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This will probably get closed.

cool, different but interesting

it was a warm afternoon with a plesant scent of honeysuckle travelling on the breeze, as i remember it me and my sisters had been on the balcony when we heard the news, the news that would change our lives forever. Mum had brought the envelope up to us, she was crying when she handed cathrine the letter, as she read her face changed from a healthy shade of pink to a dreadful cold shade of white. I was frightened when i was handed the letter i was right to be scared for i read the most gut-wrenching news of my life.

Dear miss anterov,
as you know your husband egor anterov went to work for the order approxamately one month ago,
It came to out attention 2 weeks ago that your husbands mission was supposed to be completed in one week.
We sent out a search party and they have come to the final conclusion
your husband has been killed in action.

my condolances,
Albus Dumbledore

p.s. It is no longer safe for them to stay here, you slall be coming to live at the place your girls will now attend hogwartsgoodday

I like it. A lot of grammer mistakes and I mean a lot.

Interesting... but I would work on the grammar!

im not very good at grammer sorry

Hey, that's ok!!

yeah, everyone has there flaws in writing