Rate my poem.. please?

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DarkRaven

doomsday49
simple, a little sappy, but pretty good. i'm impress.

DarkRaven
yeah I know it sounds like an obsession to me but it's still a pretty poem
thanx

Coldfire
"Your just so great
Your all I adore"

watch the yours. Should be "you are" or "you're" smile

But other than that, yeah it was quite sappy (even though I shouldn't talk! haha stick out tongue ), but I enjoyed it happy

DarkRaven

Spawn_Master
Originally posted by Coldfire
"Your just so great
Your all I adore"

watch the yours. Should be "you are" or "you're" smile

But other than that, yeah it was quite sappy (even though I shouldn't talk! haha stick out tongue ), but I enjoyed it happy laughing

tuyenasaurus
short and nice

DarkRaven
Thank you

MistressofSnape
Prettyful.

Thorinn
I thought it was a very nice poem. thumbup

DarkRaven
Thank you guys a friend That I was really close to wrote it for me....

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