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Risquer

shipwreck
That was awsome.......i felt it........Shipwreck

Risquer
The dark meadows whisper sweetly
Almost the most melodious sound
Their hate almost covered completely
And evil almost never found
She wanders among the grey stone rocks
Her eyes wandering to the sea
Her short red hair held up in locks
And a skirt that reaches below her knees
She sees through violet and the lightest blue
With the sun kiss look of white
The one girl that no one did pursue
Like the sweetness did tonight
She sang softly to the horizon
Voice giving a hypnotizing feel
A voice that would never frighten
And that holds so much appeal
And out of the mist he came
Like some dark phantom tall
Whether known or not it was all the same
For he did not care at all
They walked and talked together
Of things they wished they were
And his voice was full of endeavour
To do the things that would concur
And so she sang with the grass
To calm his fretful heart
With a voice as pure as crystal glass
So he took her in his arms
And led her on a dance
To keep her out of harm
It was like they fell into a trance
So taken by their charm
As he danced out upon the waves
And her voice rose above the wind
Out of the blood of his heart he gave
Sorrows melted and thinned
So seek and you shall find
The place where smiles grow
Wipe your tears and clear your mind
Find the place where you know

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Risquer

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Opaleye92
smile omg, risquer those poems are amazing. i love them. they're really deep, i hope you post some more because i would love to read them.

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