Qui-Gon's Error (story)

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Neobi Kenobi
Title: Qui-Gon's Error
Author: Neobi
Spoilers: JA15
Summary: Takes place during JA15. Instead of them both going to help the miners only Obi-Wan goes. And Qui-Gon pays a very high price for the error.

italic : thought
* : directly from book

Disclaimer: All characters and places belong to Gorge Lucas.

Neobi Kenobi

Neobi Kenobi
As Obi-Wan, Eritha, and Yanci neared the village they could hear the screams of the people and shots from blasters. Obi-Wan heard Yanci accelerate her swoop to the limit, Obi-Wan did the same with his transport.

They stopped at the entrance to the village, jumping out of their vehicles. Yanci raced ahead to a body on the ground; she knelt beside him ignoring the blaster fires above her head. Obi-Wan and Eritha saw the small explosive fly in her direction, both crying out. But she did not hear their cries and the explosive landing beside her.

Drawing his lightsaber as he ran he went to the people that held the blasters, knowing he was desperately out numbered.

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For Qui-Gon his search seemed to take hours, but in truth it was only a few vital minutes.

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More? Yes, no?

~Neobi

Gundark
Sure ! cool

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