potter poem

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sammii

~*LoverGirl21*~
this poem is good
did u write it?

sammii
yeh add more on if ya want

KruelKween
vury good thumb up

paliwal_ruppal
nice poem!really smile

sammii
so down they went through the trap door
they had never done any thing like this before
the dog was enchanted to fall asleep
down they crept without a peep

they fell into some devil,s snare
Hermione shouted"you have to relax"
as the snare was tightening round their backs
finally they were free, even more prepared

then came the giant chess board
looks like ere gonna hvto play Ron roared
the game was over
ron had hurt his shoulder

so on harry went to do it alone
thru the next door he could hear a moan

~*LoverGirl21*~
there in the middle stood a man
were a very big mirror stood in front

then came a pain in his scar
that only ment one thing
the dark lord wasn't very far

but how could it be that the person
in front of him wasn't what he had expected indeed

sammii
wow mint

Diamond~Kisses
Great!! The ryming was good, the whole thing was good. It could be improved, but there are no real areas.

sammii
cheers m8

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