cool, interesting idea but a little confusing in the way its written - you jump too quickly between the different points in the story and the formatting is a little confusing too. but in general its really nice and original story
harrypotterluvr
thank you for reading!
Nickey
Um- I guess it was interesting.
You could've done better.
But it'sa still a beautiful story!
harrypotterluvr
thanx!
Nickey
Originally posted by harrypotterluvr
thanx!
Ur Welcome!
Brit531
That was good and very interesting. I wonder what wiil happen next.
