Harry Potter and the Final Duel

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Garbo
So this is my version of the 7th book, I found this site a few days ago, and I decided that instead of waiting for other people to work on their stories, I would just make my own.

It's call Harry Potter and the Final Duel

it starts out kind of slow, or atleast I think but it gets a little better

I'm not too good of a writer but anyway give it a shot

Here it goes:

Garbo

H. S. 6
Leave a space in between every new paragraph. It looks easier to read that way. (It won't look like a big blod of text. wink )

Garbo
ok

thanks for the advice

Garbo

Garbo

Garbo

Garbo

Garbo
alright so thats all i wrote in the past two days and yeah if it sucks let me know cause then i wont waste everyones time

hey dudes
awsam write more its good

~*LoverGirl21*~
DAM ITS SO GOOD WRITE MORE PLEASE
ITS REALLY GOOD.

Garbo

Garbo
by the way guys, thanks for the support, I didnt think any one was gonna like it

~*LoverGirl21*~
AGAIN REALLY GOOD AND WELL WRITE WHEN U CAN.
EVEN THOUGH IT WAS SHORT IT WAS STILL GOOD.

Garbo

Garbo
ok i finished like 6 chapters and it would be really cool if you guys could tell me what you liked/disliked so that i can base my further writings on that

IcyMag3
i think the lastest chapter is best one so far
will you be updating often? Coz I quite like your work

Garbo
I plan to post at least once a day I may have to do less next week because I have mid terms to study for, but after that I'll be posting as often as possible

Garbo

~*LoverGirl21*~
IT WAS GREAT. PLIZ POST MORE =)

Garbo

Garbo

~*LoverGirl21*~
i love it love keep on posting pliz.

bookaddict3
its gr8 keep posting

Garbo

yoda545
nice write more
me no like cliffhangers

~*LoverGirl21*~
wat he said^

div
realli good story!

Me has anticipation now...
it's realli gd

Garbo
haha i just wanted to see what everyone would say about a cliff hanger

well anyway every one will have to wait til tomorrow, I should post then

Garbo

~*LoverGirl21*~
LOVED ITlove IT WAS GREAT
KEEP POSTING POST MORE
PLIZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!

hey dudes
write morew plz it is so great

dumbledorez.gal
this is great!!! keep on posting ur a great author

Garbo
wow sorry I havent posted in so long, I've been sick but now I'm better so here comes the story

Garbo

~*LoverGirl21*~
omg it was so good im glad ur better now =)
write more pliz

HpNpNy
Dylan its going great so far. You should checkout this lovergirl she really seems to be digging it.

Nick

Garbo
hey dildo this story is pretty shibby, ill c ya later,


Dan-O

dumbledorez.gal
hope you write more! this story is good!

Garbo
what the hell how did he leave that message from my name

~*LoverGirl21*~
yea thats what i was wondering i thought u (garbo) were just like messing around. or something like that well write more pliz.

Garbo
hi dylan wats goin on?

~*LoverGirl21*~
what????? ok i think he has the same username..................
this is weird.......wait u cant do that. there cant be two persons under the same name............????????

HPFanFicReader
Where is Garbo? Did he quit? Is he coming back? This sucks. He was doing awesome and he is really good.

dark_side_boy
you story is really great! please post more soon

dark_side_boy
does anyone know what happened to garbo??

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