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nice, very depictive althought the structure could do with a little attention.

good stuff.

kk i'll work on that thanks

*gets the crowd to appluad* yes!! i love it...has i sort of dark feeling to it

awww thanks hun. ^^

pitt_spin

Cool, DB.

It is really sad. Lonelyness. And your use of words is rather visual, so i find it quite easy to see the imagery and the context from which you base it. Apart from some minor pacing and layout issues, this was good. Very well done love. x

i can never get enoguh of this poem my love...it may not be perfect but i still lvoe it. never a such thing as a perfect poem, just one that is loved to perfection

meh*shrugs* i just got bored and started writing i had something in mind but in the middle of it the poem grabbed me by the hair and said 'SQREW YOUR ORIGINAL WE'RE GOING THIS WAY!' And so yeah... Took a turn for the worst... I need to get something better out here... *sighs*

...i can't wait for the new one

The Couple Holding Each Others Hearts

For the couple who's love was lost in the sands of time

the look of love sends each other's souls into the sublime

one so beautiful, so innocent, the other so quiet, so sinful

both share a feeling of pure love that singes their souls



the goddess and the AntiKrist fall in love on first sight

spending together every hour of the day and night

holding each other dear, together they waste the light



in love they watch, in love they grow, in love they feel, in love they die

he runs a gentle hand down her body, staring into her beautiful eyes

the shiver of her body sends chills of his own down his spine

she gently pulled him onto her where they reached up to the great divine



she moaned to him to never leave but forever stay

he closed his and whispered the he'll stand by her, come whatever may

he looks back into her eyes, feeling her love wash his troubles away



and forever he stayed, never leaving come whatever may

for after their reach to the starry skies above, still they lay

as the night goes on, the AntiKrist looks into her eyes and gets on one knee

he slowly pulls out a velvet box with a a silver band inside and asks her "will you marry me?"



the blood red tears stream down his goddess' beautiful face

she nodded while she bent down to kiss him without haste

he smiled as she whispered "my love you soars past the stars in space"



"your so sweet" she whispered into her beloved AntiKrist's ear

"you always say that" he whispered back to the goddess he holds dear

"because its true" she smiled, her blood slowly pinkening her cheeks

the look froze the AntiKrist into a look of love, not able to speak



on the day of the wedding, the tears flown like foutains of red wine

the goddess wipes her tears and said to her beloved AntiKrist "your nothing but mine"

the AntiKrist looked into his goddess and said "you hold my heart your hands and i hold yours in mine"



the unholy prowless of the sacred two and up with them looking to the starry sky

for has anyone seen a love so pure, so unfilled with hate, so unfilled with lies?

this is where we will leave the couple. but don't worry, this isnt they end of their love

the AntiKrist from below and his beloved goddess fromthe starry divine above.

a little something i found on the interwebs i like it so i had to post it


Hold High Satan's Pride

don't be ashamed to show your beliefs, there's nothing shameful to hide

be proud and hold up the inverted cross, hold high Satan's pride

burn the bible, a book written by a lonely drunk whom lied

live and praise Satan or die for the other, its your time to decide



Hail Satan! if not your life is a sin

look torwards evil, release the demon from within



rid the world of those many non-believers whom think they know

commit genocide on those failed to praise the unholy, let their blood flow

let the doves drop dead, slaughtered in cold blood by the beloved crow

praise Satan to all his might, let out the hate and evil and watch it grow



Hail Satan as the God of nothing and everything

leave those non-believers screaming and suffering



bow down to Satan! feel the wrath of Hell's furios fires

believing in the enslaver of the human race can be dire

believe in what Satan says, believe not in the enslaver, the liar

hold high Satan's pride! hold Satan as thy lord and thy sire



do you really care?

as i lie here with blood pouring out of fresh wounds
i now realise that my time here on earth is to end soon
theres no pain from the cut, just the memory of you
also, the thought of my death being your fault is there too

i wish i was back in a time of no pain
a time where your love wasn't in vain
when we were happy to spend time together
a time where you said you'd love me forever

my vision slowly burns to black and grey
there was never a thought of how this could end another way
i wish i could warn the next guy of your slow poison to the heart
so when you leave he won't go the same way i'm about to depart

the visions of marriage pass my tear filled eyes
now i'll have another place where family and friends will cry
a painful sight of me caused by your beauty and your might
a lonely house with silence throughout the whole night

tears run down to mix with my blood across the floor
i close my eyes for im getting tired and they're getting sore
through my clenched eyes tears of you still run free
i just wish to know why you did this to me

my time is near i can hear it call to me like the way you used to
i can care less now if this act of mine will actually hurt you
i just could care less of your worhtless, self-sacrificng life
and i can care a lot less that you used to call yourself my wife

i see the end of my rope, my time has come to an end
these are my last memories to you i send
don't come visit me when im buried, like you care
because why now would you want to be there?

this is it, im gone from this place of Hell
i can hear the slow rthym of the death-knell
looks like you had the last laugh, like you said you always do
just remember, the blood and tears on the floor are just for you.

love this!

Torchured Living Souls (Intro)



For those on the outside scream

For those on the inside cry

For those few willing to live

For those many willing to die



Chorus

Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice

So unborn fetus shaped diseases

May weep for new found life



For those brave enough to face death

For those afraid of their own fears

For those never to have wept

For those whom freely lose tears



Chorus



For those that are loved

For those tortured living souls

For those whom are completely sane

For those whom lost all control



Chorus



This is for you!

The Love Of A Thousand Hearts



For the one with the love of a thousand hearts

The Goddess with beautifuly stitched foreign parts

What made thee so evil but yet filled with innocense

With a smile so mezmerized and eyes so intense

With a stare that trapped my love in thy's heart, a bareless prison

The same prison that caused this colorless, twisting, tunnel vision



For the one with a laugh like a silver bells

Thee whom took me out of hate's many hells

How did thy get a touch that effects men with hemlock

The same touch that always sends thine body into shock



For the one with lips as warm and red as wine

Thee whom took my heart, thee whom I call mine

Your love was the cure for my loneliness

Not a mortal soul can come close to your holiness

Not one can master the five fold kiss

Not one can fill my life with such bliss



For the onewith eyes that never weep

Thee whom healed scars so deep

For the one with the love of a thousand hearts

My Goddess with the beautifuly stitched foreign parts

Bring Forth the War

Heretics, fallen, angels, and demons alike, come forth and join the infinite war

come fight along side the forces of sin and obey Satan, Babylon's whore

Lies inside your head tell you to fight for the good, fight for the right

Dismiss the lies and fight for sin, take your soul away from the light



Bring the death of those who follow the enslaver, the father of lies and deception

Destroy those who would walk the light and use against us false oppression

Let them hear our organs and our blood curling war cries

For this is the day the deceivers and those against us die



The legions of the damned bring forth the new, but old, war

Our fanatkism will bring more killing, more bloodlust, all for more

Watch thier progenies fall from our forces of many creatures of Hell

Listen to the fallen prophets cry from pain under the Darklord's spell



Follow our vermifuge into heaven's gates, slaughtering the entire human race

Burn thier bodies under the false god's sign, the eternal cross of disgrace

Release the Black Mass on the place of "everlasting life" to ensure our victory

For there will be no more false promises, for there will be no more trickory!

good job beautiful...good writing

Originally posted by DangerousBeauty
love this!

Torchured Living Souls (Intro)



For those on the outside scream

For those on the inside cry

For those few willing to live

For those many willing to die



Chorus

Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice

So unborn fetus shaped diseases

May weep for new found life



For those brave enough to face death

For those afraid of their own fears

For those never to have wept

For those whom freely lose tears



Chorus



For those that are loved

For those tortured living souls

For those whom are completely sane

For those whom lost all control



Chorus



This is for you!



I genuinely thought this was great.

vast improvement.

omg *sniff* i love this song... i cry everytime

For My Fallen Angel
-my dying bride

As I draw up my breath,
And silver fills my eyes.
I kiss her still,
For she will never rise.

On my weak body,
Lays her dying hand.
Through those meadows of Heaven,
Where we ran.

Like a thief in the night,
The wind blows so light.
It wars with my tears,
That won't dry for many years.

"Loves golden arrow
At her should have fled,
And not Deaths ebon dart
To strike her dead."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLmspcgrYrY

anothers song that makes me cry

"Sound The Bugle"
-BRYAN ADAMS
Sound the bugle now - play it just for me
As the seasons change - remember how I used to be
Now I can't go on - I can't even start
I've got nothing left - just an empty heart

I'm a soldier - wounded so I must give up the fight
There's nothing more for me - lead me away...
Or leave me lying here

Sound the bugle now - tell them I don't care
There's not a road I know - that leads to anywhere
Without a light feat that I will - stumble in the dark
Lay right down - decide not to go on

Then from on hight - somewhere in the distance
There's a voice that calls - remember who your are
If you lose yourself - your courage soon will follow

So be strong tonight - remember who you are
Ya you're a soldier now - fighting in abattle
To be free once more -Ya that's worth fighting for

Awww, that a beautiful song... finally tracked you down DangerousBeauty. Yaay!

yay! ^^

Cool... :{

o.0?

a little something a friend of mine wrote for me

on this day
on this day as the white snow hits the ground and clouds darken the sky
we wait patiently for the moment when we bind our lives till we die
a gentl breeze blows through a window in the room i nervously pace back and forth
my shaking fingers trace the image of my amulet of Baphomet the North

as seconds change to minutes, my heart starts to beat fatser at the thought of how beautiful you'll look
a low bell chimes, summoning me to the altar, i slowly make it to my spot as my body shook nervously
our families all seated, stare in my direction with loving and caring eyes
i stare back, noting that the men would smile while the women would cry

as my knees start to shake, i turn my head side to side, slowly looking for a seat
in the middle of leaning down, a lighter bells chimes and our families rise to their feet
i, too, quickly rise, my heart beating faster than it ever has before
my eyes dart back and forth, something catching my attention at the door

your father stands there, smiling as he waits for you to come to him
you enter my vision, more beautiful than the greatest sin
the blood red dress flows with each graceful step you make
your father stretches out his arm in which you take

my heart came to a stop as you made your way to the altar
you and your father stopped, he kisses and leaves you next to me without falter
i look into your eyes, the light from them engulfs the room
your smile is like many cherry blossoms in bloom

my hands shake as i watch our families seat themselves and watch us
i look back at you and feel the height of my nervousness
the Satanic high preist walks over and tells us to hold hands as he binds our wrist
i slowly shake my head, clearing my mind of this thickening mist

the high preist stepped back and brought forth a goblet of wine
yoo run a calm finger over my knuckles, sending a shiver up my spine
"as you drain your life's blood into the wine" the high priest said
"show the Dark Lord your love. Even after you lay dead"

a razor was given to me so i could slit your free arm
i lean into you and whisper" i do not do this in harm"
you kiss me slowly and nod, holding your breathe
slitting your wrist, my heart beats more rapidly in my chest

the high preist then hands to you a dagger, telling you to do the same
i heard your father mumble that this whole thing is insane
you roll your eyes and slowly slit my wrist, the blood starting to flow
i close my eyes as my mind slowly loses its hold

the high preist raises the goblet to our lips, telling us to take a sip
the blood wine made my body feel light as blood still drips
"time has come to let the Dark Lord bring together these damned souls,"
the high preist said softly, "and to let their love run black like a flock of crows."

as the ceremony goes on, my heart is at its natural beat
the shaking still goes, making me want to take a seat
the high priest tells us to kiss, the closing of the ceremony
our lips part after a long kiss, your laugh is like a song of harmony

families pass in blurs, voices faintly muffled
"i can't belive we're married" you mumble
i smile and kiss your cheek, our families wait for us to dance
my eyes fall onto you, your body in a relaxed stance

through the speakers, Vermillion part 2 slowly begins to start
arm in arm, our blood drips to the floor in the shape of a heart
our lips lock, the music making your body slowly sway
we pull away, both smiling, knowing we live on this day

Daymn!!! Thats really good. Who wrote that love?

Kelsey...i'm always here. i love you with all my heart and soul. i know we will find a way out of this black hole called life. please hold on as i know i will because i know in the end we will be together. i love you so much and if i lost you i don't know what i would do...again please hold on my love, my goddess

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Daymn!!! Thats really good. Who wrote that love?

Justin did.

Originally posted by XvampbenjiiX666
Kelsey...i'm always here. i love you with all my heart and soul. i know we will find a way out of this black hole called life. please hold on as i know i will because i know in the end we will be together. i love you so much and if i lost you i don't know what i would do...again please hold on my love, my goddess

I'll hold on as long as you do.

you know thats really sweet. nice to see that some people still do things the old fashioned way and dont just give up when it gets hard.

thank you.

Originally posted by Lara
you know thats really sweet. nice to see that some people still do things the old fashioned way and dont just give up when it gets hard. thanks...

vomit.

His teeth they shine
This dragon of mine
So cruel and cold
Has only eyes for me

I stay be his side
Till the end of my life
I do not run
There is nowhere to hide

I love him so
But he does not see
This dragon of mine
Has only eyes for me

I heard a cry
I turned in time
To see him die
This dragon of mine

I began to weep
His wounds did seep
I feel his pain
This dragon of mine

The knight was proud
There was a crowd
They came to see
This dragon of mine

I like it, Kelsey! xx

I love these poemss (:

You and me were once a fairy tale in love
No happily ever after, just a horrorble disaster

You tried to drag me down, so I put you in the ground
You brought it on yourself and now this coffin fits you well

I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust

Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me

I carved it in your chest so you'd never forget
And I loved you to death, and I'll take your final breath

I hope you understand that our story had to end
Now I lay you down to sleep
And pray the worms your soul to keep

I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust

Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust

I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust

Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me

Talk about subtle hint ^^

oh trust me, that is subtle to what i want to say. but i'd rather say it to her