed. "About what?" He asked, rubbing his eyes.

The man smiled. "I'm glad you have an interest... I would like to offer you a job."

Xinao walked in and started messing with control panels. "Hey, don't touch that!" said a worker. Xinao backed away and said "What the hell is this?" The man looked across the room to Mike.

"i don't know, i just know him" mike said pointing to the general ~in canada that's the highest ranking~

Originally posted by Mandolorian
"i don't know, i just know him" mike said pointing to the general ~in canada that's the highest ranking~ (I'm pretty sure it's the same here. America isn't that much different from Canada.)

~i wasn't sure if you guys had commander or not~

Originally posted by Mandolorian
~i wasn't sure if you guys had commander or not~ (We do but the lead individual battalions. Generals tell them what to do. Either that or I'm completely insane and I've made up my own system.)

Originally posted by Maleficus
(We do but the lead individual battalions. Generals tell them what to do. Either that or I'm completely insane and I've made up my own system.) lol i think your right a commander could be a lefteninant it's person in charge of the mission, boat, jet you get the point

Originally posted by Mandolorian
lol i think your right a commander could be a lefteninant it's person in charge of the mission, boat, jet you get the point (Getting back to the point...)

Will was sceptical of the job he had been offered. "I'm not sure I can trust your plan. I don't have any experience flying." He said, rubbing the bump on his head.

The man he was talking to, who had introduced himself as a military scientist named Charley, sat in a chair across the room and stared at Will. "Thats the beauty of Trons. You've mastered the game with surprising skill, and we based the game on the pilot controls. No normal child can pilot like you, only a small group of others, but we can talk about that later." He said, standing up. Charley walked over to Will and held out his hand. "This is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Will you take the job?" He asked slowly.

Will hesitated for a minute then shook Charley's hand. "What the hell. I'm in."

Xinao looked back to the man. "Who are you?" "I am Commander Crosser." the man said. "Commander Crosser... Alright, so answer my question, what the hell is this?" Crosser looked at a large screen with a diagram of a Tron on it. "We are the makers of Trons. You are familiar with Trons as a game, but it's more than that. Much more." He walked down a small set of steps into the center, in front of a large projection of an orb. "Trons are real." Blackegg put his hand on his forehead and said "What have I gotten myself into?" The commander turned and said "You've gotten yourself into the opportunity of a life time. We want you, along with a few other teens, to pilot a Tron."

Originally posted by Ballister
Xinao looked back to the man. "Who are you?" "I am Commander Crosser." the man said. "Commander Crosser... Alright, so answer my question, what the hell is this?" Crosser looked at a large screen with a diagram of a Tron on it. "We are the makers of Trons. You are familiar with Trons as a game, but it's more than that. Much more." He walked down a small set of steps into the center, in front of a large projection of an orb. "Trons are real." Blackegg put his hand on his forehead and said "What have I gotten myself into?" The commander turned and said "You've gotten yourself into the opportunity of a life time. We want you, along with a few other teens, to pilot a Tron." ~honestly dude read the last post we were just talking about this he's a general there is no commander in ranking in canada ~

Originally posted by Mandolorian
~honestly dude read the last few posts we were just talking about this he's a general there is no commander in ranking in canada ~

~anywho~ "leave now" the general said to the other milatary men as they left not daring to disobay mike looked at a computer screen "that's my nexus" mike said reffering to the trons he programmed into the arcade game

Blackegg saw a Tron modifier on a screen. It had different variations of Trons. On the screen next to it, he saw The Diminisher.

(I'm not sure how we're all supposed to meet. What should I do next?)

Charley led Will into a large room. "You'll have to meet some of your fellow pilots. I hope you get along." He said, opening a door. "Don't start any fights."

Will entered a room with a few soldiers and some other kids. "Hey." He said, waving at the man wearing the medals. "When do I get paid?"

"when you do your job" the general said

Originally posted by Mandolorian
"when you do your job" the general said Will sighed and ignored the general. "Whatever. Call m e when the action starts." He said, fiddling with some buttons in the corner.

"Who is this guy." said Xinao looking at Will.

"i still need to explain everything" the general said

Originally posted by Ballister
"Who is this guy." said Xinao looking at Will. "Your moms favorite hobby." Will mocked, not even turning to look at Xiano.

mike put his head in his hands "oh boy" mike said "wat is that suppossed to mean" the general said

Originally posted by Mandolorian
mike put his head in his hands "oh boy" mike said "wat is that suppossed to mean" the general said "It means I'm good at pleasing your mother." Will said, beginning to laugh. "I make her scream all night long."

the general pulled a gun at will's head

Originally posted by Mandolorian
the general pulled a gun at will's head Will stared at the General calmly. "Put it down. You'll make mommy cry." He said calmly. "What would my family think if I just disappeared. You'll never get away with it. Especially with the witnesses in the room."

"and you could go to jailfor saying that and i could get away with shooting you in the head" the general said

Originally posted by Mandolorian
"and you could go to jailfor saying that and i could get away with shooting you in the head" the general said "Go ahead. My family and friends will find out that you were enough of a ***** to kill me over words and they'll make you pay for it. You can go ahead and kill me but don't think for a minute that you'll get away with it." Will took a deep breath and closed his eyes. "Don't think I'm going to treat you any different from any one else just because you're wearing shiny badges. I know my rights and you can't arrest me just because I said stuff to you."

Xinao grabbed Will's neck and threw him back. "Enough. I just want to pilot the Diminisher. I don't know about the other two, though."

Originally posted by Ballister
Xinao grabbed Will's neck and threw him back. "Enough. I just want to pilot the Diminisher. I don't know about the other two, though." Will smashed his fist into Xinao's nose causing blood to gush out. Then Will grabbed his arm and twisted it behind his back. "You can't pilot without arms." He shouted.

Charley shot a tazer at Will and hit him in the back. He shocked Will and he passed out. "I'm very sorry sir." Charley said to the general, picking up Will's unconscious body. "And you too." He said to Xinao. "I'll put him in the holding cells until he is willing to cooperate. Charley dragged Will out of the room and shut the door behind him.

(I'll see you guys tomorrow.)

Xinao relaxed his arm, then he pinched his nose. The cartlidge was smashed, and he bent it back in place.

"anyway i'm General Cosgrove" the general said

Will woke up in the holding cells, Charley was standing over him looking very angry. "I tell you to do one thing, don't start fights, and what do you do? You go and make suggestive comments about the general's mother!" Charley shouted smacking Will across the face.

Will got up. "Alright calm down! I didn't do anything wrong, I was just being me. If they can't handle then..." Will said, being interrupted by another smack from Charley.

He took a deep breath. "Alright let's try this again. How about instead of just not fighting you try not being yourself. You're lucky the general didn't sink a slug in your brain. I'm going to let you out of here if you promise to apologise to everyone."

Xinao looked to the general. "Hello."

Charley led Will back to the large room with the general and other pilots. "Remember Will. Any more problems and you won't go home with out most of your brain missing." He warned.

Will sat down in a chair and kept to himself. "Alright, focus. This is the chance of a lifetime. Don't screw up." He said to himself.

Xinao glanced at Will. Then he walked down to the center and hit a control panel. His Tron came up on screen. "What's this?"

"an alien race is invading earth and the only way to counter them was to create the Trons, it's not just a video game but real things we have links to every trons game made" Cosgrove said

Originally posted by Mandolorian
"an alien race is invading earth and the only way to counter them was to create the Trons, it's not just a video game but real things we have links to every trons game made" Cosgrove said Will couldn't hold back his amazement. "Are you serious? You mean the better we do at the game the more likely we will survive the invasion?" He said running to get a better look at everyone in the room. "This is crazy... Awesome!" He said, getting excited.

"Whatever. When do I get to pilot Diminisher?"

"in the testing" cosgrove said "i'll under two conditions i get a high rank and get to modify my tron" james said "okay Major Danniels" cosgrove said to mike

Will looked at Cosgrove. "Are these... Trons ready? Can we see them?" He asked, looking at the hologram.

"go ahead" cosgrove said

Originally posted by Mandolorian
"go ahead" cosgrove said Will laughed as he ran into the hallway. He stopped quickly and turned back around. "I'm not even going the right way, am I?" He said, looking around the room.

"it's through that door" cosgrove said pointing at a door in the oppisite side of the room

Will ran off in the direction pointed out by Cosgrove. Charley ran after him. "Wait! You have to be deloused! That's a clean room!" He shouted.