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Hi guys I'm new but I am a HUGE fan of POTC and of all of your writings I've literally read all of the posts and I have to thank willo and kate and diddly especialy! you guys made my day with At worlds endur take and POC4 our version now I thought it would be fun to write what we THINK will hapeen instead of what we WANT to happen. I have the first 56 pages of the early draft and I'm going to post it here and we can continue the rest! I hope you all write cause if we think of what disney, Ted, Terry and gore want we can make something maybe SLIGHTLY close to what will hapeen. so don't read my next posts if you don't wanna know the first 56 pages of the script!

omg, love the siggy! and welcome aboard the Black Pearl, tee pirate girl. one positive thing bout the POTC forum is that we treat all people with respect, even the noobs. trust me, i was new once. the other forums, everyone are jerks and all say ur from the OTF or off-topic forum which is basically where all the nerdy kids hang who have no lives........no offense

>JACK SPARROW
>(turns) Fact is, I don't. I'm perfectly happy. Here. It's very
>(tries to think of something good) Simple.
>
>Will and Barbossa exchange a look.
>
>JACK SPARROW(CONT'D)
>But if I do agree to help you out of this mess, it shall be as
>nothing less than Captain.
>
>Barbossa shakes his head.
>
>BARBOSSA
>I'm Captain on the return voyage.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Then you shouldn't have misplaced your ship.
>
>BARBOSSA
>I see my ship - - right there.
>
>He points at the Black Pearl. Jack looks in the direction of the
>Black Pearl. Squints, covers his eyes, pointedly searching, as if he
>can't see Barbossa's ship. Keeps squinting, keeps searching.
>Barbossa sighs, losing his patience.
>Jack squints some more, bobs up and down on his toes, keeps
>searching - -
>
>BARBOSSA
>(CONT'D)
>All right! Only I know the route home.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>That would make you - - the navigator.
>
>BARBOSSA
>Captain.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Cook?
>
>BARBOSSA
>Captain.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Coxswain.
>
>Will steps between the two.
>
>WILL
>Enough. Jack is rightfully Captain of his ship.
>
>Will draws his sword and slashes it to within a millimeter of Jack's
>eye - -
>
>- - then whirls and stops it a millimeter from Barbossa's eyes.
>
>WILL(CONT'D)
>All decisions subject to my approval. Understood?
>
>JACK SPARROW
>As Captain, I am pleased to name as First Mate Master Barbossa.
>
>WILL
>(raises an eyebrow at Barbossa) Agreed?
>
>BARBOSSA
>I can deal with First Mate. (grins) It worked out fine for me late
>time.
>
>Barbossa holds out his hand. Jack looks at it, grimaces.
>
>BARBOSSA
>(CONT'D)
>An uneasy alliance?
>
>JACK SPARROW
>An unholy one.
>
>EXT. BLACK PEARL
>
>Sailing the darkness between worlds.
>Below the surface of the water, bodies float past, each in its
>current.
>Pintel and Ragetti watch over the side.
>
>PINTEL
>Eerie.
>
>RAGETTI
>(musing) I wonder what would happen if you dropped a cannonball on
>one of 'em.
>
>They look at each other - - let's find out! Pintel starts to hunt
>for a cannonball. Barbossa, walking past, fixes them with a stern
>look.
>Sheepishly, they return to just looking over the rail.
>
>PINTEL
>Be disrespectful, it would.
>
>Ragetti spots something ahead: a small boat, coming toward them, lit
>by a lantern's glow.
>
>RAGETTI
>Another boat coming.
>Elizabeth glances out at it, then peers more closely.
>She recognizes the passenger.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Father! Here! Look here!
>
>Swann glances over.
>
>SWANN
>Elizabeth!(concern) Are you dead?
>
>ELIZABETH
>No.
>
>Swann nods at that. Elizabeth has to move along the rail of the
>Pearl, toward the stern, to keep pace with him.
>
>SWANN
>I think I am.
>
>ELIZABETH
>How?
>
>SWANN
>(has trouble recalling) Beckett? He's what? He's waiting for the
>pirates to gather and How odd. At the time, it seemed so important.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Come aboard! (to the others) Cast out a line! (to Swann) Come back
>with us!
>
>Crewmen prepare a line, too slowly for Elizabeth. She grabs it from
>them, casts it out. It lands neatly in Swann's boat, but he makes no
>move toward it. Due to the action of the two vessels passing, it
>begins to slip toward the edge of the boat.
>
>ELIZABETH(CONT'D)
>Take the line!
>
>SWANN
>(suddenly; this is important) Elizabeth.
>
>She gives him his full attention.
>
>SWANN(CONT'D)
>When I would reprimand you to obey the rules, it was because I did
>not want you to ever be unhappy. But I should have recognized in
>your willfulness your courage. I am proud of you, Elizabeth.
>
>The line is about to slip from Swann's boat.
>
>ELIZABETH
>The line! Catch the line!
>
>The end of the line falls into the water.
>
>ELIZABETH(CONT'D)
>Father!
>
>His boat is near the aft of the Pearl.
>
>ELIZABETH
>(CONT'D)
>Come back with us! Please! I won't le you go!
>
>She climbs the rail. Will gets there slightly ahead of Jack to haul
>her back.
>
>SWANN
>I'll give your love to your mother, then, shall I?
>
>Elizabeth stares after him; nods slightly, accepting.
>The light of the boat's lantern is swallowed up by the darkness.
>She looks back to the others.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Beckett is waiting for the pirates to gather.
>
>BARBOSSA
>The Brethren.
>
>ELIZABETH
>We have to warn them. He has to die.
>
>She moves away. Will, Barbossa and Jack watch her go.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>I personally have no reservations about that plan.
>
>EXT. BLACK PEARL - MAIN DECK - SUNSET
>
>Barbossa watches the sun hover over the horizon.
>
>BARBOSSA
>It's not getting to the land of the dead is the problem, so much as
>getting away.
>
>Tia Dalma has wrapped herself in the rigging.
>
>TIA DALMA
>I feel it in my soul, if we do not escape this night, we will sail
>trackless seas, under starless skies, to our doom.
>
>Gibbs, Elizabeth and Will are gathered around the charts Jack sits
>curled like a cat on one of the sails.
>
>GIBBS
>There's a cheery thought.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>At least our demise sounds poetic.
>
>BARBOSSA
>Aye, the charts give us a day to sail free.
>
>Pintel and Ragetti sit opposite each other on a table.
>Ragetti's wooden eye is out, rolling on the table with the sway of
>the ship.
>Elizabeth reads from the charts.
>
>ELIZABETH
>"Up is down on the mirrored sea, when sun rise sets at the flash of
>green."
>
>WILL
>Flash of green?
>
>BARBOSSA
>On rare occasions, when the sun sets, there is a green flash on the
>horizon. They say - -
>
>GIBBS/PINTEL
>... that's the only time a soul can transition between worlds.
>
>Gibbs and Pintel glare at each other, the two storytellers in
>competition.
>
>PINTEL
>(to Ragetti ) Thinks he knows everything.
>

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GIBBS
>(to Jack) Thinks he knows everything.
>
>Jack idly watches as Ragetti's eye roll across the table;
>ship moving with the waves
>Jack has a sudden idea. Gets up, watches the eye. His movement is
>enough to draw the attention of the others.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Hmn. When sunrise sets. Now there's a notion.
>
>He moves over the railing at port. Everyone follows the ship tilts
>that way a little. Jack thinks - -
>Jack suddenly races to the starboard side. Everyone follows - -
>what is he up to? He looks out at the sunset. Suddenly seems to see
>something on the port side.
>
>JACK SPARROW (CONT'D)
>There, it moved!
>
>ELIZABETH
>What?
>
>WILL
>I don't see anything - -
>
>But Jack runs across, and everyone follows, and the ship tilts a
>little more. Jack goes the other way, and Gibbs figures it out.
>
>GIBBS
>He's rocking the ship.
>
>BARBOSSA
>Aye, he's onto it. All hands together!
>
>GIBBS
>Time it with each swell!
>
>Jack races back to port. Then to starboard. The ship tilts back and
>forth - -
>
>PINTEL
>He's going to tip us over!
>
>Ragetti already has a rope ready.
>
>RAGETTI
>We tie each other to the mast, upside down, so we'll be right side
>up when the boat flips!
>
>Pintel thinks about it. Thinks about it Thinks about it - -
>
>PINTEL
>Good idea!
>
>Will gets to the rail as the ship tilts, look out - -
>The sun SINKS into the sea, a small orange flam left - -
>- - Black pearl tilts further - -
>They rock the Black Pearl completely over; waves fill the sails and
>cause the ship to continue to roll - -
>
>CAMERA MOVES AROUND THE ROLLING SHIP, UNDERWATER - -

POTC3: Part 3

>>CAMERA MOVES AROUND THE ROLLING SHIP, UNDERWATER - -
>Chains, cannons, small objects fall down toward the depths.
>Jack, Will, Elizabeth, Barbossa, Gibbs hold on, flat down away from
>the ship.
>Pintel and Ragetti hold their breaths, cheeks bulging.
>
>- - CAMERA TURNS, SO THE BALCK PEARL IS RIGHT SIDE UP - -
>ON THE HORIZON, the FLASH OF GREEN shoots up!
>AND SUDDENLY - -
>THWUMP!
>- All of the water FALLS, dropping down onto the deck. The objects
>fall, the people fall, SLAMMING on to the deck.
>The water washes away, and the Black Pearl bobs on the sea.
>
>GIBBS
>Blue skies! Mercy!
>
>Will looks over - -
>- - and now it's SUNRISE back in our world.
>
>Pintel and Ragetti hang upside down, tied together to the mast.
>
>PINTEL
>This was your idea, and the fact that I went along does not make you
>any less stupid.
>
>RAGETTI
>Well it don't make you no more smart neither.
>
>PINTEL
>Yes it does, my lack of stupid ideas makes me smarter by omission.
>
>Elizabeth marvels at her clothes as the water drops away - -
>they are dry.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Impossible.
>
>Barbossa goes to the rail, squints at the horizon smile.
>
>BARBOSSA
>Feast on it, gents. That there is a sunrise.
>
>GIBBS
>Hah! Take what you can - -
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Give nothing back!
>
>A brief moment of celebration as everyone grin at each other
>Then EVERYBODY instantly draws their pistols at once, and point them
>each other - -
>Will at Barbossa - -
>Barbossa at Jack - -
>Gibbs at Barbossa - -
>Elizabeth at Jack - -
>Jack at Will, draws a second pistol, at Barbossa - -
>Barbossa draws a second pistol, at Gibbs - -
>It's a moment everyone has been preparing for. A beat - -
>And then EVERYBODY LAUGHS. They can't help but grin at themselves,
>lower their pistols
>Suddenly the LAUGHTER STOPS and the pistols are raised again.
>Pintel and Ragetti work to get themselves free of the mast.
>
>PINTEL
>Get united, and find us our pistols! Hurry!
>
>RAGETTI
>Who would we point it at?
>
>Barbossa takes charge.
>
>BARBOSSA
>All right, then. The Pirate Captains are gathering. They will meet
>at the hidden, and some say it might be mythical, Shipwreck Cove.
>
>WILL
>Aye.
>
>BARBOSSA
>Honest man that I am, I reveal to you now< I am the person what
>called the Gathering of the Brethren. Jack, you and I are going
>there, and they'll be no arguing the point. Be there a person among
>us who will contest this path?
>
>Everyone looks at each other.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Safety in numbers. Excellent idea. Agreed.
>
>Jack drops his pistol. Barbossa is surprised, suspicious.
>Turns to Elizabeth.
>
>ELIZABETH
>You know I am against those who murdered my father. If this
>gathering is needed to fight them - - I want to be there, Agreed.
>
>She lowers her pistol. Jack looks to Will, curious what he will do.
>
>TIA DALMA
>What say you, Will Turner? Your heart does not lie on this path?
>
>Will regards the situation, calculating.
>
>WILL
>You're wrong. My heart is with Elizabeth. But it's a long journey.
>We'll need to stop and re-supply.
>
>Will lowers his pistol. Jack looks at him, surprised - - he expected
>more of a fight.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>We're all agreed, then.
>
>Jack and Barbossa lower their guns - -
>- - just as Pintel and Ragetti get free, scramble to their feet,
>find their guns and pull them out. They can do no better than to
>point them at each other.
>
>PINTEL/RAGETTI
>AGREED!
>
>EXT. FLYING DUTCHMAN - HELM - DAY
>
>Davy Jones at the helm of his cursed ship of bones. Norrington
>stares out at - -
>The aftermath of a battle; a Portuguese merchant ship. Scared
>sailors gathered on deck.
>
>DAVY JONES
>More recruits for your Armada.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Yes.
>
>DAVY JONES
>I have no choice in these events. But I am curious - - what do you
>tell yourself? What reason can you find in your heart - - to be a
>pawn?
>
>NORRINGTON
>Is that your opinion? You think I am a pawn.
>
>DAVY JONES
>I expect Governor Swann would agree.
>
>Mercer arrives, reports.
>
>MERCER
>Scuttle the ship, sir? There's a fair amount of damage.
>
>NORRINGTON
>No. Assign enough men to sail her. Navigate behind us. Lock the crew
>in chains. Starve the fight out of them then put them to work.
>
>Mercer salutes, steps away.
>
>DAVY JONES
>It is the essential nature of a pawn to not know he is a pawn.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Explain yourself. Why do you mention Swann?
>
>DAVY JONES
>I am not at liberty to say, sir.
>
>Jones indicates - - Mercer is too close. Norrington looks worried,
>looks at Davy Jones questioningly.
>
>DAVY JONES(CONT'D)
>(a whisper) Ask Wyvern.
>
>INT. FLYING DUTCHMAN - HOLD - DAY
>
>Norrington comes down a flight of stairs. Spooky and dark;
>only tiny shafts of light shine down. Norrington carries a lantern.
>The SOUND of flies BUZZING. He moves along the hull. The hull move -
>- it Wyvern's face, encrusted into the ship.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Jones sent me.
>
>WYVERN
>Scream bloody murder.
>
>Wyvern looks to his right and disappears. Norrington moves in that
>direction. The Sound of flies BUZZING gets louder.
>Norrington keeps moving and comes upon wyvern again.
>Wyvern raises a hand and point - -
>Indicates stacked barrels. Norrington knocks them away, looks up - -
>
>EXT. FLYING DUTCHMAN - DECK - DAY
>
>Norrington hangs onto the ships rails. Catches his breath.
>Davy Jones is suddenly at his side.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Who did it?
>
>DAVY JONES
>I do not know. Perhaps you.
>
>NORRINGTON
>And perhaps you.
>
>Norrington looks out, sees: innocent sailors are locked in chains,
>become conscripts, slaves.
>
>DAVY JONES
>What will you do?

SAO FENG
>Ah, but Calypso, fickle like the sea, fell out of love, and left
>him. Jones, in his despair, cut his heart from his body, and put it
>in a chest, having no more use for it. (beat) I know it does not
>sound credible.
>
>Elizabeth can't help but smile.
>
>ELIZABETH
>No, that part I believe.
>
>SAO FENG
>When Jones cut his heart out, Calypso was angry, and the seas
>stormed for many years. Many good men died. So the Pirate Brethren
>came together and took counsel. The Brethren summoned Calypso, and
>tricked her, casting a spell that trapped her in human form.
>
>Sao Feng raises the intricate knot pendant and regards it.
>We notice the pendant is old, faded and frayed.
>
>ELIZABETH
>What is that?
>
>SAO FENG
>Nothing. A badge that designates the Captain. In any case - - with
>Calypso tamed, so the seas were tamed, and so began the Age of
>Piracy.
>
>ELIZABETH
>And so you think I am Calypso? Imprisoned in human form?
>
>He regards her.
>
>SAO FENG
>No one knows where Calypso is hidden. Why not someone as beautiful
>as moonlight on the waves, as starlight above the horizon?
>
>Elizabeth smiles.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Pretty speech from a captor. But words whispered through prison bars
>lose their charm.
>
>SAO FENG
>Can I be blamed for my efforts? All men are drawn to the sea.
>Perilous though it may be.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Often men offer desire as an excuse for their crimes.
>
>SAO FENG
>I offer simply my desire.
>
>ELIZABETH
>An item of such small value. And in return?
>
>SAO FENG
>I would have your gifts, should you choose to give them.
>
>ELIZABETH
>And if I choose not?
>
>SAO FENG
>Then I will take your fury.
>
>He leans in to kiss her - -
>Elizabeth shoves Sao Feng away. He stumbles backwards. She kicks
>over the candles, falls in the dark. Elizabeth turns to run
>There is a sudden, load CRASH.
>Elizabeth stops. Turns looks back
>MOONLIGHT shoots through a round HOLE in the HULL.
>Elizabeth frowns. Moves toward it.
>She follows the shaft of moonlight to - -
>Sao Feng lies on the deck, bloody, motionless, his body crushed by a
>cannon shot.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Sao Feng?
>
>She touches him - - no reaction.
>The she hears, soft in the distance, the explosion sound of CANNON
>FIRE - - and the approaching whistle of a cannon ball - - Elizabeth
>dives away from the hull as a second cannon ball CRASHES through - -
>A second shaft of MOONLIGHT shoots through a new hole. The ship is
>under attack.

>Elizabeth regards him.
>
>ELIZABETH
>It is too late to earn forgiveness.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Indeed. I did not know of the plan to kill your father. But that
>does not absolve me of my other sins.
>
>Elizabeth looks at him - - and finally believes him.
>
>ELIZABETH
>Come with us.
>
>Norrington wants to.
>
>ELIZABETH(CONT'D)
>James. Come with us.
>
>Norrington really wants to. Nearly all of the Chinese crew members
>are across. Elizabeth implores him.
>Norrington nods - -
>Then there is the sound from the deck - - a ma shuffling toward them
>out of the dark.
>
>BOOTSTRAP
>Who goes there?
>
>The moment is past.
>
>NORRINGTON
>Ah, well. No place for an honest man in an unjust world, is there?
>Go.
>
>Norrington draws his sword and turns.
>Bootstrap looks really terrible - - he's degenerated even farther
>away from human.
>
>NORRINGTON (CONT'D)
>Back to your station, sailor.
>
>Elizabeth hesitates - - and then crawls out onto the line.
>Bootstrap sees her. Thinks that doesn't seem right.
>He draws his sword.
>
>NORRINGTON (CONT'D)
>That's an order - - from the Captain.
>
>Bootstrap looks at Norrington blankly. Watches as Elizabeth reaches
>the far side.
>Like he's trying to figure it all out.
>
>NORRINGTON(CONT'D)
>Steady, man.
>
>Elizabeth is halfway across. Something snaps in Bootstrap.
>
>BOOTSTRAP
>All hands! All hands! Prisoners escape all hands!
>
>Norrington slashes at Bootstrap, who defends. Norrington looks over
>- - Elizabeth has made it across.
>Norrington cuts the tow rope and the Empress drifts free.
>Elizabeth shouts orders and the crew brings the ship about.
>Norrington tries to reason with Bootstrap, as they fight - -
>
>NORRINGTON
>Stop this! You are not in your right mind.
>
>But Bootstrap seems possessed. He cuts and slashes, driving
>Norrington back. Several other CREW MEMBERS arrive, draw sword.
>Their anger comes out, they side with Bootstrap. Norrington id
>distracted by these new foes - -
>Norrington is run through by Bootstrap Bill.
>Norrington falls to the ground. Bootstrap stands over him and
>doesn't understand what he has done.
>
>CLACKER
>The Captain's dead. The Captain's dead!
>
>The phrase echoes through the pirates. They race away, past
>Bootstrap, knocking him backwards. He still doesn't quite understand
>what he's done.
>
>EXT. FLYING DUTCHMAN - DECK - NIGHT
>
>Pirates rush pell-mell along the deck amid shouts of "The Captain's
>dead" "to the Captain's Cabin!" They rush the door and burst in - -
>
>INT. FLYING DUTCHMAN - CAPTAIN'S CABIN - NIGHT
>
>Pirates crowd in and before them is a tableau: The chest is open.
>Murtogg and Mullory, trembling, have their rifles pointed directly
>at the heart. And behind them stands - -
>Mercer, smiling, holding the key.
>The Pirates are disappointed, their enthusiasm fading. They part and
>Davy Jones enters. Locks eyes with Mercer.
>
>MERCER
>Nothing has changed.
>
>Jones surveys the situation.
>
>DAVY JONES
>Back to your station, men.
>
>EXT. BLACK PEARL - MAIN DECK - NIGHT
>
>Jack is face-to-face with Jack the Monkey. Both have serious
>expressions on their faces. Jack downs a shot of rum and puts the
>glass down.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Your turn.
>
>Jack the Monkey sniffs the glass in front of him falls over drunk.
>Marty walks past.
>
>MARTY
>Better stay on guard. Will is gone missing.
>
>Jack is not worries.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>Missing? He can't be missing on a ship.
>
>MARTY
>Barbossa ordered him into the brig.
>
>JACK SPARROW
>(sudden panic) The brig?
>
>Jack jumps up, staggers over to Barbossa.
>
>JACK SPARROW (CONT'D)
>You can put Will in the brig. He designs brigs. He'll escape from
>the brig!
>
>BARBOSSA
>A pertinent and useful fact of which you neglected to inform me. The
>whelp has been missing since sunset.
>
>Suddenly a bucket drops down from above, onto Barbossa, slams off
>his hat. Jack laughs. Pintel squints upwards - -
>
>PINTEL
>he's up on the rigging, all right. (with great relish) We'll find
>him.
>
>RAGETTI
>(even greater relish) Aye. Eventually.
>
>PINTEL
>Course it's frightful high up there.
>
>RAGETTI
>Dangerous. Specially at night.
>
>PINTEL
>Hate to give him an advantage like.
>
>RAGETTI
>True enough.
>
>PINTEL
>Best wait 'till morning.
>
>RAGETTI
>Aye. Let him sweat it out.
>
>PINTEL
>That be the wisest course - -
>
>Pintel and Ragetti look over - - jack and Barbossa stare at them.
>Barbossa's eyes glace upwards. They get the idea - - and climb.
>
>EXT. BALCK PEARL - RIGGING - NIGHT
>
>Pintel move along a yardarm next to a sail. Sees a bulge ahead,
>pulls his sword - - and STABS through the sail!

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this is really good!

so that's it for the script but now I'll add a scene or two you guys PLEASE continue

no offense, but r u American?

the sword fight stops as a large ship catches up with them the look of amaze ment on their faces are hilariouse it's the empress and it's new captain standing at the railing smiling!
Jack pulls his self together smiles.
Jackee?! What did I tell you we can't get rid of that girl if we want to.
Will:Elizabeth???? I thought you were taking the northern rout. what happend? where is sao? are you ok?
Liz: Well we WERE taking the northern rout until we got attacked, sao died and Norrington was killed trying to help us escape! no biggie really just a little bit of this and that!
Jack(like what elizabeth said was the most normal thing ever): well that's that! welcome back to the pearl miss swann.
Liz: I'm not coming back to the pearl and by the way it's CAPTAIN elizabeth swann now!
Jack stops dead in his track looking genuinly shocked but as he turns around to face the Empress and Will and Liz his trademark smile is as fresh as ever.
Jack: is it now?!
his eyes stop on the knot medalion.
Jack: well than it is! sorry I didn't catch that before! well than "Captain Swann" you will have to attend the berthern with us. I suggest a good nights sleep and lots of rum now that your captain take the advice one captain to the other.
turns around again makes for his cabin.
Jack(singsong under his breath): my ship is faster! my ship is better!my sails are blaaaaack!

lol nice last line!

sorry you guys I'm the WORST writer ever but since no one else wrote a thing I just tuned in to make a start so you guys can continue!

no, ur fine! its great, really!

yeah since you ask I am american I'm fromm dallas!

coolie! a Texas girl! im a Cali

common guys we need a writer in here I really am bad I got an F on a story in second grade COME ON who gets an F in a story about a rabit in second grade?

really? I love it there your close to the sea all I have here is sand! and my favorite movie takes place in the sea and I'm stuck with dead grass and horses

censored2 we need Kate or Willo here! they r the masterminds! or T. Maria or Diddly. sailorleo needs to come over too!

yeah I know I've read ALL their stuff. I love how they stick everything together and make sense of it

what! i'm no writer...plus you killed off NORRIE!

I mean did you read that fan fiction T.maria did? I'm like wow. then I read POTC3 and 4 and I'm like these girls are ALL good

I didn't the first 56 pages WERE REAL from a site that Ted Elliot said that it's a real draft

yeah, most of us have read them all. and since when did I kill off Norrie? i know. those college girls have major talent!

*cries* norrie can't be dead...he just can't *bawls*

plus sailor you are SO a writer! and I mean how you drew abi and kate and Jacky was magnificent. I didn't want norri to die either I hope it changes cause they said that this is an early draft and the script changes 50 times before they shoot. but the confirmation they got from Ted Elliot could be fake

drawing doesn't mean im a good writer.....ehh...norrie..*is crying*...that's all i want from the PoTC movies....all i want....

come on sailor write a little bit you are soooo great.

well we COULD get him back using tia....I wonder...why not?!!!!

yeah, i didnt kill off Norrie. i have never contributed to any of these stories, thank you vey much! Sailorleo doesnt think much bout herself even though shes magnificent at everything she tries. shes just like Johnny Depp! she rejects that she has talent, but shes amazing!

(sniff) im not feeling inspired...i need a norrie pick me up...

James:*walks over and kisses Sailor on the lips* that good enough?

*thinks* that...helps...

ok I am forced to write a bit more since no one else is. but please KATE, WILLO, SAILOR? T.MARIA?DIDDLY?!!!!!! someone heeeeeeeeeeeelp?
Jack leaves them alone still singing under his breath.
Will is happy, amazed and taken aback all at the same time isn't it a wonder that HIS love talks to JACK and not him? he still thinks that Liz loves jack and not him.
Will(a cold bitter streak in his voice): I'm glad your safe!
turns around walks away.
Liz:WILL?!!!!!!!
the first mate approaches Liz.
FM: capt'n we can't keep up with the pearl..orders?!
Liz takes a moment to register what happend, thinks about her next move. then looks up at the first mate with a stirn determind face.
Liz: let her go we'll meet them there!

sailorleo don't worry cause when they get to the berthern there is going to be a surprise visit by james who was brought back to life by tia

he...better be....

ooooooooh he WILL!

(people help me I have one gorgeouse James to bring back one love triangle to resolve and one caribbean to save not to mention one ugly short guy to kill heeeeelp)
the empress which till now was level with the pearl is slowly falling behind as Jack appears on deck again this time holding a bottle of rum (half empty)he leans onto the railing watching the ocean intensly his eyes focused on the horizon.
Liz: you didn't think of this part when you betrayed me captain sparrow?
Jack(smirking) I must say I didn't! but lets examin that for a moment shall we? matter of fact if you haden't left me to the kraken. this wouldn't have happend! eh?
Liz: If I haden't as a matter of fact we wouldn't be having this conversation we would all still be in davy jones's locker wouldn't we?!
Jack: true! then if DEAR william haden't betrayed ME I wouldn't have betrayed you love.
Jack now walking to the end of the ship as the empress falls behind continues.
Jack: so whose fault is it really?!
Elizabeth at ease with jack's words.
Liz:maybe you can talk your way out of situations captain but I'm not one to buy your theories!
Jack(laughs): I thought not!but I wonder...
now having to lean over the railing to talk to elizabeth.
Jack:why out of the precise number of 44 ways you could have used to distract me and shackle me to my own ship you chose to kiss me passionately with your fiance only a few feet away?could it be...
he now has to take hold of a rope hanging from the sails as he leans outward almost falling over the railing.
Jack(whispers): curiosity?!
He laughs. pulls back onto the ship and makes towards the other side of the ship while drinking from the bottle.
Jack(yelles over his head): see you in due time*beat* captain!
Elizabeth is left dumbfounded looking longingly after the pearl as it now disappears in the thick fog. she takes out a bottle of rum she's been hiding from jack under the railing unseals it with her teeth and takes huge gulps.

camera pans to a crowded bar of pirates all chatting and all drinking rum.
Jack sits back in a chair and has his feet resting on the table. Barbossa is sitting opposite him with a wench on his knees.
"I wonder what's taking them so long...Jack...Jack...JACK!"
"Wha........"
Jack snaps out of a daydream.
"It's been 2 days where are they?"
Jack goes to answer, but stops and smiles when he sees Liz walk in. she looks extremely tired.
Liz notices Jack and walks over to him, grabs the rum off the table, takes one large gulp, and collapses into the seat beside jack. In seconds she has her head in her arms on the table fast asleep.
Her first mate walks up "She hasn't slept at all" he says this to Barbossa as Jack is too busy watching her breathe.
He slowly picks her up and walks her up to the rooms....
Please someone continue, i only just saw this thread and i think it's wicked.

I will be honest. I'm not going to read the script. Sorry. I want to be surprised, and I just skipped over all the words right to the post reply section. I don't want to know now what happens, and I am not even convinced any script we find will be authentic.

Hence, give me script to POTC, I want to shoot something. I hope that script is not close to anything that may be the final product. Will is too immature in his feelings for Lizzy and he has no coping skills when in a squeeze with Jack.

w/e

no ur a good writer im so glad every1s writing scripts I LUV SCRIPTS + ACTING my fav things its good 2 think about watz gonna happen until #3 comes out i started righting my own version 2 but its soooooooooo diff 2 urs I LUV URS! its sooooooo funny good job i like it!

is the trailer for potc 3 is gonna come out before the dvd or after the dvd arrives. bc the trailer is on the dvd i think

I hope so plus willo don't worry I'm not telling you to read it but ted elliot already said"though it's a real script I'm not concerned at all that it's on the net...it's changed so many times that when you see the movie you're going to wonder if the script was fake after all..a script changes at least 40 times before and suring filming"
by the way tia dalma I LOVED the way you wrote it please continue people and I'm gonna try to think of more stuff....

well they could give me the link of the potc 3 script but im not gonna trust on it since ppl can be a real scan making up fake stuff.

yeah OR it could be that disney is trying to throw us off track...giving out scripts so we don't know what happens for sure

disney wont trick us. its some ****ers(sorry) on the internet who has nothing else to do then to make up stuff..and then KTTC ppl say its true true true true without annylizing a bit.

yeah probably right cause disney is everything but evil....

lol yea. disney are smart as hell. they are not the type to trick, they are the type to surprise you

I'm too lazy to read the other posts so i dnt kno if this has been sed or not and mos of you will probly know this so I dont know if this is helpful or not but you know the pages of the script that are blank, well 2 sum it up jack is telling will that whoever stabs davey's heart wil become the nxt capt of the flyin dutchman.

OH MY GOD? REALLY? sooooooo cool I really didn't know...how did you find out? it makes total sense maybe will is going to become the next captain of the flying dutchman it makes sense cause he and davy are alike and if jack/liz end up together will is going to turn out JUST like jones...

yep i totally agree wif u tee_pirategirl and kiwibird that waz really clever of u how did you think of that thanx sooooooooooooooooooooooo much i always wondered y that page was blank lol thanx again

spend my spare time googling potc stuff and then cheking if its reliable. yup i'm an obsessed freak and proud of it

no ur not i do da same stuff every1 on this thread does we're not freaks .........................

yay i've finally found people of my kind

lol were 1 big happy crazy pirate obsessed family

yup we are all daft...like jack

yepp! i love being obsessed! now im neer bored because i spend all my time on here or looking for other stuff about POTC!!!

yes, me too

i just became obsessed with potc/johnny depp, and no one else was, so i'm so happy there are other people of my kind!!

whats the reason?

i'm so obsessed that there is not one day that i'm not on this website or talking about potc to anyone

me 2!!!!

You know whats funny with the first movie i was like sure its a good movie but i didnt really obcess untill the 2nd one started to surface , ive gotton to the point were im one the phone with my boyfriend and ill start qouteing potc or telling him he sounds like jack sparrow.

It was a shame, I didn't know this film till last christmas!! And now I'm more then obsessed!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
It was a shame, I didn't know this film till last christmas!! And now I'm more then obsessed!!!!!!!!!! AMEN sista me too
lol and like im terrified of horrors but ill like watch any horror with johnny, orlando or keira in it.

Originally posted by PIRATES=SEX
AMEN sista me too
lol and like im terrified of horrors but ill like watch any horror with johnny, orlando or keira in it.

me too, but just with johnny

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
me too, but just with johnny Like today i watched the legend of sleepy hollow.

oh, I really liked the movie!

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
oh, I really liked the movie! Me too i just couldent get over that freaky magnifiying pair of glasses he was wearing.

Originally posted by PIRATES=
Like today i watched the legend of sleepy hollow. me too!!! i am absolutely terrified of any scary movies, but if it has Johnny in it, i will watch it. thats why i wanna c Secret Window and Sweeny Todd

Originally posted by ivebeendepped43
me too!!! i am absolutely terrified of any scary movies, but if it has Johnny in it, i will watch it. thats why i wanna c Secret Window and Sweeny Todd Sweeny Todd's a horror? and secret window was not scary at all It comes on fx all the time so next time its on i will post a thread telling yall.

Sweeney Todd is a guy (Johnny) who is a demonic hairdresser that butchers his customers and uses their remains as pie filling! i think thats gonna b freaky! but its gonna b hilarious cuz if its Tim Burton and johnny Depp, they have to have a laugh

Originally posted by ivebeendepped43
Sweeney Todd is a guy (Johnny) who is a demonic hairdresser that butchers his customers and uses their remains as pie filling! i think thats gonna b freaky! but its gonna b hilarious cuz if its Tim Burton and johnny Depp, they have to have a laugh i thought sweeney was a musical?

it is a musical

i was looking 4 dis thread cuz i remembered we actuelly never finished i rekon we should its a good idea