Potc #7
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mmoviejunkie
Kate: It's blackbeard-he's got him
Liz: Well this doesn't make any sense...Will's never had any dealings with him before...
(Jackson and Isabella walks in interupting)
Jackson: What's going on? Who's she?
Belle: Kate! Are you okay??
Kate: It's just Will-he's gone
Jackson:Who's he?
Jack: Ah, well I'll tell you about my eunuchy friend....
Liz: Jack, not now (indicates to Kate)
Kate(smiles): It's okay, I miss Jack's humor
Jack(grins):Who wouldn't?
Liz: So anyways, Blackbeard-
Jackson(interupts): Blackbeard...Hey dad, isn't that that guy you told me about your run ins with-
Jack(interupts):What? Excuse me, I think Gibbs is calling. (starts to get up)
Liz: Sit!
(Jack sits back down)
Liz: Jack, what kind of run ins?
shannstar79
GREAT START!!!
Ok i am going to think about it and add some shortly!!!
Thats was GREAT
shannstar79
still inside Sparrow Mannor
Liz: Jack, you have some serious explaining to do, blackbeard?? what in the world
Jack: umm it was a long time ago dear
Liz: I dont care if it was before I was born, It effects us now becuase he has Will
Jack: you act like you care about Wills Bloody mess
Liz: I do Care and you should as well, Will is our friend and it seems it may be YOUR fault he is in thi smess to begin with so start talking
Jackson: dad you have to tell her
Liz: so whats this Jackson knows of your dealings with Blackbeard in the past and I dont
Jack: its nothing really
Liz: well if its nothing really, why did he kidnapp the Govener of Port Royal!!!!
Jack: Ok LUV, Ill tell you, Long ago before I even met you and Will Turner, Blackbeard and I worked incahoots together to try and take down the Royal navy of Port Royal, so we could take over the city and make a Pirate port out of Port Royal I eneed up changing me mind and trying to get out of our agreement, I was not into killing innocent men much less killing anyone, so I abandoned ship one night while Blackbeard slept, it wasent tell the next moring he discovered I was missing, he sent word by messenger that he would never stop trying to hurt me or the people I care about for abandoning our agreement. he would hunt me and everyone that I loved down and stop at nothing untill I agree to finish what we started so many years ago. I am assuming this kidnapping of William, since he is the Govoner of Port Royal explains this promise Blackbeard made to me so may years ago
Kate : so thast what Blackbeard meant when he said, Captian Sparrow is the only one who can help your husband now Miss Turner
Liz: looks at Jack with tears in her eyes: Jack I cant believe you would keep something like this from me, did you not think I needed to know that I, we, our children could be in probable danger?? I thought I knew you
Jack: you do know me, I am sorry. My family means the most to me in this world
Liz: not ok jack, totally not ok, but right now all I care about is getting Will back and making sure he is safe from the harm you have bestowed upon all of us
Jack looks around the room and everyone is staring down at the floor, no one can look at him, they all thought he could be trusted, and why would he keep something like this from the people he just called part of his family
jack: If it is the last thing I do, I will beat Blackbeard and Gain all of your trust back, you all mean the world to me
liz: wont be so easy for me luv, youll have a lot of work to do to gain my trust back
Jack: Liz your pregnant, please try not to get so worked up, it could be bad for the baby
Liz: not half as bad as thinking you know someone and then feeling what it feels like to discover you were wrong
Liz turn and walks out the front dorr every one follows including Jackson, leaving Jack standing in the living room alone
mmoviejunkie
awww-so sad, lol
love it, but i have to get ready for school now,
write some more later...
shannstar79
Originally posted by mmoviejunkie
awww-so sad, lol
love it, but i have to get ready for school now,
write some more later...
have fun at school
c ya later
shannstar79
Jackson runs up ahead of th eothers to catch up with Elizabeth
Jackson: mom do you really think you should have been that hard on him, it was a long time ago, you two have been through so much together, why are you this upset now?
Liz: Jackson, its not that I want to be angry at your father, I love him dearly, but when someone like Blackbeard makes a threat of that caliber, he should have told me, it just hurts my feelingfs thats all
jackson: mom, dad loves youso much, dont break his heart,
elizabeth stoppes and looks at Jackson
Liz: you are wise beyone your years son, and youhave the persuasion skills of your father, i am not trying to break your fathers heart, I am just, just
Jackson: being a b***h
Liz: looks at jackson, cracks a small smile and a little giggle and says, Aparetly so
Liz look sback at the house and realizes jackson is right, ABi, Alex, kate and Isabella stand in the background staring at liz, wondering what she plans to do
Liz starts walking back to the house,she plans to apoligize for being so hard on jack, she knows he only meant to protect his family and he would never do anything to jeaporidize their saftey, she smile as she walks into the house, Jack, jack where are you, she walks in to find Jack no where to be found , she rushes up the stairs enteres their bed room, no jack, she wet foot prints on the hard wood floors, and some of the furnature is knocked over,she relizes in horror, Blackbeard
She screams to everone, hes taken Jack, Blackbeard has taken Jack, to the pearl, we have to find jack, she runs to the pearl everyone follows including the crew, which whom was awakend by the screaming
Liz: Mr Gibbs, set sail for Port Royal with all haste
gibbs: yes mam
Liz staes out into the water, holding her belly, Jack I am so sorry, please be ok, a tear falls from her cheek
Jackson: mom, it will be ok, I promise, weve been through so many things, we can beat this, and put our family back together,
Liz: I am so sorry Jackson, for the way Ive behaved tonight
Jackson: Its ok mom, you need to go rest, I do not want anything happening to my brother or sister, go lie down, Ill take it from here
Liz nods and walks into the Captains Cabin, lies down on the bed and quickly falls asleep
PIRATES=SEX
(sorry for not helping with six guys)
BLACKBEARDS SHIP
two men sit knocked out next to each other , one man jerks up his head
we see its jack.
jack: BLACKBEARD (nobody answers) BLACKBEARD , YOU BLOODY BASTED ANSWER ME.
black: (rises from a chair in the cornor) jack , jack he croons long time no see eh. you broke a promise and i made one do you remember what that promise was?
jack:nods his head choking back tears
black: well to refresh your memory jack , i said i would hunt you and everyone that I loved down and stop at nothing until I agree to finish what we started so many years ago. do you agree Mr sparrow? your not really in the state to refuse right now are you
jack: ( You see the camera close up on the ropes the bind jack to the chair they are cut and jacks hands are free, he jumps up)you see blackbeard you forgot one very important thing I'm captain jack sparrow savvy.
black: I expected you would have a clever way to get yourself untied jack.
jack:yes yes you are correct now (he walks to will and begins uniting him) Now me and Mr turner will just be on our way. If you dont mind.
blackbeard laughs as he makes a hand motion, 20 or so men jump up from the dark corners of the room.
black:jack i knew this would happen.
as the men approach jack , we see him reach for his sword to find its not there
BACK ON PEARL
Liz is lieing motionless on the bed Jackson walks into the room
Jackson:mother , are you feeling alright?
After hearing no response Jackson walks to her side he pats her shes not breathing.
Jackson(quickly rushes out) Mr Gibbs , Abbi ,Alex, Bella help somebody mother is unconscious
shannstar79
OH YES
That Rocked!!!
I love it!!! ok anyone else wanna give it a go
Sailorleo??
-savvychick-
this is great guys!!!!!!!!...awesome beginning
i might write some later, but i wanna see where guys take this
once again, really great
willofthewisp
Just a question: how old roughly is everyone now? Like how many years is this past Curse of the Black Pearl?
shannstar79
yes 16
jackson and Isabella are both 16 years old
shannstar79
Abi, Kate and Isabella run into the Captian's Cabin and see Elizabeth unconcious on the bed, kate checks her pule, she has a pulse it looks like shes is breathing slightly
Kate: she has a pulse!! she says loudly, dosent look slike shes breathing at all very well
Abi: THE BABY (she says in horror)
Isabella: well we cant just stand here, we have to do something!! what do we do???
Kate: looks at Elizabeth and realizes she is hemoraging, Oh my gosh, she says in shock there is a problem with the baby, we have got to get to shore!! MR GIBBS THE NEAREST PORT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, ELIZABETH NEEDS A DOCTOR RIGHT AWAY!!!
Gibbs: what about Will and Jack?
Jackson: THEY CAN WAIT! next Port NOW, My Mothers and her childs lives are in Danger
Gibbs: Aye Sir, he says with a look of confusion and fear for Elizabeth and her baby in his eyes
Back on BlackBeards Ship, Jack and Will find themselves in a bit of a pickle, they have no weapons and about 20 men have gathers around them to basically kill them
Jack: wait wait wait, Blackbeard, I am having a thought here, you dont want to keep the Eunich do you? al though he does have a lovley singing voice, you should let him go, He is really of now value to you right? I mean Keep me in his place, Will looks at Jack and wonders what the hell Jack is up to,
Will: yes, (he says with a grin) you dont want to keep the Eunih do you ?
Jack looks at will its all he can do to not bust out laughing
BlackBeard: No I really do want to be keeping the Eunich he says with a big grin
Will: uh oh
Jack: Yea Uh oh( looks at will)Sorry Mate didnt know Black Beard was a eunich too! he says with a grin
Blackbeard: anyway Ill be keeping both of ya, Lock them in the Brig Boys, Jack Sparrow will come around to my side I know it, he wont be able to resist
Jack: Oh I can resit mate: I am NOT a Eunich!!!
Blackbeard : Not what I meant Sparrow,I meant when I have your entire FAMILY at mY MERCY! LOCK THEM IN THE BRIG, NOW
Jack and Will sit in the brig, trying to come up with a plan of action
Jack starts to feel weird, and gets a uneasy feeling
Will: Whats wrong?
Jack: Not sure,I am getting a awful feeling, something isnt right!
Will: well yea, were locked in the Brig and Thanks to you Blackbeard thinks I am a EUNICH
Jack: looks at Will with concern: no mate, somethings really bad wrong, I can feel it!! We have to get off of this ship and Find my family at once!!
shannstar79
The next Morning, Elizabeth awakens to find heself in what appears to be a hospital room,
Elizabeth: where am I, whats going on, she begins to panic slightly
Jackson: Its ok Mother, I am here with you
Liz: son, whats happening?? Ill go get the Doctor for you, so he can explain
Doctor enters and looks at Liz: Mrs Sparrow
Liz enterupts befpre the doctor can say anything at all MY BABY
begins to cry, is my baby ok ?she says with fear
Doctor: for now mam
Liz: what do you mean
MD: mam, you have lost a lot of blood, your stress level is too dangerous to the health of your baby! You have to be on bed rest for the rest of your pregnancy if you want to save the life of your child
Liz: but what about Jack?? we have tyo find jack and Will, Looks at Jackson If I have to stay here, and I must, the pearl needs a Captian
Jackson, you have to take over and find your father! I am counting on you son, you are our only hope! Find Mr. Norrington, he can help you he knows these waters
Jackson: Mom, you can count on me, Promise me youll stay here and not try to come after father!
Liz: i promise! she says crying, this is all my fault, If I had not gotten so at jack, our baby would be safe
Jackson: Do not worry about anything, you need your rest, Please try and stay calm. I will bring father back safley
Jackosn reaches dow and kissed her, rubs her belly and says I love you both, see you soon mother
Liz: watching him walk out the door, the door closes and she begins to sob holding her pregnant belly she says, it ok baby, mommy will protect you , daddy will be home soon!
mmoviejunkie
Is this story dead!?!?
Will: Face it Jack, there's no way out.
Jack(trying to unlock the brig with a bone, sighs): There's always a way.
(One of blackbeard's crew comes down and seems to busy looking for something to even notice anything going around him, Jack and Will also see a ring of keys hanging from his pants)
(Jack looks back at Will and grins, then tosses him the bone)
Jack: Tell me salior-how's Blackbeard treatin' ya? Gettin' the gold you've always wanted? How about getting me out, and I will promise you all the treasure you've always wanted, what do you say to that?
Pirate: You're not getting out of there Sparrow. Blackbeard's got you for good.
Jack: I'm just saying...(while Jack continues to talk in a confusing way we see will reaching for the keys with the bone and sucessfully gets them and jack sees this)....you know when you're right, you're right. Blackbeard's got me.
(Pirate grunts and walks away)
Someone continue...
shannstar79
Jack cant believe that Will has managed to get the keys
Jack: how in the world did you manage that! good work non the less
Will: ( looking really proud he gives a devilish grin) are you going to make me say it
Jack: say what? ( looking puzzeled)
Will : I am william Turner Savvy
Jack: not funny mate, ( lookinng un amused at Wills Mockeery)
Jack: whats your plan
Will: why is it me who always has to have a plan and usually I end up getting caught and you get away?
Jack: sounds good to me!! (unlocks the door to the brig and they both make their way out
Aboard the Black Peral
Jackson is standing at the top of the ship, looking through his fathers spy Glass
Gibbs: Land HO
Jackson: Isaballa, and Abi please come to shore with me, perhaps you can persuade Mr Norrington to coem and help us, the rest of you stay here and mind the boat
Jackson Knocks on the ddor of Norringtons mansion,
the door opens and we see Norrington
Jackson: Mr Norrington, we cam efor your help, mother and Father are both in danger
Isabell: Grandfather you have to help us
ABi: yes we desperatly need your help, you the only one who knows these waters
Norrie: where is Elizabeth, she knows them all the more better than I do
Jackson: looks down, shes in a hosptal in the next port over, she almost lost her baby, Doctors orders, she must stay there
Norrington, Ok I will help you
Jackson: I will fill you in on Blackbeard later
Norrie: BLACKBEARD, on no way, Ive changed me mind, I am NOT going after Blackbeard
isabella: looks at him with sad eyes, Grandfather please, we need your help
Norrie: sighs, alright, goes into to the house and bring with him, tons of weapons, were going to need these
(we see Elizabeth lying in the hospital bed, sleeping , when suddenly the window starts to raise up and a dark figure enetrs the room, the pirate grabs elizabeth frm behind , his hand over her mouth, she struggles,
Pirate : stay quiet missy or youll regret it
he pull sher out the window and thr dissapear into the darkness)
Elizabeth eyes pop open and shes panting for breath, she realizes it was all a dream, she look around her hospital room, grabs the candel next to her bed, puts on her robe
Elizabeth( rubs her pregnant tummy,) walks to the window and stares out into the sea
Elizabeth: looking out the window, Oh Jack, plese be alright, I so need you here with me right now. I know you will get out of this, I just hope you can forgive my behavior
shannstar79
I am determined to keep this story alive
Norrinton and Jacky climb aboard the Black Pearl,
Jacky: Kate?? what on earth has happend to you, why are you here, where is Will
Kate: he was taken captive by Blackbeard and his crew,
Norrington: same for Jack as well I suppose?
Jackson: yes, Ill explain over some rum
Abi: no you wont young man, just becouse your parents are not here do not think you can drink al the rum you want
Jackson: (Sighs) looks at abi and grins Well it was worth a try
Norrington, Jacky and Jackson, head into the Captains cabin where Jackson begins to fill them in of the situation
we see the Black pearl swiftly skimming across the open sea and all of a sudden we hear cannon fire
Jackson , Norrington Abi, Jacky Alex and Isabella run out of the Captains Cabin to see Blackbeards ship firring upon them
Jackson: MR GIBBS
Gibbs: aye
Jackson: prepare the crew were going to fight back
Norrington: whats your plan
Jackson: huh what ? dont have much of one, just fight back
Norrie: uh
you sound just like your father, we have to try and rescue your father and the Govener
Jackson: what about this, you take the long boat, row over, find Will and my father, rescue them and come back here to the Black pearl , here take my sword and gun incase you need extra help
Norrie: looking at Jackson, are you mad? thats a death trap for me, you seriously are just like your father
Isabella: we all fight, thats enough you two !!!! you are acting like children, people we care about are in danger , GET SERIOUS!!!!
everyone including the crew stands in shock that isabella had even raised her voice. she looks around at the crew
Isabella: DID YOU HEAR ME, LOAD THE CANNONS.
Gibbs: Aye sir, I mean mam
Jack and Will are in the process of tryin to come up with an escape plan when the notice that Blackbeard 's ship is firing upon the Black Pearl
Jack: this is great
Will: what how is this great they are firing at the pearl???
Jack: we can escpae unseen if all the crew is busy, quick, lets go
they Dive into the ocean and make way for the pearl
will: Damn this water is cold
Jack: such a wimp, swim Govener Eunich
-savvychick-
lol, even in grave danger the eunich joke is as great as ever...good job keepin it alive shannstar
shannstar79
Jack and Will have now made it over to the BlackPearl and have begun to climb aboard from the back end of the ship. the entire crew is shhoting cannons, and firing guns at Blackbeards ship Including the wemon
Gibbs: this is mad, were firing and Jack and Will are in there
Jackson: I know but we have to do something!
Norrington: they will be fine, they can hold their own
Jack walks up behind the three of them soaking wet and says
Jack: fortunatly Mr Gibbs hes right
Jackson: Father, your ok!!
Jack: yes I am fine, Jack and Jackson hug and Jack feels so good to back with his family
Kate: Will!! They run into each others arms and embrace
Will: so good to be back in your arms, I missed you so much
Jack: yes he couldnt stop talking about you, even when Blackbeard was propositioning him
Kate: what?
Will: Nevermind, its just Jack being Jack
Jack: where is my wife, I need to see her
everyone looks down, Jackson steps forward with a sad look upon his face
Jack: what , whats wrong with Elizabeth,
Jackson: she is in a hospital, she almost lost the baby, she was so stressed over fighting with you, and then loosing you, she started hemoraging and almost lost the baby
Jack: you have to take me to her, Please take me to her, I have got to see her
Gibbs: right away sir
Jack walks intothe Captains Cabin, jackson follows
Jackson: father are you going to be ok
Jack: looks up at Jackson , I shouldnt have kept anything from her, its all my fault this happend to her
Jackson: I am sorry father, she will be ok , and so will the baby
Jack: I hope your right son, now if you don't mind Id like to be alone
Jackson: sure father, Ill be just out here if you need me
Jack: thnak you son
Jackson leaves and Jack begins to sob uncontrolably when he is left alone
Elizabeth sits alone in her hospital room, quite some time has passed since all of this began she is about 6 and a half months preganat now and she is really tired of being in the hospital room, and really worried about Jack, she hasent heard a word about him at all
Nurse: Ms. Sparrow, its time for your medicine
Liz: sure, she takes her medicine and looks up at the nurse
if my baby were born now would it survive?
Nurse: there is a great chance that he or she would, but there is also great chance that he or she wouldnt.
Liz: I see, thank you
Nurse leaves and Elizabeth lies down in the bed, Its been three months and I havent heard anything, I dont know what to do, should I leave and try to fibd them, or should I stay. she gets up and looks out the window, its a beautiful day and the sun is shinning bringht
Liz: oh jack, I ma so sorry, i love you so much, I wish you kew how much
Jack: I do know how much
Liz: JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liz turns around swiftly only to see Jack standing in her doorway, he runs to her and grabs her tightly and kisses her for what seems like an eternity
Jack: I am so sorry, I promise to always be here for you, I will never keep anythiing from you again
Liz: I am so sorry too, I have been so worried, I was just about to make a escape attempt to try and find you myself
both of them are crying, they are so happy to be wih each other again
Jack: come on lets get you home mrs. Sparrow
Liz: Gladly Mr Sparrow
they begin to pack her things
Liz: what about blackbeard?
Jack: we escaped, he is sure to be after me again soon I am sure
Liz: do you really think its safe for us to go home then?
Jack: where else can we go luv
Liz: England? Only for a while
Jack: we cant run from him luv, I will have to face him one day soon and I will have to fight... lets go home and get you some lunch
Jack and liz exit the room and head for the Pearl.
tee_pirategirl
great stuff! loving it. will be waiting to see what happens with ol black beard
PIRATES=SEX
jack and Elizabeth are in their cabin having a family moment
Jack is patting Elizabeth's belly
jack:hows my little boy?
Liz:girl you mean
jack"how do you know
Liz:lets just call it mothers intuition
Liz:what would we name it if its a girl?
jack:How about Catherine
Liz:thats a beautiful name
jack:it was my mothers name Catherine sparrow
Liz is puzzled
Liz : i thought you knew nothing of your mother?
jack:Just her name , I'm named after my grandfather They called him calico jack , my mothers mother was named anne Bonny , mother almost wasn't born but grandmother got her way out of the gallows.
Liz:Ive heard stories of anne Bonny and Mary read and calico jack they were quite famous.
jack: yes yes i come from a great breed of pirates if i may say.
Liz:belle it is if its a girl her name will be Catherine honoring both your mother.
jack:Ever wonder were Jackson came from?
Liz:yes
jack :my fathers father , Jackson sparrow.
PIRATES=SEX
Omg you sillie this is slowly disappearing
tee_pirategirl
woooooooow that's so cool you just made a whole new history for jack..I like it. and jackson and cathrine nice story
PIRATES=SEX
Thanks it just all kinda came to me suddenly lol
shannstar79
That was great
I loved it!!!
shannstar79
Blackbeards ship:
Blackbeard: we HAVE to find Sparrow, I cant believe you let him escape
Crew member: sir, we were in the midle of battle, we thought he was locked in the brig
Blackbeard: well he wasent and he is gone, both of them are gone, and I sort of um, I sort of fanied that little one
Crew member: looks at blackbeard as if he is a litlle freeked out by that last eucnich comment, and says maybe we should give up, let them go
Blackbeard: NEVER, Sparrow broke a promise to me, and that dosnet sit well with me, he also has gotten to every treasue Ive ever set out to look for before I have Including, the Rose Compass Treasure
Crew member: well so whats your plan
Blackbeard: I say we make way for sparrow island. If I am not mistaken, his little wifey if expecting, she could be just the leverage I need
Crewmwmber: what is it that you trying to gain here sir?
Blackbeard: are you questioning me!!!! I have my reasons, for wanting to get back at Captian Jack Sparrow. my hatred with Jack goes back way before he was even born, back to the days of Calico Jack and Anne Bonny. Calico Jack killed my grandfather ! my father never got over it, it was his dying wish that I settle this with the Sparrow family so,I have a score to settle with the Jack Sparrow, and Jack is the only living Sparrow I know of
Crewmwmber: does Jack Sparrow know of this between Calico Jacka nd your Grandfather?
Blackbeard: do not know, do not care. to Sparrow Island NOW
tee_pirategirl
OH MY GOD LMAO. that was so great, when blackbeard said: I fancied the little one! lol I'm actually laughing out loud, think of the jokes jack could make if he found out what blackbeard had said
shannstar79
Originally posted by tee_pirategirl
OH MY GOD LMAO. that was so great, when blackbeard said: I fancied the little one! lol I'm actually laughing out loud, think of the jokes jack could make if he found out what blackbeard had said
just keeping te Eunich jokes alive
I think the Eunich jokes are great and yes Jack would love these comments
tee_pirategirl
yeah thanks for that bit, it really is one of those jokes that never gets old I LMAO EVERY TIME!
shannstar79
by this time the pearl has made port at Sparrow Island
Norrie: so what now, we just forget about Blackbeard? we cant just let him go
Will: Jack he's right, we should go after him, the wemon can stay here with Elizabeth, I am sure they are safe here
Jack: this is where I was kidnapped by Blackbeard himself, do you actually think I am going to leave my wife here to chase after a man I have no personal ties to at all.
Elizabeth: Jack, if you want to finish this between Blackbeard you should go, I will be ok here with Abi, Jacky and Isabella, and Kate they all know how to handle a sword
Isabell: guns too!!, we can handle guns too
Alex looks over at Bele, you can handle a gun, and a sword, when did you learn that, looks over at Norrington, Norrie is standing there with a guilty as charged grin on his face
Norrie: yes I taught her, long time ago
Alex: guess its never too early to learn to handle weapons, even for a girl
Belle: even for a girl, whats that sopposed to mean!!!
Abi: men you should all go we can hold down the fort
Kate: yes, we will be fine here
Jackson: are you sure, I mean leaving all the wemon ,alone??? they cant protect them selves
Jack looks over at Will and gives a awful look, because he knows the wemon are about to go off on Jackson for saying that
Jack: he dosent know any better than not to say things like that
Will: true enough, espically aound these wemon!! the are tough
Jack: yea mate their actually more of a man than you are sometimes
Will: very funny, enough with the eunich jokes mate
Jack: sorry , laughs out loud
Belle: shoots Jackson a evil look, what did you just say, Jackson Christopher Sparrow, so you think wemon are helpless aye, and cant handle their own, well can you do this : takes a gun from under her dress, begins to fire hitting every target she aims for and twirls the gun around in her hand, and places is back under her dress in all of about 10 seconds: Jackson stands in astonishment, Belle is face to face with him staring him down, daring him to say a word, with a new found cofidence about her face
Jackson: Ok... Point well taken, off we go men
Belle: turns away, I thought thats what he'd say, all the wemon begin to giggle
Jack walks to Elizabeth: are you sure you want me to do this? I would just prefer to stay here with you and make sure your going to be ok
Elizabeth: Jack, you need to get rid of the last possible threat to our family, After the baby is born, I do not want to have to worry about the safety of our family again.
Jack: only if your sure,
Elizabeth: I am sure, please be carefull and come back to me
Jack: I will be carefull, and rest assured luv I will always come back for you
The men head out the door and head for the pearl
Elizabeth watches
Elizabeth: ok ladies, we need to make a plan, I am sure Blackbeard and his crew will be comming here soon
Iabella: Ill go get all the weapons I can find
Abi: Ill go get the Ammunition
Kate: Ill go get the candels, I am sure we will need some extra lighting
Elizabeth: watching Jack board the pearl, he waves at her and she waves back,
Elizabeth : Ill go get the rum....
all the ladies turn and look st Liz because they know she is pregnant and she cant drink
Elizabeth: its not for me, Its incase we need extra ammunition: or you ladies get thirsty
all he wemon begin to laugh, and each take off to find the things they set out to find
tee_pirategirl
LOL hilariouse! somebody continue..I'm loving this man/woman battle thing that's going on here. so the girls are gonna fight black beard all on their onesies aye? should be intresting...very intresting
shannstar79
aboard the Black Pearl Jack is sitting in the Captia's Cabin, he reaches into a chest and pulls out a journal he was given long ago, the journal of calico Jack, Jack hasent ever read much of this journal, never really hard the time. he begins to skim through the pages and comes to a entry where it seems that Calico jack and Anne Bonny were lovers and she was married to man named james whilst in love with Calico Jack
as Jack reads on he comes to discover that laster Calico Jack kills Bonny's husband james
This sounded all too familar to Jack as if he hard heard this story before but pehaps a diffrent version
Jack fallas a sllep and has a dream about when he and Blackbeard were actualy on the same side, Blackbeard had told him of his grandfather James Bonny's malicious murder and how he believed it was a planned murder between his wife and her lover, Blackbeard stated that he was going to trace back each step on this and find who urdered his grandfather, and make that person, or anyone with the same blood line pay
Jack wakws up only to find himself covered in sweat: he realizes whats going on here, Calic Jack and Anne Bonny killed James Bonny, Blackbeaards grandfather
Jack runs out into the bow of the pearl, he finds Jackson, Gibbs, and Norie talking
Jackson: father are you ok, you look terified
Jack: were going to have to make a plan, Blackbeard not only wants me, he wants me dead!!
shannstar79
Jack shows them a picture of calico Jack, Anne Bonny and another female pirate Mary Reed
tells the rest of the crew and all the men of what he has just discovered about his family's past
Pirate4Life
whats a eunich???
lol im a dumbass idc tho
sailorleo
Originally posted by Pirate4Life
whats a eunich???
lol im a dumbass idc tho a EUNUCH is some one who's had their testicles removed, not penis as some may think
Pirate4Life
oooh.. oh..ew! haha i think i get it now.. wow that took a while....
mmoviejunkie
Originally posted by sailorleo
a EUNUCH is some one who's had their testicles removed, not penis as some may think
thank you for spelling it correctly!!
sailorleo
Originally posted by mmoviejunkie
thank you for spelling it correctly!! no problem! *flashes peace sign*
sailorleo
aw! that's a cute smiliey!
mmoviejunkie
lol-isn't it?
shannstar79
Will: so where will we find blackbeard?
Jack: unfortunatly, I have no idea
Jackson: I still cant believe Belle can handle a gun like that!!!
all the men turn and look at Jackson, shake their heards and turn back to their conversation
Jack: we need to come up with a plan, whats weird is Blackbeard should knwo that were trying to find him and he is no where in sight, he should be hott on our trail?
Will: where could he be
Jack: (thinking about where blackbeard could be and why he isnt taking this opprtunity to get even with him, he looks up and has the look of fear in his eyes)he screams LIZ
scene fades to Sparrow Island, Inside the home of Jack and Liz
Liz: ok girls, are we ready if anything should happen, everyone knows their stations?
Kate: yes but Liz, you really neeed to take it easy, I mean the baby
ABi: Yes Liz at least lie down for a while
Belle: looking out the window. I am afraid, there will be no time for resting ladies,
Liz: what? goes to the window, sees blackbeards ship in the horizon
to your stations ladies,
shannstar79
hey guys, I guess that comment was for me, sorry for misspelling eunuch
Thanks for the correction though
CaptainJacksLuv
thats a good chapt
shannstar79
thanks luv
Ive been writing most by me onsie
please anyone can write if they would like to
CaptainJacksLuv
i just want to get the idea first....so if you could write the next 1 or 2 chapters...ill dtart writing
shannstar79
sure thing
I am acually about to leave work so when I get home later this evening I will write some Ok
shannstar79
Back on the Pearl:
Jack: almost in full panic, I should have never listened to you guys, or liz for that matter I should have never left her alone!how was I to think I would be ablele to find blackbeard
Will: Jack, you know as well as I do she will be fine, she can hold her own
Jack: yes Will I know that, but now she has two lives to look after, hers and our childs, and shes already been through so much
Jackson: we need to head back to sparrow isalnd right away
Norrie: I agree, Ful speed ahead
eveyone looks at Norrie,
Norrie: looks at Jack: sorry mate, you are still the Captain
Jack: its ok mate, Call the orders, I just want to make it home to my wife before something awfull happens(turns and walks into his cabin)
Belle peeks around the window seale, she sees Pirates getting off the ship and making their way to the home with fire torches and weapons
Belle: there is no turning back now ladies, its time
just then the door is broken down by the pirates and the run into a home wich appears empty
Pirate : no one is here
Blackbeard walks in, they are here , search the place, I want the pregnant one unharmed!! as for the rest kill them
shannstar79
This is a huge fight between the ladies and Blackbeards crew, Belle is in the living rooms fighting off the pirates she has already shot 2 others and is now ingaged in sword fighting, Jacky is in the hallway, sword fighting with 2 pirates and Abi and Kate are upstairs and have over taken 4 pirates, Liz in in the kitchen and has fought off at least 12 pirates on her own, Blackbeard walks in and sword fights with her she slices his arm on the left side
Liz: what do you want:
Blackbeard: you
Just then it appears the ladies are about to be overtaken, Abi is being held at gun point
Pirate 1: captain, I ve brought you the pregnant one
Pirate 2: Sir, NO Ive brought you the pregnanat one!
Pirate 3: NO NO No Ive brought the pregnant one
Abi, Belle, Kate ,Jacky and Liz Grab their bellies, and grin
Blackbeard: whats the meaning of this? Which on of you is Elizabeth Sparrow
All 5 ladies raise their hands and smile
( you see hwta Blacbeard didnt know was this was all part of the girls plan, they were pretending to be preganat and be Elizabeth Sparrow so Blackbeard would not know who to kidnap)
Blackbeard: some one better fess up, or there will be hell to pay
the ladies turn and look at each other,
Belle: No Blackbeard you are the only one who will pay in hell
at that instant the all 5 ladies take a pistil from under their dresses and point them directly at Blackbeard
at that instant
Jack, Will, Norrie, Alex, and Jackson run into the house they stop dead in their tracks they see all 5 wemon, pregnant belllies, dead pirates lying on the floor, and Blackbeard standing with 5 ladies pointing guns in his face
Jack: looks and Jackson, told you they could hold thir own son
Jackson: looks like theyve been holding on to alot more than that, theyr all pregnant! EVEN BELLE
Jack: wispering, son, their not all preganat! they are just extremly SMART
Jack: Blackbeard! whats your purpsoe here!!
Blackbeard, ahh sparrow, call these wenches off of me
Belle: what did you say!
Jackson: you may not want to do that Blackbeard shes a feisty one!
Blackbeard: I see that, they all are, but I am here to settle a score with you sparrow,
Jack: I know why your here, I cannot help hat has happened in the past, Claico Jack was my grandfather, I know he killed your grandfather,Jmaes Bonny, but thats life blackebard, they were pirates
Blackbeard: yes but you see my grandfathers dying wish was to see that all sparrows be killed, for what Calico jacck and Anne Bonney did to him so now its your turn Sparrow
Blackbeard raises his gun cocks it and points it at Jack
we hear a gun shot, silence, Blackbeard falls to the ground
we see Elizabath satnding there with her gun still pointed at Blackbeard, the gun smoking
Liz: looking at Jack,I save your life, you save mine were square luv!
he runs to her grabs her and kisses her
belle: Thanks God this is over, now we can remove these Pillows, they were driving me CRAZY!!
all the ladies remove their pillows
Jackson: Belle, I am so proud of you, you really shock me!
Jack and Liz are still hugging and smiling
Liz: Thank goodness this is all over with blackbeard
Jack: thanks to you, I am so sorry I left you here
Liz: we were ok, we did fine, if I do say so myself she says with a grin
Jack: you always do luv
Liz: Only problem is : who is going to clean up this place?
tee_pirategirl
aaaaaaaaaaaw that was so smart ...and funny. lol poor ol black beard.
shannstar79
Thank you so much,
feel free to write some if you like'
CaptainJacksLuv
thats good...lol
shannstar79
Later that evening Elizabeth is resting on the couch while all the men are suprisingly helping clean the house, she hears commotion and opens her eyes, looks around and see's Jack cleaning
Liz: now this is how it should be , she says with a grin
Jack: dont get used to it luv
Norrington: I am used to it, I have to do this at home all the time
Jacky: thats right, got mine trained well ladies
All the wemon begin to laugh aout loud, the men sit down in the living room and begin to pour the Rum, they begin to become slightly sloshed
Liz: well this is dreadfull
Abi: what dear what is?
Liz: she pouts her bottom lip , I cant have rum with you guys
Will: I am sure it wont be long lizzie, you will give birth soon and then you can
Jack: drinking heavily, hey dont call her lizzie, thats my lizzie, shut up you bloody idiot
kate: Jack!!!
Liz: Jack
Jack: sorry luv, looking at his rum bottle, hey Jackson, want some Rum, Its time you tried some
jack: JACKSON?
Jack: hey where is Jackson
Jackson and Isabella have taken a walk and are sitting on the sand along the shoreline
Jackson: Isabella, I am sorry or misjudging your fighting abilities
Belle: Jackson Its ok, no big deal, just dont let it happen again, she says with a gigle
Jackson: May I tell you something?
Belle: sure
Jackson: I am so in love with you
she turns to him and smiles
Belle: Jackson, I am so in love with you too, you kow Jackson we are almost 18 now,practically adults, dont you think its time we start acting like it, could be fun she says with a grin
Jackson: what do you mean luv, I am curious
Belle: Ill show you, she says with a smile
They embrace in a very sexy kiss, fall back into the sand and the scene fades
CaptainJacksLuv
lol!!! rofl!!!! soooo funny! in some way....lol
shannstar79
six months have passed and we see Sparrow Mannor on a beautiful day sun shinning, nice warm breeze, we see Elizabeth sitting in a swing on the porch of her house, rocking a baby Jack walks out to bring a bottle:
Jack: how are my two lovley ladies this morning? he says with a smile
Elizabeth: Catherine and I are perfect Jack,
Jack: Elizabeth, i was thinking: I bel;ieve we have had our pirating fun, we have plundered, phillaged, seen the world through the eyes of the Black Pearl for so many years now, we have a family now and now we have baby catherine to raise and I think we should slow down
Elizabeth: what do you mean Jack?
Jack: I want to give the pearl to Jackson, with the announcement of their wedding comming up, I think it to be the perfect gift
Elizabeth: Oh Jack I think that is a wonderfull idea, They will be so happy, when will we tell them
Jack : we will tell them tonight,arent they comming for dinner , by the way you look beautiful, Ive never seen you more beautiful than when you are holding our children ..... except for thet one time when you chained me up to the mast and left me to die, you looked beautiful then too
Elizabeth: jack! I have said I am sorry for that a million times
Jack: no luv, no need for sorry, it made me love you even more than I already did
he reaches down and kisses her, walks out to the pearl to prepare it for the evening
later that evening, a knock at the door
Liz: Come in you two
Jackson: hi mom its so good to see you
Liz: you too son, she says as she hugs him.. isabella how are you? you look beautiful as ever
Isabella: Elizabeth, thank you so much ! Is there anything I can help you with
Liz: sure come with me into the kitchen, Jackson your father is in the living room, playing with Catherine go join him
Jackson eneters the family room and sees jack sitting on the floor with Catherine she is sound asleep in his arms, he is gently rocking his body and singing her a lullaby
Jackson: hi dad
jack: Hi son!! I amso happy to see you
catherine begins to wake up, she wimpers a bit and jack holds her up to play with her
Jack: here son take your sister, I gotta pea
Jackson Thanks dad, too much info!!
Jackson is holding the baby and playing with her when Liz comes to tell them dinner is ready
Liz: you know your going to make a great father someday jackson, you know how I know this? because you are just like your father, and he is the best
after dinner catherine is put to bed, and of course the rum has been poured
Jack: Son, your mother and I have a surprise for you and Isabella
jackson: what, your not having another baby are you mom
Elizabeth: good Lord no Jackson
jack: we have been practicing just in case though
Liz: jack!
Jackson: dad !
Jack: what, sorry
Jack: your mother and I are very proud of you, and we wantto give you a wedding present that has been a huge part of our lives and a vital part of how we met. we want you to have the Pearl
jackson: are you serious!!
Isaballa: yea are you serious? Oh my gosh, this is great!!
Jackson: Thank you guys so much are you sure
Jack: we are more than sure
Isabella: Jackson, can we get merried on the pearl?
jackson: anything you want luv.
liz: i haddent thought of that! Thats a great idea
Isabella: so does this mean you two arent pirates anymore
Jack: no way dearie, we will always be pirates, its who we are were like two sparrows in a hurricaine, we will always keep going, but we want to teach catherine a different life, times are changing
jackson: Thank you guys so mucj! This is the best gift anyone could have ever given us!!
they all begin to drink more, laughing, they played a game of poker,
Jack: completly sloshed, jackshun, looks like we get to take the pearl out tonight
Jackson: why is that dad? oh never mind I know
jackson, Isabella, Elizabeth and Jack say all in unison
beacause THE RUM IS GONE they all begin to laugh
scene fades
CaptainJacksLuv
thats awesome! lol
Pirates-Orlie
Why did you stopped? Won't you go write anymore?
ivebeendepped43
yeah! this thread ttly dissappeared people!! read it again, and write more!
Eveline
Oooww I love those self-made stories. Shall we make a new one? I will write too! Please someone react if you want to help me make a PotC 8!
shannstar79
hey guys
I am totally up for POTC 8
I loved adding my two cents to POTC 6 and 7
lets get it started
Pirates-Orlie
Yeah I also like the idea!
Eveline
Okay let's do it! Shall I make a new topic? Yes that's what I'm going to do. Okay guys, check out the new topic : PotC 8!
Pirates-Orlie
Alright I'm waiting! Btw I love your siggy. I'm a huge Orlie-fan!!
Eveline
Haha I can see... Me too! I LOVE HIM Your siggy is great Sweet...
Btw the topic is online already...
Pirates-Orlie
Ow yes I see...
PirateDiva
ah i see.....# 7 so i guess it would be wise to read 7 b4 reading 8 right? lol
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