My Pirate Song

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Jack of Blades
First of all dont post anything stupid ok?
if you dont like it here go away.
and now i start my litlle tale to make you think about a whale whos in the sea behind a tree
Ok so it was well prety late at night and the electricity was out couz there was lithing and thunder and rain(just how i like it) so i standed on my balcony and thinking looking in the sky.And so i started singing yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me.and so i thought that ill make a song a song but i didnt get any far but here is how far i got.But i need some help to make it so if any of you(I hope pirate fan and no stupid stuff) woud like to help me please do.
So here
part 1:Yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me yo ho.
We plunder we pilige we murder fight there no one here to give us a fight
exept a couple of boomsticks and a box of bulets to fight us off while noone is home.
Yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me
part 2:When its a stormy night and not very bright we go in to the sea and see many flee,we fight for food much gold and some rum to pass the day with out-i cant think anything else right now so please will you help me?

diddly-dum
I'll pick-up on part two:When its a stormy night and not very bright we go in to the sea and see many flee,we fight for food much gold and some rum to pass the day with out light. We schrimage and pilage and plunder. No stands up to give a fight, so we take flight that night,..

Okay, someone elses turn!

Jack of Blades
that was good but in one places i think it shoud be diferent
We schrimage and pilage and plunder-We schrimage,plunder and pilige

diddly-dum
Okay, I'll continue w/ part 3.
Part 3: On dark night with clouds as black as or hearts, we saw on the horizon a blue flag. It came closer till we could see it was the sail of the Force(Navy).
"Full speed ahead!" Yelled the captain!
"Aye,Aye!"
"Pull out the canons on th Port side!" he ordered us....

It probably souds more of a story than a song,.. Well, I'm not much of a singer!

Jack of Blades
a Big Blue flag

diddly-dum
How about YOU continue!! Are you writing this down??

Jack of Blades
No not realy im just saying what i sounds beter to me.it may sound beter to you like you wrote it.there is No need to be angry

diddly-dum
I'm not angry,.. just wondering if you could come up with something!
Plus,.. It might be cool if someone wrote this all down!(like you)

Jack of Blades
Well the song is not ready yet and people shoud have fun trying to right it.

diddly-dum
I'll continue then,..
Part 4: The canons booming, men yelling orders, blood welling outta those that fell. The scene was over when we heard a bell.
"The King." said the captain, he turned and so did we all.
A ship larger than any seen came outta the fog.
"That's no king's ship!" the captain said a bit surprised,
It twas not, For it held a Jolly Roger 'bout it's mast,...


Someone continue!!!! It's too hard for one person!

Jack of Blades
part5:The cannons the gold the rum and the sea are only some things for pirates to belive.a ship is there kingdom and and crew is his people but the is his home and not any land no house nor mouse

diddly-dum
Sounds kinda,.. Dr. Suse-ish

Jack of Blades
Yes well im not in a creative mood right now

diddly-dum
Roew! Hiss!cat
Gosh, who gave you a wedgy??

CaptinJackLover
LOL!

diddly-dum
Part 6: The rum is drunk, and so are the men, Then we decided to cook a hen.

All out of creativity today!

CaptinJackLover
LOL!

diddly-dum
Just for fun,..
"Yo Ho Yo Ho a pirates life for me! We pilage n' plundern' squat to pick our nose"

Like I said,.. All outta creativity for today!

Vinnie105
on what music is your song based, if you got some i'd love to here the tune, that'll give me a shitload of inspiration i think ^^

Jack of Blades
Well have you Played Pirates of Caribbean game?There was this song with it when pirates sing that Yo ho To ho.Well that is the tune i think woud be good if you know it offcourse

diddly-dum
Nope! Not known to me!

Jack of Blades
Its a shame that you havent heard it

diddly-dum
nothing learned, nothing gained!

CaptinJackLover
LOL!

diddly-dum
big grin

CaptinJackLover
YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE TEETH JoB!!!!! laughing Happy Dance big grin

diddly-dum
hysterical

CaptinJackLover
big grin big grin big grin stick out tongue big grin big grin big grin

Jack of Blades
Yours even worse dance

diddly-dum
OHHH Slap shot!

CaptinJackLover
THANK YOU. I APPRECIATE YOUR OH SO KIND COMPLIMENTS! YOUR QUITE FABULOUS YOURSELF! big grin big grin stick out tongue stick out tongue stick out tongue big grin big grin Happy Dance Happy Dance Happy Dance

diddly-dum
I wonder how JoB is taking this!
Ih! JoB,.. how old are you?

CaptinJackLover
HE ISNT GONNA SAY. I ASKED HIM ALREADY

diddly-dum
shit(poo) on him!

Jack of Blades
i sed nothing stupid in this topic bangin

CaptinJackLover
EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS STUPID..NO OFFENCE OR ANYTHING Happy Dance

diddly-dum
You started it!

CaptinJackLover
WHO ME?? OR JoB?

diddly-dum
JoB

CaptinJackLover
OO OK FOR A SECOND I THOUGHT YOU WERE ON HIS SIDE

Jack of Blades
What did i do?You started posting these things here not me

CaptinJackLover
Why do you take everything so seriously?! we are just joking around.

o and you were the one who wanted people to start writing in this thread to help with your song. and Diddly-Dum did but you kept changing what she wrote dont you think thats kind of mean. thats the only reason why i said that stuff. because you were having abad attitude with her.

Jack of Blades
Ok ok im sory now can we stop arguing ok?

CaptinJackLover
ok.

diddly-dum
I'll continue with the song,.. what verse were we on??

CaptinJackLover
i have no idea! like 6 or 7 or sumthing like that probably

diddly-dum
Okay Scene 1, TAke 6,... I mean Part 6: Stormy were the day, and cool were the nights, but as we entered navy land we began to fright.
No longer was it safe, no longer was it nice, to sail all day and night.

diddly-dum
Verse 7: Scruvy flew around the ship and strangly affected our hips. Sailing was tough but we are gruff, so we sailed all night and day.

Jack of Blades
what is gruff?

diddly-dum
I think another word for tough, or strong,..

Jack of Blades
oo ok

diddly-dum
c'mon, make a verse!

Jack of Blades
8:We love the sea and live to be free to sail and drink all day and night so noones gonna be our boss

diddly-dum
9: The Jolly Roger is our sign to bin' thoughs that we hate

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