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remus lupin sat in the study of number twelve grimwald place and was reading a letter from minevera mcgonagall that asked him to come and teach D.A.D.A at hogwarts again he replyed with a simple "yes i would love to".

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nymphadora tonks sat in office at the minstry for magic and read the request that she come teach potions at hogwarts. and also she could help with extra protection from the death eaters incase they came for harry or the weaslys or granger she scribbled her reply " yes minevrea i will thank you for asking me"

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harry potter sat in ginny weaslys room and listend to her beg him for them to go out again reminding him what dumbledore said about beating voldemort with love. " harry be reasonable please we can date each other i mean i love you and well i dont know if you love me but if you do that should be enough." " i will think about it gin". said a very worn out harry.

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hermione granger sat in ron and harrys room (harry was living with them now that he was of age). she pushed on rons chest to break the kiss; she needed to catch her breath she and ron sat there breathing heavily when they herd a little giggle outside of the door it was natilea bill and flurs little girl. hermione opend the door suddenly scarring the little girl and sending her flying down the stairs calling " granny, granny, guess what; uncle ron and hermy-onie were kissin the were kissin !!!!!" ron turned redder than a red hot and hermione laughed.. hermione and ron walked down stairs only to find half of the order laughing at the little girls explanation of why she was screaming.


thats all for now tell me how you like..

it was quite good but i have 1 question...Bill and Fluers little girl???whats that all about???this is like the 7th year right?

yea 7th year and they havent even been married yet and use CAPITALS. its makes it easier to read but i love the cute little girl kissin thing but you shouldv'e have wirtten about bill and flluers wedding. They shouldnt even have a kid yet.

you are both right about the little girl i guess i moved to fast. i will fix that and thank you for the advice

it's good so far, but the little girl part kinda confused me.

o.k. so im fixin my story here

preface:

"Arthur,Arhtur please come here;Arthur?!" Shouted a frantic Mrs.Weasly. Mr.Weasly came down stairs and asked exasperaredly " What is is Molly I'm kind of busy here." just then bill came down with his face coverd in some type of material (it looked like toilet paper). " Oh dear Bill what is it now?" Mrs. Weasly asked her son. " I cant get married to Flur with scars on my face so I will cover them." He stated sadly. And then suddenly like she knew she was being talked about Flur appeared on the last stair carrying a wailing infant about to turn two. and asked " Vhat eez eet bill? And vhy do you haf tolet papur on your head?" Bill looked at her and the flailing infant and said " its not toilet paper its a bandage. and i cant marry you with theese scars on my face. When you have a perfecly beautiful face." with a tired sigh Flur said " Bill take your daughter I am goeng to take a shower and then ve vill talk." She handed over the tiny little girl and with that she left the room the little girl crying after her.

skip one week Bill and Flurs wedding

Everything was perfect to harry except the fact he couldent date the girl he loved; for fear of getting her killed. " This wedding is almost as depressing as Dumbledore's funeral" he wisperd to ron who was sitting next hermione and holding hands with her. " Why" asked ron very quietly. " Because after this I have to go and kill Voldemort and I know I cant marry the girl I want to" he wisperd back as the family who could hear them cringed. Ginny on the other side of the isle could only vagely here the pastor preforming the cerimony because she was wrestling with Natilea who turned two, three days before the wedding. Natilea could almost talk like a grown person;" I guess her mother has more brains than I thought." She said to herself and she could almost swear she saw harry double over in laughter on his seat. Ginny looked up and saw Bill and Flur kiss, it was over. Bill and Flur turned to everyone and Ginny let go of Natilea and the little girl jumped out of her chair and ran to her parents making the audience laugh.

there is that better i know that bill and flur had a baby before the got married and stuff but i dont see how i could fit natilea in the story unless they had her before they got married.

ok its pretty good! but this si getting on my nerves sry but its not Flur its Fluer

LOL I will keep that in mind

wen r u gonna post mur?

it's okay, can't wait for more though

Ok so here is more story oh and im going to pick up where i left off before i wrote the preface ( the part when ron and hermione walk downstairs and half of the order is laughing at natilea.)

Ron and Hermione had just walked into the room when Natilea finished her story. " And then Uncle Ron was kissin Hermy-ione" " HA-HA-HA" she forced a laugh. Mad-Eye looked up at Ron and made a kissing noise; when the group heard an all together too real kissing noise and turned around to see Tonks kissing Lupin.

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Lupin was suprised at first, and then he let out a small groan, he had wanted this for so long.....
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Sorry I know its short but I have to go tell me how you liked it

OK I'm bored more story!!

..... Tonks was shocked at her own boldness. She heard lupin grown and then she tried to push away from him but he held on to her tightly. She tried to show him that she wasn't sure she wanted to continue by staying stiff, but it didn't work she melted to him she felt him deepen the kiss and then it was her turn to groan. she was thinking to her self " wow, we fit perfectly" when he pulled away she heard him gasp for air, as she did the same. Tonks was still in her own world when she heard Mad-Eye whistle and say " its about time!" Everyone laughed..

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Somewhere of in the distance a young boy was sobbing and kissing the hem of his masters robes " Master,Master,please i know i let snape do it please understand master i was scared please master,please" Draco malfoy sobbed. Lord Voldemort had bound his parents to make them watch there only son be torcherd. "hahaha You fool of a boy do you think that you can get out of punishment by crying at me like a baby, NO YOU CANT!! Draco,Draco i have invented a new spell I'm not sure what it does but you are going to help me with that aren't you? YES YOU ARE!! alright here it goes.......limbotoria!!!" voldemort screamed;then laughed. Draco looked down at the point of the white hot pain all the time he was screaming in agony but what he saw made the scream stop in his throat when he looked down he saw............. well thats all for now!! how do you like? comment please.

your story is good. keep posting!

exellent!!!continue!!!

...... He looked down to the point of white hot pain all the time screaming in agony and what he saw made the scream stop in his throat all of his fingers had been detached at the nuckle like an invisable axe chopped them off he had just enough time to hear his mothers scream and voldemorts high pitched scream of a laugh before the darkness surrounded him....

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Harry was sitting in his and Rons room, listening to ron explain how he almost got to second base with hermione for about the third time in one hour. " Ron I know you almost got to second base with hermione before natilea walked in on you guys again, but could we please talk about somthing else now, the mental image of my two best friends rubbing each other down is grossing me out!" harry said. Just then Ginny walked in the room and said " Harry we need to talk you havent spoken to me for three days!!!" ginny yelled. " Well see you later mate" said ron eyeing ginny. " Harry i dont care if voldemort wants to kill me i want to date you." " Ginny will you go out with me?" they said in unison. Ginny obviously heard him bcause one moment he was sitting the next Ginny was on top of him with her tounge in his mouth.........

well tell me how you liked it please!!! i know its short but i lost my work and i had to re-wirite it

G8!!!update soon!!!

well i like it but it seems like you've written it out of own experience. But i like the tension and your writing style but try to write more in your posts

thank you for the advice i will keep it in mind and also thank you for the support. and if you have any ideas tell me and i will find a way to work them into the story.

skip the next day with tonks in her office.

Tonks looked up from her letter and looked out the window, " I love Remus and he loves me" she thought with a faint smile on her face. " Who love who?" asked Alidia her partner. " Oh did i say that out loud?" tonks asked with a small laugh. Before Alidia could answer a snowy white owl that she new to be Harry's tapped on her window. Tonks jumped out of her chair and grabbed the bird ripping at the letter afraid of the worst for harry instead she read this:
dearest tonks,
please meet me at the leaky cauldron on July 31 we will spend a few days there before escorting the children to hogwarts. and i have a question for you it is very important.

yours truly R. Lupin

Well i wonder what he wants she thought she sat down and couldn't think of anything to say but yes it sounds lovely.
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" Ronald where are we going?" Hermione asked Ron for about the fifth time in three minutes. " We are going somewhere to be alone for a while I'm sick of natilea bursting in on us whenever we start to....." he let the sentence trail off. Hermione just giggled and turned a pretty shade of pink. they came to little shack on the side of the house. " But Ronald wont natilea find us here?" " No she thinks its haunted". Hermione laughed again. Ron opened the door and what he found shocked him; " Harry what the bloody hell do you think your doing to my sister?" harry and Ginny were standing in the shed both with their shirts off and Ginny was in the process of taking Harry's pants down. they both dressed quickly and left with out another word to Ron or Hermione until later that night.
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Ginny sat in her room and Hermione came into the room " Ginny i hope you know that your really wanted to do that with harry because" Ginny cut her off "of course i wanted to how many times do i have to say it i love harry and that will not change!" Shouted Ginny who then rolled over and cryed herself to sleep

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" I hope your bloody happy harry you ruined my little sister successfully" Ron shouted at harry. " Listen Ron i didn't mean for it to go that far... and what if i marry Ginny one day..huh? did you ever think of that we would be true brothers then! so lay off a bit because i wouldst do that with any body i didn't love OK?" harry said " w-w-wait did you just say you love my sister? because if you did that would be great! i mean me and Hermione getting married...." he stopped short " I should not have said that she didn't want me to tell...she is going to kill me." he said with a sheepish grin. " your marrying Hermione? mate thats great good for you." harry said "yea just don't tell you know we weren't going to tell until the end of the school year. and you should get some sleep tomorrows your birthday. well good night."............. thats all for now how did you like it ?

well personally i think you going to quick with the marriage thing. You shoul dhave waited until after the school year to tell us that they were going to get m,arried it would make it a happy ending but otherwise its relli good

ok thanks for the post i have major writers bolck right now so ill post soon as i get some more ideas!!

oh and i brought out the fact about ron and hermione getting married for a good reason..you just have to wait for it to take effect!!

nice. i like it. keep posting!

Same here I like it as well so ummm. G2G

OK you guys i cant sleep so i thought i would write a little bit more story!

" Harry,Harry wake up mum says its time for your birthday breakfast" Ginny said Harry opened his eyes slowly and said " Five more minutes." "no now" ginny said pressing her lips to his and laughing a little bit " " Harry hurry up lupin and tonks are here and they need to talk to you." ginny said before walking out the door swaying her hips heavily. harry looked over to Ron and saw that he and Hermione were arm in arm asleep together. he laughed softly before getting a quick shower and getting dressed and going down stairs.when he got there he saw everyone he considered his family all except.......Sirius and his real family he sighed heavily and walked the rest of the way into the room " Well is a-bou time i am hungry and mummy made me wait for you" said natilea Fleur hushed her quickly and said " Appy birthday arry" sweeping over to him to give him a kiss on each cheek. ginny gave her a disgusted look that bill saw and he burst out laughing Fleur turned around and asked he husband " vhat ees eet bill?" " oh , nothing he said hitting ginny playfully on the arm."lupin looked up and smiled faintly at harry and harry noticed that he was playing with tonks fingers under the table and rubbing her hand with his thumb every so often. tonks looked at harry and smiled and then looked at lupin adoringly before saying "happy birthday harry, and i have to go to work now but i will See you soon" she stood and pecked lupin on his lips and apparated before he could kiss her back. ginny then came to stand with harry and he put his arm around her waist before pulling her out a chair and then sitting himself. polite conversation was made until they heard a shrill scream from Hermione. harry was the first to the stairs lupin right behind him harry noticed that Fred and George were holding back ginny and natilea he burst through the door and saw Ron on top of Hermione chocking her and saying in an all too familiar voice "where is harry?! where is harry?!" " I don't know!" Hermione wailed. "I'm right here you stupid git!" yelled harry. Ron looked up and his eyes were pure whit and an evil grin spread across his face " Just the person i was looking for" said voldemorts cold cruel voice.......... thats all for know hope you enjoyed!!

ooo great a cliffhanger!!!lol it was very good update soon!!!

so voldemort was in ron's body or was he just using a poly juice potion? But its good i guess

OMG! okay first none of you can spell it's FLEUR!!!!!! meaning flower not fluer...that sounds liek a bad flu or something. TWo sorry but this just doesn't work for me....bill and fleur wouldn't have a child old enough to do all of this. THREE! sorry to sound liek a mod but you need spoilers if your gonna continue with expicit nature, or it will be closed.
and finally the story is going alittle fast, i don't think ron adn hermonie would get married quite so soon, or decide to, and harry and ginny wouldn't be doing it in a shed, harry is more classy and would do it right...sorry but i'm nto believe this at all.
(sorry for being a jerk)

personally i think that too. I like the concept of the story though so ill keep reading it.

same here.

i thought it was good...a little fast though. and it's easier to read if you do it in a new paragraph every time someone speaks.

thank you for the advice and opinoins and tigereyes you dont sound like a jerk...LoL im stubborn i need the hard truth!!

so when are you gonna post again?

sorry for the delay im really sick right now i will post asap!!! promise

ok, but keep going the story is really good!!! and i hope you get better!!!

i like it so keep going with the story! cant wait for more

I loved it
hi I'm new but i love ur story please keep writing or in this case typing lol

Ron and harry began deuling, while evryone else went out side. Molly went to go floo the order. curses and hexe's and jinxe's were flying all over the place, then at the same time as each other ron/voldemort and harry both said the killing curse, voldemort's missed but harry's hit dead center a high pitched wail filled the room, harry watched in horror as rons body got it's coloring back and his eye's turbed to normal and then ron dropped to the floor, lifelessly.


don't hate me but this is all i can coe up with i know its like really really short but i will post more soon and plus i have like four other story's im typing right now on this website

fanfiction.net when you get to the homepage click on the search link and type in my screen name. my screen name is

misses-charlie-weasly,
so yeah chek it out and tell me what you think of my story's there!

latah my freaky friends

nnnnoooooo!!!! coome back i really like ur story

ok problems with the story first off you said Harry was living with the Weasley's because he was of age, then you also have his birthday, which either means you made a mistake, or we skipped entire year seven which would make Ron/Voldemort make sense, but if it is still seventh year, it wouldn't happen so soon, Voldemort is to worried about his horcruxes.

Originally posted by TigerEyes
OMG! okay first none of you can spell it's FLEUR!!!!!! meaning flower not fluer...that sounds liek a bad flu or something. TWo sorry but this just doesn't work for me....bill and fleur wouldn't have a child old enough to do all of this. THREE! sorry to sound liek a mod but you need spoilers if your gonna continue with expicit nature, or it will be closed.
and finally the story is going alittle fast, i don't think ron adn hermonie would get married quite so soon, or decide to, and harry and ginny wouldn't be doing it in a shed, harry is more classy and would do it right...sorry but i'm nto believe this at all.
(sorry for being a jerk)

You need to learn how to spell before you start correcting peoples mistakes.
For instance I was taught to spell like L-I-K-E.
Not L-I-E-K
Use a dicitonary next time!

Originally posted by harrypotterluvr
Ron and harry began deuling, while evryone else went out side. Molly went to go floo the order. curses and hexe's and jinxe's were flying all over the place, then at the same time as each other ron/voldemort and harry both said the killing curse, voldemort's missed but harry's hit dead center a high pitched wail filled the room, harry watched in horror as rons body got it's coloring back and his eye's turbed to normal and then ron dropped to the floor, lifelessly.


don't hate me but this is all i can coe up with i know its like really really short but i will post more soon and plus i have like four other story's im typing right now on this website

fanfiction.net when you get to the homepage click on the search link and type in my screen name. my screen name is

misses-charlie-weasly,
so yeah chek it out and tell me what you think of my story's there!

latah my freaky friends


You should contiue.
Maybe this will help.


Ron woke up an hour later. "What happened? Why am I on the floor?" asked Ron, who was really confused.
"Uh, well, you were being posesed by Voldemort, you attacked Hermione, who's fine by the way, and you and me dueled for a bit, and that's how you got on the floor." said Harry "Ummmm, okay" said Ron
Hermione soon came in with a pink robe covering her night dress. She kneeled near Ron. "Are you okay, Ron? Don't worry about me, I'll be fine. Did you hurt yourself? You know you really scared me." said Hermione without breathing. "Hermione, calm down. I'm okay. Sorry about hurting you." he laughed.
"Don't worry about it." she laughed.
Harry and Hermione helped him up to his room to rest.


Now you guys can do the rest

thank you for your help, and i will definetly continue this story, i just started my first year of high school so it might be a couple days, and i have more experience so be expecting better writing!! and thank you nickey!

Originally posted by harrypotterluvr
thank you for your help, and i will definetly continue this story, i just started my first year of high school so it might be a couple days, and i have more experience so be expecting better writing!! and thank you nickey!

You're welcome.
And I hope u do well in H.S

thanx again!

I LOVED IT

jawdropjawdropjawdropjawdrop

IT IS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE POST MORE!!

is this ur own version of harry potter

I think you're doing great! Just take your time. The best authors didn't come up with their novels or sequels over night.