Poem Fridays

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Cyber Ninja
Poem Fridays are when we enter our Poems on Fridays and then they get judged on which is the best, starting this Friday, so enter/start making them eeeeeek. Just in case no one sees this, I will be entering every Friday so there will be someone here to face. Most of the times there will be themes, or if no one can think of any, then pick what ever. Also, themes could come from a picture that a Judge or other, might post and we have to write a Poem on what we think the pic is saying, eeeeek. Usually you will get the theme on Monday, then work all the way and enter it on Friday eeeeeek.(Fri,Sat,Sun) will be judging days.

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PM me if you have any questions no expression

The first theme will be a Pirate's life pirate

Coldfire
Arrrr I'll see if I can think of something stick out tongue

Cyber Ninja
Originally posted by Coldfire
Arrrr I'll see if I can think of something stick out tongue laughing out loud evil face

Coldfire
Originally posted by Cyber Ninja
laughing out loud evil face
hehe wink

Cyber Ninja
It's a Pirates life fer me
Where I sail the seven seas
If ye ever mess with Cap'n hank
He will give ye a little spank
then will make ye walk the plank
full'a sharks and various dead parts

I now have thee treasure map
I'll be there ten seconds flat
on yon island shaped like a key
as far as the eye can see

I'll grab the island's bootie
Afore I head out to loot ye!

ARR RR RR RR
Yipity k I eee
It's a Pirate's life for me pirate

Coldfire
I'm sorry, but I'm really not in the mood to finish my pirate poem cry

I'll try to have it done for tomorrow though, I promise

Cyber Ninja
Originally posted by Coldfire
I'm sorry, but I'm really not in the mood to finish my pirate poem cry

I'll try to have it done for tomorrow though, I promise Is everything ok cry

lil bitchiness
Hehe, your Pirate poem is cute happy

Cyber Ninja
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Hehe, your Pirate poem is cute happy Thanks



Do I win eek!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Cyber Ninja
Is everything ok cry
I'm ok now hun, but thanks hug


Ok here's mine lol

Arrr a pirate do I be
Finest one you'll ever see
I now have the treasure map
I'll be there 10 seconds flat
On the island shaped like a key
No one can find except for me
I'll grab all the island's bootie
Afore I head out to loot ye!
And if ye do bar my way
A heavy price will ye pay
Ladies I woo with my big hat
Simply can't get better than that
I could not ask for any more
I have all I've been looking for.

CN helped me though because I was stuck stick out tongue

Ritoshi
Now we wait shock also the next Poem topic I wil say later today, YAY.

lil bitchiness
Originally posted by Cyber Ninja
Thanks



Do I win eek!

Yes! eek!

Ritoshi
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Yes! eek! eek! evil face

ok next topic of the next friday poem is called "I remember" where you write a poem on thing syou remembered in the past...could be happy...could be sad. eek!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
eek! evil face

ok next topic of the next friday poem is called "I remember" where you write a poem on thing syou remembered in the past...could be happy...could be sad. eek!
Told you you'd win stick out tongue

Could it be from the point of view of a fictional character, or does it have to be a real event that happened in your life??

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
Told you you'd win stick out tongue

Could it be from the point of view of a fictional character, or does it have to be a real event that happened in your life?? Doesn't matter eek! just remembering in general.

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Doesn't matter eek! just remembering in general.
Okies big grin *already has an inkling of an idea* eek!

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
Okies big grin *already has an inkling of an idea* eek! Fridday is right there so Don't forget eek!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Fridday is right there so Don't forget eek!
omg you're right eek I have most of it done... but I'm not sure if I'll be around tomorrow or Friday... but I'll see what I can do... might have to wait until Saturday hun sad

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
omg you're right eek I have most of it done... but I'm not sure if I'll be around tomorrow or Friday... but I'll see what I can do... might have to wait until Saturday hun sad HA HA, I gotta start mine today so I could post it tomorrow eek!
No Amber for 2 days cry how can I survive cry I will miss you, when you come back tell me about it eek! I will wait for you happy

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
HA HA, I gotta start mine today so I could post it tomorrow eek!
No Amber for 2 days cry how can I survive cry I will miss you, when you come back tell me about it eek! I will wait for you happy
Looks like I'll still be here tomorrow yay big grin Not finished the poem yet though lol. I'll work on it though! yes

Ritoshi
I freestyled this one on the spot so it sucks no expression

I remember when I was little
Always eating skittles
playing baseball in the park
even after dark

It wasn't all games, masking the pain
Trying not to end up insane.
I remember everything going wrong
trying to be strong, telling myself I must go on

Disorder as a child, people making fun
almost dieing from it, Oh I thought I was done
It didn't stop there, but I didn't really care
even it was to much to bare.

No true friends, House burning to the ground
me still here, not making a sound
still alone, after my new home
lots of other stuff, but can't
begin to start ....
Shit happens no expression

I swear I will do better on the next one shock

Coldfire
I Remember

I remember the darkness around me
I remember how I didn't want to see
The devastated look upon your face
When I told you I'd fallen from grace
And I've never felt the same amount of shame
When you agonizingly sofly whispered my name.

I remember the tears in your eyes
And the pain you could not disguise
I remember hating myself that day
And felt you did too, though you wouldn't say
Just what was going through your mind
But I knew forgiveness you wouldn't find.

I remember feeling my heart beat late;
Such a reaction I did not anticipate
And from this reaction did I feel dread;
Oh how I wished, I wished I was dead.
In your eyes I was no longer there
And I couldn't bear to see your empty stare.

I don't think we will ever reconsile
And if we do it will be a long while
But I don't think it is fair to you;
Your thoughts and actions I cannot misconstrue.
No more shall I haunt you with my presence;
Maybe then the healing will finally commence.

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
I Remember

I remember the darkness around me
I remember how I didn't want to see
The devastated look upon your face
When I told you I'd fallen from grace
And I've never felt the same amount of shame
When you agonizingly sofly whispered my name.

I remember the tears in your eyes
And the pain you could not disguise
I remember hating myself that day
And felt you did too, though you wouldn't say
Just what was going through your mind
But I knew forgiveness you wouldn't find.

I remember feeling my heart beat late;
Such a reaction I did not anticipate
And from this reaction did I feel dread;
Oh how I wished, I wished I was dead.
In your eyes I was no longer there
And I couldn't bear to see your empty stare.

I don't think we will ever reconsile
And if we do it will be a long while
But I don't think it is fair to you;
Your thoughts and actions I cannot misconstrue.
No more shall I haunt you with my presence;
Maybe then the healing will finally commence. Well its obvious who the winner is lol

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Well its obvious who the winner is lol
lol is it? stick out tongue

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
lol is it? stick out tongue lol no need for a judge, I give this one to you hands down eek! as the winner you get to pick the topic for next week friday eek

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
lol no need for a judge, I give this one to you hands down eek! as the winner you get to pick the topic for next week friday eek
wow yay eek! Pick the topic eh??? Hmmmm.... *thinks* How about.... dreams? eek!

Syren
Holy fecking hell, Coldfire! That's brilliant!

toot

Coldfire
Originally posted by Syren
Holy fecking hell, Coldfire! That's brilliant!

toot
eek! Really?? eek!

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
wow yay eek! Pick the topic eh??? Hmmmm.... *thinks* How about.... dreams? eek! Sounds good eek! I will not freestyle this time no expression

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Sounds good eek! I will not freestyle this time no expression
stick out tongue kisses

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
stick out tongue kisses droolio

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
droolio
happy

I only have 2 lines of my poem done stick out tongue

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
happy

I only have 2 lines of my poem done stick out tongue I have none eek!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
I have none eek!
Get to work then eek!

Ritoshi
Originally posted by Coldfire
Get to work then eek! I will eek!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
I will eek!
I will too eek!

Coldfire

Ritoshi

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
love thumb up
aw thanks kisses love

Ritoshi
Well lol, I couldn't finish it and its a week late. BAH, i just can't get the words out.

I have Nightmares, I have Dreams.
My Nightmares a reality and my Dreams fantasty.
Must be my curse, must be my burden.

I can not run, I can not hide
for this is my destiny, my fate.
Is there no hope, is there no escape.
Speak of my troubles, I do not
for what of it matters, it will not stop.

What am I searching for, what am I missing.
In my sorrow times, where do I go
overwhelmed, overpowered
I need something to hang on to .
I searched and searched
but nothing heleped.

With all this going on, with all this happening
I became lost, but soon found
By an Angel with long brown hair
glowing green eyes, and a heart lonley as my own....

To be continued in 500 years.

Syren
Amber thumb up

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Well lol, I couldn't finish it and its a week late. BAH, i just can't get the words out.

I have Nightmares, I have Dreams.
My Nightmares a reality and my Dreams fantasty.
Must be my curse, must be my burden.

I can not run, I can not hide
for this is my destiny, my fate.
Is there no hope, is there no escape.
Speak of my troubles, I do not
for what of it matters, it will not stop.

What am I searching for, what am I missing.
In my sorrow times, where do I go
overwhelmed, overpowered
I need something to hang on to .
I searched and searched
but nothing heleped.

With all this going on, with all this happening
I became lost, but soon found
By an Angel with long brown hair
glowing green eyes, and a heart lonley as my own....

To be continued in 500 years.
I quite like what you have so far eek! aww hug
Originally posted by Syren
Amber thumb up
eek! Thankies hehe hug

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