Are you a poet?

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=Mysta=-kILL
Post a poem line that goes/rhymes with the poem line above it.

Example: first post-Roses are red, violets are blue...
Second post- ...If I had a friend it would'nt be you!

Or whatever.

Start.


I love pie, I love cake...

=Tired Hiker=
I love chewing on the prongs of a rake.

InnerRise
Can't COMPREHEND the leaps and bounds before me.....

Anata Wa Wakarimasu Ka......

Sanctuary
shock

Demonic Phoenix
Originally posted by InnerRise
Can't COMPREHEND the leaps and bounds before me.....

Anata Wa Wakarimasu Ka......

Nor is my heart as still as the sea.

Impediment
The anger in my soul screams with hate......

Grand_Moff_Gav
Now kill all the Jews...before it's too late

=Tired Hiker=
edited by his majesty.

=Mysta=-kILL
I know I will soon be gone from this place...

indiangirl
Hi i'm new.

=Mysta=-kILL
Originally posted by indiangirl
Hi i'm new.
You may be new, but I want poems damn it! lol

Demonic Phoenix
Originally posted by =Mysta=-kILL
You may be new, but I want poems damn it! lol


Cheap fool, can't write your own poemsstick out tongue, lol.



Originally posted by =Mysta=-kILL
I know I will soon be gone from this place...

Your words are just a distaste

InnerRise
Originally posted by Sanctuary
shock Your reaction amuses me.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Cheap fool, can't write your own poemsstick out tongue, lol.





Your words are just a distaste
Not knowing I do, annoying it is.....

Anata Wa Wakarimasu Ka......

Syren
Originally posted by InnerRise

Not knowing I do, annoying it is.....

Anata Wa Wakarimasu Ka......

If full of care, what life is this?

ninja

Sorry, but it fitted so well. Here's my real submission;

Fighting for knowledge, comparative bliss

lorddreamer
I know that one day, I'll feel her kiss.

(Hi everyone, I'm new smile)

Bardock42
What kind of bullshit now is this? (yeah, I rerhymed it, so ****ing what?)



All over this town
Yes, a low wind may blow
And I can see through everybody's clothes
With no reason
To hide these words, I feel
And no reason
To talk about the books I read
But still, I do

That's 'cause I'm a ...
Sister I'm a ...
All over this town

Muck101
I can see right down to your core. Your ugly, ugly center.

Bunny B
That love we said would last forever is now only a blurr

Immortality
(WTF!? I thought the end of every line was supposed to rhyme?)

Now all I do is think of you and and your ambitions of becoming an entrepreneur.

Demonic Phoenix
(well technically I guess it's the end of every pair of lineserm)

Everyday and every night that I close my eyes

Immortality
I see the real you beneath all the lies

Demonic Phoenix
Originally posted by Immortality
I see the real you beneath all the lies

(hmm, I expected another line, but oh well)


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Then I say to myself over and over again

Immortality
That I don't need you, you've caused me nothing but pain.

Demonic Phoenix
My heart's filled with nothing but sorrow and rage,

Bunny B
because way you tore it out like a worthless page,

Immortality
and threw it aside as if it were a thing of shame,

Bunny B
You were in the wrong but you say I was the one who is deranged,

Immortality
now let me put it this way, get the **** outta my way

Bunny B
I'll forget about you, open my eyes and embrace the day

Blue_Hefner
And say, hey, Kay, look at that bluejay

Bunny B
Hey now don't look away, what are you afriad?

Blue_Hefner
No, but I plan to get laid by my maid

Immortality
(what the ****???)

if that's the case, then you're a waste

(sorry, couldn't come up with anything better)

Blue_Hefner
( i couldn't either)

though i have a tongue on my face, beer i cannot taste

Bunny B
If its beer you want I'll walk out of your life with haste ( laughing out loud )

Immortality
and if I ever look back at you, it'll be with distaste

Blue_Hefner
And leap away quicker than a grasshopper

Bunny B
The thought of you will be as meaningless as a preteen faze

Immortality
And the mere thought of you sets my heart to hate

Blue_Hefner
grasshopper and faze dont rhyme

Bunny B
Yea becuase i didn't notice you posted that line,

Blue_Hefner
That thought is as sour as a lime

Bunny B
It was so sour it should of been a crime,

Immortality
And you guys can continue bickering as if you control time

Blue_Hefner
And I continue to pawn you because I'm sublime

Bunny B
Sublime? Ha I'd own your ass because I'm just that fine,

Immortality
What on earth was all that? That was crime against rhyme. (didn't know what else to put)

Blue_Hefner
I'm debonair with flare; I scare, wear, and tear

Immortality
And why the **** would I care?

Blue_Hefner
Because if you don't, I will pare you into pairs of pears like a bear (I don't know, just go with it)

Immortality
(Ok, even though it don't make a shit load of sense)
And that's just weird, I wish I had a mare
(horse that is. I dunno why, for running away maybe?)

Blue_Hefner
By then the beasts arise like yeast to conquer peace

Immortality
and the police break down the door and yell freeze...

Blue_Hefner
And have you in pee up to your knees

AOR
And what kind of crap responses are these?

Blue_Hefner
What is a warrior but a man who doesn't flee? (stupid i know)

Immortality
(you goddamn right! You always change the subject that isn't even a...subject!)

(To AOR) You askin me?!

(Blue Hefner) He is a man who fights for what he believes

Blue_Hefner
Would you rather i didn't post?

Demonic Phoenix
Not if every post of yours will be a gay-ass responseermm


Originally posted by Bunny B
Hey now don't look away, what are you afriad?

(I'd say this is where it started from, well the next post anyway)

(the next line) Is it because everyone in the world seems crazed?

Immortality
(I'm jus goin with the flow...)

Or maybe humanity's just fazed because deep down in one way or another everyone's razed

Immortality
Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Not if every post of yours will be a gay-ass responseermm




(I'd say this is where it started from, well the next post anyway)

(the next line) Is it because everyone in the world seems crazed?

I'd say it was the post before

pcp
Dehumanised Democracy

Rent-Boy romantic,
Dirty sycophantic,
In a dehumanised democracy everything's frantic,
And neither love nor lust ever get a chance,
To witness existence or bliss at first hand,
Gone away,
Gone away,
So we sing hurray,
For our decay,

chithappens
Originally posted by Immortality
(I'm jus goin with the flow...)

Or maybe humanity's just fazed because deep down in one way or another everyone's razed

Or is it the Heinken I drank that serves me disdain?

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