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Hmm, nice work, though you are making some grammatical mistakes, just some of the words aren't in correct order and again the structure of the poem makes it a bit confusing, yoou should use like proper stanzas and stuff, other than that it's great! The Arabic words fit in nicely.
Don't mind me asking, are you a Muslim?

Thats really good. Like immortality saud a few grammatical mistaj=kes, but it really was kick ass... awesome job. So true silver heart

Frankly, horrible poetry.

It is in no way interesting or fun to read. Aslo, the grammar used is atrocious.

You have a lot of improving to do. But don't let my criticism stop you.

Coulda been a bit more subtle dude, I like the ideas expressed in it and not everyone's grammatical skills are perfect

hi again

no problem at all

dear Immortality and dear Weeping Fairy

thanks a lot ..

this poetry of the Arab-language , but I tried to translated into English, so ,there is a lot of errors . but not problem i can accept any Any comment or statement .


Bardock42 .. do you know you made me laugh .. your comment is beautiful because it is honest

dear Immortality .. yes iam muslim ... But with this I have many friends of Muslims and many Christians. From America,Britain ..from around the world . . other countries. and I love them very much . I like to learn about other cultures often ... I do not care about the differences of religions and only I like to knows others . because that what islam teach me .. Islam always teaches us to be tolerant with others .

I am now studying the English language .. maybe iam not very good .. but really i find it very interesting language ..

please ..
If you found errors in any poetry just told me ... because i need to learn from my mistakes.

best

silver heart

Yeah, no offense. I mean. It might help in the long run, right?

Also, if you only get sugar blown up the ass you end up like Floo. And you wouldn't want that. No you don't.

Bardock42

absolutely .. you are right ..


and people who do not make mistake who will not learn anything .


thx brother .. and always let me see your honest words . good luck to you .




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silver heart

Hey cool, I'm muslim too! Eid Mubarak for the festival that just went by, well in England anyway, dunno about the rest of the world!

Immortality.. good news .. so you are muslim .. awesome !!!!!

and Eid Mubarak to you too


and happy new year for all people in this forum .

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silver heart