Just my poetry

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whitewolfgurl
Okay this is my first one:

MURDER
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Crimson tears fall silently to the ground
A silver moon casts shadows on the walls
The air grows stiff as there ceases to be sound
Only a 'thud' is heard as a lone figure falls.

The moon reveals all that happens in the dead of night
It sees a dark figure run from the house and out of sight.

A motionless figure lies on the floor
It's crimson tears flow like a river through the night
The moon refuses to gaze upon such a scene any more
So it quietly leaves and brings the sun, who brings the light.

As the sun illuminates the room, it finds only dread,
For through the night, an innocent girl lies dead...

vivando-loca
whoa, depressing and a great poem.

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whitewolfgurl
Yeah I found that my best poems are usually depressing! lol Thanks!

vivando-loca
lol. smile

Weeping Fairy
damn, awesome poem. really depressing, and well written lol, id love to hear more.

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Weeping Fairy
oh wow, i got chills from that poem. im really tearing up here cuz u just wrote that so beautifully it was very easy to imgine. but i could never go hunting, i love animals, and i can see u do to. but wolves are one of my fav animals, them and lions lmao. really beautiful poem smile

vivando-loca
wow, that was .......beautiful. cry

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whitewolfgurl
Thanks! I love animals especially wolves so I like writing poems about them smile Even though it is a sad one sad

vivando-loca
yea, wolves are pretty awesome. smile

AOR
Shockingly amazing. You write so beautifully. I await in hopeful anticipation for you next work. Truly, truly wonderful poetry. thumbsup

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