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Fallen Flower

A single flower falls;
It is a symbol of passion left behind.

Like a demonic plague;
It sweeps love off its feet,
Crushing the soul. The heart.

The flower falls;
It will die as all things do,
Passion to the world of men,
That fades as time goes by.

Fallen flower.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams

When the screams fill the air;
Only time to run in fear,
No other option but to hear,
We will never march from here.

We wait till daybreak comes;
So we can have another run,
While dodging death like everyone,
And watching time pass with our fun.

Our blood curdles from the fight;
When our bodies quiver with pure fright,
We hope the daybreak lasts all night,
While dark creatures come out to bite.

But night falls once again;
The screams return and cause our strain,
They fill the air with death and pain,
Life and death are both the same.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

This Hollow World

This world is full of billions;
Yet we each are so alone,
We 'pretend friends' and us 'fakers',
We are as hollow as a bone.

And alone we cry at night;
And alone we cry,
Because we are so hollow,
We have nothing left to hide.

In our massive cities;
Everything is a rush,
Never stop to say hello,
No one has time for us.

The way of modern life;
The Computer, our money, a car,
These are but material things that should have no meaning,
But it shows how hollow we as humans are.

As I write this poem;
I think of all my classmates,
Sucked in by money, violence, drugs,
Its them, as hollows, I really hate.

This hollow world.

-Kevin Traynor

Awesome work The second one being my favorite. Good work with them all though

EDIT

The Screams II

In the eerie shadows of the night;
The screams they fill the air with fright,
Stopping humans in their sight,
Eclipsing darkness is their right.

When morning comes we try for sure;
To escape this hellish place of lure,
We fight to try and reach the door,
But ungodly forces stop our soar.

When dusk comes all hope is lost;
The dead arise above the moss,
A broken statue of the cross,
Is covered in dripping blood and frost.

The cold night air comes again;
Bringing screams of death and pain,
No-longer will my love remain,
Because I think I've gone insane.

When screams come we run and hide;
From creatures who have gone and died,
Making people want to cry,
Death and fear not pushed aside.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

When a Jedi Falls

When we fight evil,
We fight for justice,
We do not fight for exhilleration,
We do not kill for revenge.

When we do battle,
We battle for the sake of good,
We do not harm needlessly for evil,
We do not fight to end lives.

When we die,
We die with honor,
We do not involve the innocent,
We do not wish revenge.

When a Jedi falls,
These words run through their minds.

-Kevin Traynor

Not my best... duh, but I'm just writing to pass the time.

Consequences of Sin

Stairs up to the stars,
Stairs up to the universe,
They lead to heaven.
Seemingly endless.

They twist and turn,
Spiral and slant,
Changing direction for every pure heart.
Endless.

Sinners try and walk the steps,
Can't keep their balence and fall to their fate,
The Devil looks up hungry for more.
The endless trek.

You keep walking,
Hope you don't fall,
It causes you to think about life, about sin.
Did I sin?

I continue walking,
losing confidance with each step,
My mind races in deep thought, memories of my life passed.
Did I sin?

After hours of climbing you see the light,
But my mind still races as more loose their balence,
I find the answer I seek.
Did I sin? Yes.

I hope against hope I had been forgiven,
My hand becomes shakey,
Tears fill my eyes.
Somehow I knew I hadn't.

And as I fell away from the stairs,
I look up and see the horror in your eyes,
The tears on your face, you knew.
I'm sorry.

Your eye's fill with sorrow as your arm streatches for me,
An unknown force drags me down, faster,
You try and run down the steps to reach me.
Too late.

I'm sorry my love,
But they are my sins,
I can't let you have them.
I fall faster, exceeding the spectrum of light.

Sunddenly... Pain.

Consequences of sin.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams III

The night passes as before;
The screams are there beyond the door,
Don't look or you will hit the floor,
Our bones shiver to the core.

The sun rises on a new day;
Casting clouds above in bloody rays,
Causing frost to dew away,
Giving right to a new way.

We all fight to stay alive;
Shooting creatures till they're nigh,
As we try to escape the hive,
Olny the time will count us by.

The night falls fast this time around;
Making sure the screams are bound,
While those remaining run to ground,
Hiding from the undead sounds.

Blood drips from my finger tips;
While I look at the dead bodies quick,
The sight of gore making me feel sick,
The blood glistened in my grip.

The pain and screams filled the air;
As another dead night we have to fare,
Blood splattering across my hair,
I bring my weapon down to bear.

Screams ring out in my ears;
Only pain can cause that fear,
I look upon darkness as a peer,
"I hope my time to go ain't here."

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

=l ...... <=D those are all very good and i especially liked the hollywood one...... kevin?

The Screams IV

This night is tarnished by the dead;
Our screams no-longer being said,
We tried to survive a week of dread,
Our blood pools around us in red.

The ungodly hour of the night;
No-longer held our screams of fright,
Given up with-out a fight,
Finally having lost our might.

The sun rose on the bloody scene;
Shedding light on what had been,
The time passes without a seam,
Like a kind of phycotic dream.

Dusk falls and night arises;
Nothing moves there is no crisis,
Only birds with great likeness,
My eyes snap open with dark brightness.

The call of flesh I can't ignore;
It was something I do not adore,
The hunt begins and dark forces abhor,
Its another night of blood colour.

The screams fill the air again;
Not mine not yours but anothers pain,
See death spattered red with rain,
Yes I definately am insane.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

=l rp... and nice job with four. really is quite an ending to a one day poem series. wat time is it where you live?

0:44

blinks

wow i love the sin one it made me want to cry thinking of kiki and vrix.

it is 7:47 pm here. that means night time =)

Thanks DB that means alot.

darkxbox: Which one is the hollywood one?

Originally posted by Jedireaper
This Hollow World

This world is full of billions;
Yet we each are so alone,
We 'pretend friends' and us 'fakers',
We are as hollow as a bone.

And alone we cry at night;
And alone we cry,
Because we are so hollow,
We have nothing left to hide.

In our massive cities;
Everything is a rush,
Never stop to say hello,
No one has time for us.

The way of modern life;
The Computer, our money, a car,
These are but material things that should have no meaning,
But it shows how hollow we as humans are.

As I write this poem;
I think of all my classmates,
Sucked in by money, violence, drugs,
Its them, as hollows, I really hate.

This hollow world.

-Kevin Traynor

oh, my bad, didnt look close at the title. <3

Oh! Thanks dude. Actually I made a couple of word and rhryme mistakes. but I'm glad you liked it.

really brings out the essence of todays society and shows what should be changed

yay two pages

Woo! More poetry soon. The Screams V anyone?

gotta go. gnight.

kk g'night.

wow i love the sin one it made me want to cry thinking of kiki and vrix.

woops copied to much

WTF Do you even know who they are?

well kiki is DB's nickname and a character in Vampire rp that died with Vrix in page 513, it was very tragic and touching

Originally posted by darkxbox
=l ...... <=D those are all very good and i especially liked the hollywood one...... kevin? Thats my name. Don't over use it in the RP forum though. Jedi or reaper or Jedireaper is fine.

Sig reader.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Thats my name. Don't over use it in the RP forum though. Jedi or reaper or Jedireaper is fine. wat about Jr?

:angry: I kill you!!

My Mother Drives Me Mad

God my mother drives me mad,
She really tests my patients,
She goes on and on its so sad,
She could out-talk a bloody nation.

I try to get some peace of mind,
To clear my head and think,
She never lets up at all in kind,
"Kevin, did you clean the sink?"

Its not as though she isn't serious,
Because serious I can take,
Its when she talks about stupid stuff it makes me feel delerious,
So much so I actually want die as is my fate.

But then again as I write this,
Quiet is in the air,
I hiss,
I can't bare.

My calm level is shot to hell,
I take several deep breaths,
"Shut the f**k up!" I yell,
I care less.

"You drove me to near insanity,
I wanted to break your neck,
So simple and easy yes," I laugh manically,
"To shut your voice from in my head." Of course I keep my thoughts in check.

"Mother, you drive me mad."

-Kevin Traynor

Lightsabers

Lightsabers are red,
Lightsabers are blue,
The Force is of beauty;
And so are you.

One Force, Two Sides

The darkness shrouds around the light,
But for two to exist to fight?
No thats wrong it aint right,
Like trying to cantrast day and night.

Light must in turn cause the Dark,
Like how the stars and empty space are stark,
In the Light and Dark both hark;
"User defined just leave your mark."

It is not about which side you choose,
Because of course then you would lose,
I'm not trying to break the rules,
Both Light and Dark Force is a rouse.

Since the Force is all the one,
It's only how you spend that fun,
Try and see beyond the run,
Where Force is bound to show you some.

Just choose your path the change later,
"Anger, fear, aggression, haterid..."

One Force, Two Sides.

-Kevin Traynor

Vanessa

Oh Vanessa your so fine;
I really wish that you were mine,
I watched High School Musical about seventeen times,
Only because the DVD wasn't mine.

Your accident your little slip;
Many actresses have done worse clips,
We your fans remain equipped,
To bring Walt Disney down real quick. (Not legally binding.)

This poem I write to you in good faith;
Don't let foul-ups take your grace,
Your style your stardom don't make hast,
Don't let your career turn to waste.

You sing like an angel would;
Complementing the guy who does Troy good,
You could say we wish you could,
Keep on singing and acting because you're understood.

"V"

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to Vanessa Hudgens (Aka: Gabriella Montez in HSM)

Dark Ethics of the Force

In my mind I sense their fear;
Oh my this mean the Dark Jedi are here,
If only I couldn't care,
While the Dark ones whisper in my ear.

I try to fight this pain I feel;
I find it ominous that I yeild,
Only time to fight that Dark guild,
Unfortunately they are all thrilled.

I ignite my saber it gleams blue;
Three light their's "Oh hell, I'm screwed."
Their blood red blades seeming so cruel,
"I'm not looking forward to this deul."

They encircle me as I wait,
Closely watching their mental gait,
The smirk and smile at me, inate,
"I hope this 'Deul' ain't 'of the Fates'."

One leaps forward. "This is it;"
I bring my blue blade up real quick,
Sparks fly as the blades constrict,
"Oh hell no!" I deliver a kick.

I push off him with my foot;
He gives me a sadistic look,
I spin through air to avoid the nook,
As Dark Jedi catch their mook.

They spin and face me, anger welling;
I raise my blade. "Its just beginning."
They rush me their powers swelling,
Red on blue they change the heading.

I batter blades aside to find another;
It was a good thing I didn't know my mother,
My flesh burns as they slash faster,
"Oh please stop. I train harder."

I knock one on his back;
Then use a Force blast to make them whack,
They hit the surrounding walls with quite a thwack,
"Ohh, thats gotta hurt their backs."

I hold my blade upon the first;
"Vengance does not become a Jedi." I give verse.
Then my blade pierces his ostophogus,
I laugh insanely as a slash at the fallen purges.

"Death, destruction... the Darkside are they."
I fall upon my wide eyed prey,
Blood and gore make a spray,
"Well they had their dark day."

Dark Ethics of the Force.

-Kevin Traynor

Not bad. Hollow wood is similar to several poems I wrote all mixed as one. And your "One force Two sides" has inspired me to write about the subject. I'll dedicate it to you...

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Lightsabers

Lightsabers are red,
Lightsabers are blue,
The Force is of beauty;
And so are you. hey you ripped off my splenda one

lol... thanks KoB

Yea well it was better than writing EDIT again.

splenda is red
splenda is blue
splenda tastes like s***
...what =P

Bstrd!

splenda is red
splenda is blue
splenda tastes like s***
what's wrong with you

David Fenta from " Life in the Hazmat Force " his new novel.

(and im a caring bastard)

Uncomplete Soul

Standing alone in the rain,
Feeling miserable, cold, seperate; "Alone."
I see you and a sunbeam breaks through the clouds,
Piercing the darkness at my feet, dry, light, happyness; "Alive."

In my mind I feel alienated,
An empty void that must be filled; "You complete me."
A ravine that I felt would always be impassable,
Now has something to connect its two sides; "A bridge."

A soul alone feeling like a shadow without a physical body,
To drift for enernity against harsh light; "A waste land."
You complete the uncompleted,
Making the harsh light seem soft; "Shade in the desert of my soul."

I thank-you from the bottom of my heart,
Deeper than the shallow pool I thought it was; "An ocean."
My love everlasting into the night,
Feelings entwind with truth; "I love you."

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to someone I love. Very much.

Wow, you're pretty awesome. I can't write poetry to save my life, but I can tell you've got a knack for it.

My Love, A Worlds Corner

In this corner of a world of worlds;
I open my eyes to you,
I let you into my soul.

So you can see inside me.
See into my heart.

I open my eyes and let you in;
Invite you to look around,
Allow you to see my inner mind.

What did you find there?
Was it worth it?

I open my eyes to show you;
Everything that I am,
Everything that I could be.

Are you happy?
Are you disappointed?

I close my eyes and block your view;
My little world feels suddenly cold,
The one who would light my soul no-longer there.

Are you gone? I cry tears.
My corner feels so empty.

I open my eyes and blink back the tears;
I see you and I smile as warmth fills my heart,
A light enters my mind and I open my thoughts to you.

You didn't go?
You chose to stay.

I touch the light and let it fill my heart;
Then I hug you, I kiss you,
I missed you.

You are my world.
I love you!

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to the one I love!

This Daisy

It was picked from a field,
A field of vibrant white and yellow,
A field of dark green and brown,
This daisy.

It was held in a childs palm,
The sound of laughter and joy,
The essence of youth and innocence,
This daisy.

It was joined by its brothers and sisters,
Under the soft golden sun,
The child making chains of flowers,
This daisy.

The sun sets,
The daisy scattered across the grass,
Bent and torn, the child is gone,
This daisy.

The flower slowly fades with time,
As in all things,
It dies an ungly death,
This daisy.

Forgotten in the mists of time.
It's memory gone.
This... daisy.

-Kevin Traynor

Inspired by my poem 'Fallen Flower' and a conversation I recently had with my love. I dedicate this to the changing world.

True Love

I love you so much I sit in the dark,
I watch the TV with you beside me,
I hug you and kiss you and then more,
I cant explain my feelings to you.

I know that you love me deeply,
I know you know I love you soo much,
I will always have these feelings for you,
I will never hurt you or want to upset you.

I should try and do something with you,
I am sure you are happy but we talk little,
I find your sheer presence a joy,
I express my feelings by hugging you.

I run my finger up your arm and your back,
I smell your skin its like heaven,
I kiss you and never want to leave your side,
I wonder if this is true love?

I feel empty and alone when we are apart,
I feel wholly loved when we are together,
I believe we are the only two people who exist on this planet,
I wish we could always be with each other.

I look into your eyes and I see your love for me,
I gently stroke your hair,
I love you and you love me,
It must be true love.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams V

The screams return to start our plight;
Making sure our minds aren't right,
Holding grudges against the light,
Our screams being heard again at night.

The undead rise against days mark;
The morning sun's light is stark,
A warning for day un-to dark,
Not even man can stop their lark.

The dead are live upon the day;
It is time for man to pay,
Blood is spilled and people lay,
Screams of frieght now all we say.

Run and hide till dark tides;
Feel their breath on your hide,
Be weary because the dead snide,
They'll eat you even when you cried.

The screams they are all you hear;
Open your eyes up to your fear,
The pain and suffering are always near,
Close your eyes to not be leered.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

Our First Month

Our first month together,
Time indeed has flown,
I'm sure our love will stand forever,
We will never be alone.

A whole month has gone,
It only feels like a minute ago,
Has it really been that long,
Where did all our time go.

We look into each others eyes,
Time stills for our cause,
We won't cry,
But time has paused.

Will we be standing here again soon,
Together in each others arms,
Treating, as if it is ours, the moon,
Reading out a mystical love psalm.

Our first month.

-Kevin Traynor

nice
i just came up with a poem myself

Post it here if you like...

Our Love Life

My love for you, I know, feels bare;
Because I know you won't be there,
To brighten my day up enough to care,
It is the most important thing we share.

Our love, it binds us from miles away;
It will join our hearts during night and day,
Our minds seek each other out to play,
While our bodies are, ahem, held at bay.

You are so beautiful , others are blind;
They can't see how true beauty is aligned,
I wish to show you 'YOU' through my mind,
I speak truth, listen, I havn't been lying.

You are perfect, the pinnicle of creation;
Yeah it sounds corny, but hey its recreation,
God took his time when he made our nation,
Dont worry about me this ain't a salvation.

My love is buried deep in my heart;
You have the key to its darkest part,
Unlock the secrets, and leave your mark,
Just the same as contrasting light and dark.

I love you and I hope I have your trust;
In my mind I will do what I must,
Like a pizza with that cheesey crust,
I will love you from dawn up un-till dusk.

This poem is corny but it expresses my love;
My love of you, my beautful dove.

Our love life.

-Kevin Traynor

Terrbly rhymy huh? I know it bad. Charlotte, this poem is an apology to you. I'm sorry. xx

Void

Empty darkness smothers light,
us unknowing of it's plight.
Empty space devoid of life,
completely without mortal strife.

Throw a coal into the fire,
so we may escape empire.
We shall run as soon we wake.
Do not bring what you can't take.

David Fenta-
(my pen name)

The Screams VI

Darkness spreads across the land;
Destroying this world we built by hand,
The undead are over taking man,
Even the military won't last to stand.

As time passes so we all die;
The night of dead creatures walking nigh,
I am one of them who strive,
To infect the world with our own to our kind.

Human beings fight for hope;
But they soon learn to hide like a pope,
Nothing will stop our unearthly grope,
The God's themselves can only sob.

I tear into flesh with my teeth;
The coppery taste of blood keeps on my feet,
Its the way they smell that makes us eat,
I rip flesh from the bone, it has a bodies heat.

The day no-longer comes;
Constant darkness numbs our fun,
We hove no-reason to scxream and run,
Because humans do that when we come.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

Very nice. Was your last poem inspired by a certain game in the UHRP forum shifty?

The Screams series is inspiried by Hazmat but each poem has its individual inspiriation. I-IV so far, are a mix. From Hazmat to Michale Jacksons 'Thriller' To Vampie RP Anyone? to Star Wars: The Great Hunt. My other poems all need re-editing and I cnt do it! Thanks though.

King of Blades

The glint of metal that reflects moonlight,
Two swords are swung in a rythmic fight,
They spark and clang with a users might,
It is only a King of Blades full right.

The fight goes on and one will lose,
Be it an arm or leg or head forbading booze,
A fighter of ages, to prepare his moves,
Only a King of Blades will counts his grooves.

Knives, swords and daggers too,
Dripping blood, pierced fleshly tool,
Best stand clear or you're a fool,
A King of Blades will never stop or stall.

Dodges and dives to stay alive,
The glinting weapons can end many a life,
The cold metal glints, creates a hive,
Of scum a villany, the King of Blade's never die.

King of Blades.

-Kevin Traynor

What you think?

This is going in my sig rock

Glad you liked it! :Happy Dance:

meh, call me a critic, but i think it could use a little more pacing and rythm. very good though.

Thanks I guess.

My True Love

My true love;
You are so beautiful.
I tell you all the time,
Yet you refuse to believe me.
Are you blind?

My true love;
Why deny your beauty?
Like an angel who doesn't want wings,
You will never reach heavenly heights.
Yet I hope you do.

My true love;
If only you could see through my eyes.
I would show how beautiful you really are,
How perfectly beautiful a being you are.
It's how I percieve you.

My true love;
In my eyes, you are perfect.
My heart beats faster whenever I see you,
Surely you can't deny how I feel.
My feelings are always growing stronger.

My true love;
I love you so much.
When we are together,
I am so happy and thrilled.
Yet we are being kept apart and my heart aches.

My love;
You know how I feel.
I think you are the best,
I will always be there for you.

I love you beyond any measurable scope,
Beyond the pure and simple,
Beyond intelligible understanding,
Beyond anything I can think of.

Put blankly:


You are;
My true blue love.

I love you.

-Kevin Traynor

no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Originally posted by Jedireaper
The Screams

When the screams fill the air;
Only time to run in fear,
No other option but to hear,
We will never march from here.

We wait till daybreak comes;
So we can have another run,
While dodging death like everyone,
And watching time pass with our fun.

Our blood curdles from the fight;
When our bodies quiver with pure fright,
We hope the daybreak lasts all night,
While dark creatures come out to bite.

But night falls once again;
The screams return and cause our strain,
They fill the air with death and pain,
Life and death are both the same.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

I love this one,zack is behind me and he is palying gutiar which would make a perfect song if you turned it into it
=]
Its like wow =]

Love the poetry..keep it uppp

Originally posted by Jedireaper
My Mother Drives Me Mad

God my mother drives me mad,
She really tests my patients,
She goes on and on its so sad,
She could out-talk a bloody nation.

I try to get some peace of mind,
To clear my head and think,
She never lets up at all in kind,
"Kevin, did you clean the sink?"

Its not as though she isn't serious,
Because serious I can take,
Its when she talks about stupid stuff it makes me feel delerious,
So much so I actually want die as is my fate.

But then again as I write this,
Quiet is in the air,
I hiss,
I can't bare.

My calm level is shot to hell,
I take several deep breaths,
"Shut the f**k up!" I yell,
I care less.

"You drove me to near insanity,
I wanted to break your neck,
So simple and easy yes," I laugh manically,
"To shut your voice from in my head." Of course I keep my thoughts in check.

"Mother, you drive me mad."

-Kevin Traynor


Amazing
love it
10/10

Thanks!

Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor

very nice

Originally posted by darkxbox
no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor

Kick ass=]

I Guess I Miss You

These feelings I have,
Are because of you,
I give you my heart,
Please dont be cruel.

You are like a drug,
You are my insomnia,
Sleepless nights when I think of you,
I just cant get enough.

I look up to you,
I feel you are superior to me in every way,
I want you to see me,
See me as I try and measure up.

I want to make you happy,
It is my goal to see your smile,
To hear you laugh,
I dont care about myself.

When we are together,
I feel we could do anything,
Like the world is at our feet,
Time, even, seems to last forever.

But out time together,
It never lasted long enough,
It felt like an eternity,
But passed too quickly.

My eyes miss seeing you,
My heart beats out for you,
My mind it knows of your absence,
I miss being with you I guess.

You make me happy,
I pray that I make you so,
I cant wait till we are together again,


I still love you.

-Kevin Traynor

For my love, again.... Charlotte! xxxxxxx

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Thanks!

Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor

word on the ps3, besides, u can get gta 4 on xbox 360 too

more games for the 360 too

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor

oh, and alsoit's people's own fault for using the same needle as someone else, or not using a condom.

Thanks!

Adrenalin Rush, then Suicide

In the heat of battle,
The blood runs high,
Time seems to slow.
Almost euphoric.

You feel your heart thump,
Faster and faster,
Time slows.
We just get quicker.

Your mind races,
It spins around,
Thoughts in total chaos.
The bloody battle.

People die in war-time,
They die in times of peace too,
Nothing can hinder that.
The fight.

To extend our lives?
No we shouldn't,
It would up-set natures balence.
The most evil thing ever created was man.

As time passes,
We too shall go,
I take my final breath.
A bullet then death.

-Kevin Traynor

your poems are good, however reading them is a little tricky.
They dont flow as well as perhaps they could. but maybe thats just me, I dunno nice work tho.

I am aware of that, I havn't written poetry in 2 months...

The Rain

I remember that night,
All those years ago.
The rain was dark,
I wanted to cry.

I looked at your face,
Seeing you last breath of life.
The rain was heavy,
I wanted to scream.

Your blood was on my hands,
But you smiled at me.
The rain was cold,
I wanted to shiver.

I had taken your life,
Yet you were not angry.
The rain was loud,
I wanted to speak.

All I meant was to save you,
But your selfish pride kept me from you.
I wanted you to survive,
The rain.

- Kevin Traynor

Ah, nice!

it has a better rythem, and its more of a spoken word theme, I like the way that each verse is short and curt.
There is really good imagery here and its just plain and simple

I really love the 3rd and 4th verses, its something about them that really sticks in my mind.

This is a piece to be proud of.

The Reborn Phantom

A ghost of the night,
This etherial spirit;
A wondering soul,
Lost to endless days.

A whisper of thought,
But a breeze in lifes passage;
A mere faceless haunter,
Not of mind but of soul.

A coming of age,
Did this person die before time;
Restless walking without retort,
The living shrine.

An end of one life,
A stoppage of time;
The clock ticks by,
And forgotten this soul fades.

A new way,
The path of adventure;
When sun's rise over fresh horizions,
The everlasting testiment of evolution.

The spark of life,
A newborn taking its first steps;
Learning new ways,
A baby growing in body and mind.

The reborn phantom.

- Kevin Traynor

Two poems in one! Enjoy...

beautiful

Ah, now you've got me! I cant quite grasp this one gonna need a little help, bit is cool I like mysteries

A spirit that is wondering finally passes on, then is reborn again as a child. Honestly it was gonna be two seperate poems but I had WB while writing it so I bodged them together quite well I think.

reincarnaton, yeah.

sorry I'm having a stupid day

Wake For Work

The bedside cabinet,
A clock tick tock,
Throughout the night till seven o'clock.

This dreamless sleep,
A restfull draught,
Till we wake up without a thought.

The lucky ones,
They sleep till ten,
To wake up to hear the bells of Big Ben.

We dress formal,
Smart suits a frocks,
And head to work till six o'clock.

Our lives a repedative pass,
Each day we drone away,
Working hard so we can get our pay.

The day is done,
We head home,
Back to bed again alone.

The dreamless sleep,
A tick tock clock,
It ticks by till we are wrought.

Wake for work.

- Kevin Traynor

The Screams Redux

The Screams return after dark;
Once more our voices deathly hark,
The blood of many have tried their mark,
To escape this unholy evil lark.

Try we all remaining dream;
Of freedom from this bloody seam,
A crack of darkness in a stream,
Where evil creatures eyes they gleam.

Leaping out of shadows darkless;
Running dead leap with cold bloodness,
Only sounds of screaming blissness,
We all quiver at our bleakest.

The light of day comes at long last;
To show the carnage of the past,
To tear our hearts from our cast's,
We dread the return of the darks.

The moon casts silver light of dread;
Us few are running from the dead,
We had tried to fight but lost our heads,
Blood is soaked through screams of red.

The screams.

- Kevin Traynor

Sorry if these are bad, it has been a long while since I have written poetry, or The Screams series, which by popular demand will be continued. Getting worse as all sequels do. Need I mention the recent Indiana Jones disaster? Bah!

I really like Wake for Work, just points out what machines we really are. long gone are the days when we worked to live!

now we live to work and finacially its too true.

second one needs work honey.

Wake For Work, final version

The bedside cabinet;
A clock - tick tock,
Throughout the night till seven o'clock.

This dreamless sleep;
A restfull draught,
Till we wake up with-out a thought.

The lucky ones;
They sleep till ten,
Waking up to the News at ten.

We dress formal;
Smart suits and frocks,
To be in work by nine o'clock.

The day passes;
We work away,
To get our pay at the end of days.

The day is done;
We head home,
Back to bed again alone.

The dreamless sleep,
A tick tock clock,
It ticks by till we are wrought.

Wake for work.

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to Lara... and I just didn't mention it before.

A Sun Day

Come sun-shine;
Brighten up my day,
Make me feel happy and gay.

Your rays cast hope;
Banishing dark,
To a place far beyond our hark.

Circle the globe;
Above all damnation,
Bringing heaven in your beams.

A hazy shine - upon our world;
Lighting up the darkest delve,
And never leaving for too long.

A sun day.

-Kevin T

The End

The life we lead,
The lies we keep,
The mistakes we make,
The err of our ways.

Till we ask;
Why?

-Me

Amazing i must say,i just read a couple i favor The Screams Redux
the most.

Good work.

I knew you would... welcome back to KMC Gloomy, sorry to hear about you and... well, Jacob... you guys still friends?

How how did you know ?
And thank you,i just finshed things up in my life i got new job and everything.And no i do not talk to him at all i refuse to be played with his pointless games,i don't like the guy hes become.Just to leave it like that im in a new relshonship.

And i lovem your work though,i check up on it time to time.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Wake For Work, final version

The bedside cabinet;
A clock - tick tock,
Throughout the night till seven o'clock.

This dreamless sleep;
A restfull draught,
Till we wake up with-out a thought.

The lucky ones;
They sleep till ten,
Waking up to the News at ten.

We dress formal;
Smart suits and frocks,
To be in work by nine o'clock.

The day passes;
We work away,
To get our pay at the end of days.

The day is done;
We head home,
Back to bed again alone.

The dreamless sleep,
A tick tock clock,
It ticks by till we are wrought.

Wake for work.

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to Lara... and I just didn't mention it before.

A Sun Day

Come sun-shine;
Brighten up my day,
Make me feel happy and gay.

Your rays cast hope;
Banishing dark,
To a place far beyond our hark.

Circle the globe;
Above all damnation,
Bringing heaven in your beams.

A hazy shine - upon our world;
Lighting up the darkest delve,
And never leaving for too long.

A sun day.

-Kevin T

wow, thank you but can I ask, what made you dedicate that to me?

Because I... I don't know actually...

thats interesting.

The Screams, Halloween Special

The screams ring in another night;
Filling the air with death and fright,
Giving chase against the light,
Not even time to turn and fight.

Dragged down from withing our midst;
A shrouded early morning mist,
Covers us in its chilling fist,
Our friends are gone from our numbing lists.

As sun brings light upon the day;
Giving way to mourn the passed away,
Ironic that they come and play,
After dark the dead not lay.

At sun's fall the Earth is stark;
The screams and blood has stained our heart,
With time we will lose this mark,
As soon we all die within the dark.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

!!!--HAPPY HALLOWEEN--!!!

Hmmm

Thats great! I really like it. and you've almost got the true meaning of all hallows eve in there

I love it

*bows* thank-you...

Stalkers

At every street corner,
In every major city,
They lay in wait,
Their beady eyes brooding under dark hoods.

An evil mind; twisted and insane,
Their motives unclear,
They watch, they see, they know,
Somehow they always know.

They see a young girl,
Follow her,
She panic's, runs,
Another lays in wait.

On the internet they are there,
Waiting,
Knowing,
Stalking. The physcological hoodlum.

They go through your trash,
They plan,
Their minds distraugt,
Looking for information.

"This world we live in, cruel. Unkind."
"The people we live with, vindictive. Evil."
"These cities, unforgiving. Wastlands."
"Death may be one way out. Don't be a fool!"

Death is an excuse for not owing up,
For the probelms we have caused,
Especially with this purgatory world,
The halfway point between heaven and hell.

The Stalkers they will always be there,
Nothing I can do,
Just sit and wait,
Despair, when they are there.

Stalker's.

-Kevin Traynor

I dunno if this is a good poem, but maybe it carries some meaning. Stay safe Camille, be safe.

This was written for Camille a while ago and was posted in her thread, I'm transfering it now...

Wow! This was great!

Drawn in Gray, Response to the poem Drawing

This stencilled landscape I look upon,
Rolling planes of grassy gray fields, shaded trees, and earth.

Crosshatched rocks darkened by charcoal,
All through a plain window, lined in gray.

Birds of blackened feathers,
Fill a sky of white and gray.

This lead laid landscape,
A vibrant drawn vale.

Where clouds of light meet the dark of day,
Lines from a pencil cratch detail in shade.

A splash of white glaring the sun,
Half dipped below a hill of subtle shadow.

-Kevin Traynor

Enjoy!

Again this is a transfer from another thread... PoB's one.

Originally posted by King of Blades
Tis not the force poem that I promised, but I hope this will do for you:

Frozen Flower

I walked across a gentle shore
of glistening waters
And I saw across it's frozen banks
a rose.

Twas red as crimson and darker still
this flower by which it stood
alone upon this barren iceland
of cold.

I looked far off towards this gentle plant
so lonely and yet
I found not the strength to take
a closer look.

Stood still I to look from where I was
to never venture from this frozen shore
at a flower to which I'll never know
only this: that it was a crimson rose.

Frozen Flower, A Redux

A single flower grows upon a mountain side,
Its prickly stem the last green on white,
Its silver leaves and tinted black buds,
A warning for those who tred a treacherous path.

But though the plant is frozen, it lives on
With-out complaint for the barren life it leads.
With blue skys threaten gray clouds of snow
Fall down on rocky livery, it laughs.

Frosted flakes speckled green on silver buds
Of the mountain rose whose red flower
Is black from snow. Droplets of ice.

Frozen flower. (A short response)

-Kevin Traynor

Fo Kelsey... and all those I love..

feed.

Thanks, and feed? I really should update

Oh, shit. I meant 'famine'.

??

In that I hope I starve to death before I ever have to read any of your crap poetry ever again. Ever.

That means it's really good.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Frozen Flower, A Redux

A single flower grows upon a mountain side,
Its prickly stem the last green on white,
Its silver leaves and tinted black buds,
A warning for those who tred a treacherous path.

But though the plant is frozen, it lives on
With-out complaint for the barren life it leads.
With blue skys threaten gray clouds of snow
Fall down on rocky livery, it laughs.

Frosted flakes speckled green on silver buds
Of the mountain rose whose red flower
Is black from snow. Droplets of ice.

Frozen flower. (A short response)

-Kevin Traynor

A plot of green, besieged by grim gray.
Crowned with rainbow ecstasy; color euphoria.
Spiraling soldiers keep death at bay.
Center stage-there kneeling-one epic flower.
Curled and bowing, in emerald shields.
Slow consumption of death; biting evil.
The mignificat wither with their fading color.
The spiraling soldiers once adamant with vibrancy.
Zealots now shriveling in their own temporal passion.
Now at once the final guard has fallen.
The darkness withdraws; one final wave of defeat.
Slowly--now forcefully, quickly, overwhelming brilliancy
Colors of all realms pierce this darkening monster.
This humble squire of jade has become a gallant knight of gold.
All the colors now share in his yellow vivacity.
The grey is now but the embroider of this empire.
Where now the knight; king to this humble kingdom,
Rests his heavy head. Now the people rule alone.
When the darkness rises up once more to over take this place;
He will rise again to set it down.

Thank-you very much KoB. That was a lovely poetic trek through the Kingdom of the Flower.

The first poem I have ever written in six months, sloppy it is. Yet I enjoyed writing it.

Enjoy!


Time's Passage
The rush day onto end; When'st
The clang of blades in a moon-lit valley
Echoes this silvery flame that spread across their eyes;
Upon which the glint of malice
Found only in ones smile, does not falter
Times passage.

It watches without seeing, the world
Below nowt know its place upon the sloping
Tangent of the clock; a clock on which the growth
Of life, and death continues uninterred to its
Cycle of livery

Passing. Through such eyes as those brave
And haughty armies of men; onto which only
The hand of a God, so noble and just may cause blossum
In such our hearts and minds- flowers of
The valley- yet, time doesn't pay heed. It
Knows not of the plight to find happiness in life

It only knows the way forward.
And following upon this passage; a stray dog
Are we led.

-Kevin Traynor

WOW!

Originally posted by Jedireaper
WOW!

I'm hoping you like it. Inspired by your poem, Time's Passage. Write some more, and maybe I shall write some too.

I will see... thank-you!

I must say you are very gifted with you work.I love it ,the meanings of it and how you word it is out standing.("

It has been a very very long time (over a year infact) and for that I apologise. So as a welcome return for me, and along with the one who has captured my heart; I dedicate this poem. Not the best poem in the world, certainly not my best, but here I go; back into the world of prose.

I Love You

My emotions swirl up from within me;
Coalescing outward towards you,
Gently touching you and enveloping you.
These feelings I have for you;
Reaching out and binding you to me,
Letting you shine into the darkest parts of my heart.
I love you.

I take you by the hand;
Not a care for the distance between us,
Only that you are there, that you exist.
I let my feelings carry you;
Letting you light up my soul,
Bringing joy to my heart.
I love you.

We travel through my soul together;
You, the light guiding our way,
Showing you the swirling mists of my love.
My hand gently caresses your cheek;
"Shall we go, my Love?" I ask,
I kiss you longingly, our lips in contact.
"I love you."

-Kevin Traynor

For you Helen, I will love you forever and always. xx

Beautiful

Thank you very much ~Bun Bun~, nice to receive a comment or two. This poem actually, to be honest, came to my while I was working on another poem. It literally just popped into my head.

Another one, about a dream I had about bread, a giant chicken called Florence, a fence that I was painting red, and a garden shed with a house inside it covered in rose petals.... The last line I added for the heck of it.

Strange Dream
My face spins around me in red;
In this house that is built on bread,
Within a rose petal'd garden shed,
Atop a giant chicken with a tiny head.

Yes this dream makes no sense;
Yes I know I am red painting a fence,
And atop a giant chicken called Florence!
And no! My name is not Lawrence!

-Kevin Traynor (and what an odd dream that was)

that was cool! I'm all into the surreal

It's been a while... Hey everyone.

Originally posted by King of Blades
Every which way, this thread appears.
New members nostalgic for old members.
Memories heard, not seen.
Stories told, not lived.
Echoes of longing for
Lead made gold
Water turned wine
Men made gods.
I don't seem to be remembered,
Funny the way it is.

I really wish they had a KMC friendly muttley-laughing.gif
KMC Legends

Years tick by; and Legends
Both young and old, have
Passed through our commune.
Heralded by the memories;
Stories and rumours.
One quote or another.
In time they have gone.
Forgotten. Locked away in
Archives of the past.
And Yet;
There is hope.
New Legends are born;
Joining the ranks of those few
Privileged. Because
In our own rights;
We all, are
Legends.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

By the time I finished this peom, I think it had changed almost completely. A rather ugly reentry for me.

DELETE

Originally posted by Jedireaper
DELETE

Originally posted by Jedireaper
It's been a while... Hey everyone.


KMC Legends

Years tick by; and Legends
Both young and old, have
Passed through our commune.
Heralded by the memories;
Stories and rumours.
One quote or another.
In time they have gone.
Forgotten. Locked away in
Archives of the past.
And Yet;
There is hope.
New Legends are born;
Joining the ranks of those few
Privileged. Because
In our own rights;
We all, are
Legends.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

By the time I finished this peom, I think it had changed almost completely. A rather ugly reentry for me.


I am still here just not very often. its nice. dont be so hard on yourself kev.

I have no inspiration any more... I've lost it.

Trapped

I honestly feel like I am in a box;
Trapped,
Surrounded,
Claustrophobic and closed in.

I find it hard to breathe;
Air is stuffy,
Humid,
And uncomfortably warm.

Like being under the ocean;
The need to break the surface,
The need for air to breathe,
The need to live.

And yet I am trapped within this box;
Like the Doctor;
A Timelord;
A Mad man in a box.

I can't think straight;
My mind reacting illogically,
Freaking out at this cramped cell,
Screaming to be released.

"I'm trapped."

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

Okay so my last poem was an odd one, but hey, it's a start! Anyway...

Indecisive

Falling.
Falling.
Or am I?
Neither moving,
Nor staying put.
Not quite going anywhere,
And not quite staying still either.
Like having a choice of two paths;
And not being able to settle upon a one.
I just dawdle about neither coming or going.

I am indecisive.

-Kevin Traynor (Jr)

thats a good one kev. I likey!

Thank you very much, Lara. I've forgotten your name lol PM me it... and I am trying to update more often. I usually write any poems on the day I write and upload them. All except for The Rain which was completed about 6 months after I wrote some of it.

A Trip to the Beach

I like to make believe I'm famous and I'm writing to another famous poet, and the world is jizzing itself at our dialogue.

Ode to you...

Ode to you, dear little one;
May you smile smiles of joy.
May your heart be filled with
Love, and warmth.
May your eyes see only
Caring, love and happiness.

Ode to you, little twinkle;
Held high up in the sky.
May you feel so free and safe.
That our love holds you up
To see the heavens above.
Tell us what you see? Tell me.

Ode to you, bright sparkle
In the night. Shine your love
Upon us. Show us how happy
You are. Tell me you are
Not afraid. Because our
Love will keep you safe.

Ode to you, my child;
The sparkle in your Daddy's
gaze. The emerald in your
Mummy's heart. May you
Be granted great strength
From our deep love for you.

Ode to you, our baby Jayna;
"Bringer of victory". May you
Be granted success in what ever
You choose. May life be merry,
And rich, and fulfilling. A life filled with
Hope, tenderness, and good memories.

May love, and hope guide your path
Through life. May you be happy,
And joyful. Because we; your Mummy
And I, love you very very much.
And I... we, want you to know and
Share that love forever.

Our little sparkle.

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to Jayna Marie, our beautiful baby girl! Her Daddy's little sparkle.

Can I Say It

Can I tell you,
Tell you how I feel?

Can I whisper my words,
Whisper them sweetly in your ear?

Can I write it,
Write it on a note for your eyes to read?

Can I touch you,
Stroke the words lovingly against your skin?

Can I kiss you,
Passionately send you my message?

Can I say it?

Can I tell you,
I love you.

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to someone I miss a lot... A woman who I am not even sure I am allowed to tell her I love her, any more...

My first poetic (some might say pathetic) entry of 2012.

This one, another entry hot on the heels of the first... explaining how I feel right now... enjoy.

It Hurts

Stabbed.

Hurt, betrayed
A dagger with a serrated edge
Plunges through my heart.

Distraught, panic
I can feel the cold metal
The jagged edges tearing my flesh.

Scared, alone
My heart is torn from my chest, skewered
Held high as it beats itself to death.

Fear, agony
I watch the blood drip to the floor
Small blotches of life drying to dust.

Hatred, despair
I fall to me knees unable to understand
My heat suffering it's last beat.

Anger, rage
I am betrayed in the light of day
My heart slides from the blade and falls to the ground.

I scream in pain, pure rage and anger at the loss.

It hurts.

- Kevin Traynor

What ever you do... don't ask.

The Screams series is back by popular demand... after a three year and three month gap, though why I have no idea... just bored I guess. :P

The Screams VII

Demonic creatures arise from sleep,
Eye's glowing red with hunger seek;
Silent whispers of mankind's defeat,
Few weary survivors on their feet.

The moon casts shadows of silver zeal;
Survivors running before they keel,
Fatigued and hungry life unreal,
Shrieking horrors right on their heels.

Leapers pounce for panicked prey;
Dog-like creatures howling, gleefully gay,
Jubilant at their catch of the day,
Survivors run, no time to pray.

The survivors cornered, no place to run;
Turning to fight - "This won't be fun..."
Drawing swords, bats, sticks, and guns,
The musical sound of death's begun.

The sun brings warmth to the battle scene;
One lone determined and bloodied being,
Drops his blood stained bat, not seeing,
Eye's squinted through golden gleaming.

The man, sighs with a heavy heart;
Once friends and family now dead, and stark,
Nothing but searching left to start,
For more survivors of the dark.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

Okay, so this started out as something completely different, and is the first in the The Screams series to directly mention another creature I created for the Hazmat RP (Leapers), besides the Screams which never actually appeared in the series properly in the end, but once it had a heading I knew it would be the next entry into my boring poem series. Yes I know... there is such a thing as beating something to death, but I still enjoyed writing it and doing my best to keep lines fresh. I hope you enjoyed it, please comment.

nice works. might have to look for the other 'The Screams' writings.

With All My Broken Heart

My life is in pieces at the moment.
Everything feels unreal, like a dream.
I wish it was. I am lost, and alone.
I am anguished by this pain I feel.
The wound on my heart tearing my
Soul. Y'know love is a funny
thing, it tricks you into falling
Into it's sandtrap, and it is
So hard to scramble out again.
The one I love has slipped
From me. I have lost her.
I was always going to lose her.
I never deserved someone
Like her. She is amazing in
Every way. A day does not go by
That I don't miss her. A day does
Not go by that I don't wish
Things could have been different.
My heart is screaming in pain.
The loss of someone who I
Held so dear, it's like losing a
Life. It's like watching someone
Die. Even writing this now,
There are tears in my eyes.
I don't blame her, I never truly did,
I made my mistake. It is my fault.
And now I have to deal with
The consequences. I...
I love you, always have and
Always will, till the day I die,
The day I am burned to ashes.
You, and my daughter will be
In my heart, knowing you were
Better off without me. I really miss
Your smile, your eyes, your
Companionship. But you shall
Be smiling for another man.
I understand.

But I shall always love you,
With all my broken heart.

-Kevin Traynor

More letter than poem, dedicated to... Well... The one I love, with all my heart. The one I lost. The one I think of every day. A farewell, perhaps... I just wish it weren't so.

Damn...I like it, can relate to it. But yea, losing someone you love and recovering from a broken heart are some of the hardest things in life. Try to stay strong bro.

If I gave you a single rose petal;
What you consider it to be?
Would it be a piece of my heart?
Would it be part of perhaps further
Rose petals that I would give you
Throughout the day?

Would it be a token of my love?
Would this petal represent
I dunno, love - happiness?
Does it matter?

You are looking at a trail of
A dozen rose petals. Would
You follow where they lead?
Would you pick them up as
You go? Would you find me
At the end?

I give you a rose to
Celebrate this day. Enjoy
A day you have not enjoyed before.
Why? Because I love you.

-Kevin

This poem has no title... quite unusual for me.

Burns breaketh world unto
black husk lifeless soul bleeding
dry dust iron rust drops dew
scorched earth left behind decay
death smell, falling hell flames
burn searing sand pain lost lonely
left behind sane mind blowing
catasthrophic slain single ticket
to end holy scattered remains.

Opinions appreciated...

Endless Struggle

Death and destruction lay waste
To my heart, tearing soul asunder and
Searing the pain and loneliness into my
Burning forever.

Tormented by love and lost,
What might be, what could have been.
Potential stolen before given the chance
to grow, to bloom. Left lying a blood
dripping corpse. Frozen by the cold of night.

Darkness nothing but a cage, a house a
Prision cell. Snow stained by my seeping wounds
from the blades of the many. Flesh torn. Dark eyes
upon me. Left on stained snow ground. Even now it
Hurts, the pain seethes like a storm.

But with the last ounce of strength I drag myself from
That hell. Stumbling aimlessly through the endless
Night, until I find what ever it is my journey searches for I
Continue on this endless struggle.

-Kevin Traynor

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Opinions appreciated...

Endless Struggle

Death and destruction lay waste
To my heart, tearing soul asunder and
Searing the pain and loneliness into my
Burning forever.

Tormented by love and lost,
What might be, what could have been.
Potential stolen before given the chance
to grow, to bloom. Left lying a blood
dripping corpse. Frozen by the cold of night.

Darkness nothing but a cage, a house a
Prision cell. Snow stained by my seeping wounds
from the blades of the many. Flesh torn. Dark eyes
upon me. Left on stained snow ground. Even now it
Hurts, the pain seethes like a storm.

But with the last ounce of strength I drag myself from
That hell. Stumbling aimlessly through the endless
Night, until I find what ever it is my journey searches for I
Continue on this endless struggle.

-Kevin Traynor

I like most how your sentences continue the subsequent line...as if they're trudging on as well.

Your work seems more mature. Not in the content, but your voice. It marks improvement. But continue on this endless struggle...

Coincidentally I too recently finished an "endless struggle" poem. I'll post it, post haste

The Clock Ticks

My heart feels the sadness of your absense, my
Mind understands the emotion but cannot phatom its depth.

A Longing to be near you again; To hold you
Close, and whisper in your ear of my love for you. Of
The feeling that transcends my existance.

The clock ticks, beating a place- an, echo through time

The time between us, as short as it is, and yet
none the less an eternity. A far horizon.

The clock strikes times passage slowly, and I watch;
Counting the seconds till we are one again,
Till our heats can reach each other.

The clock ticks, as the current of time flows passed us.

Till my gaze meets yours, and we get the flourish of
Excitement that only those in love can feel.

I say all this to you; I write this poem in real time,
To tell you that until my eyes fall upon yours once more
I will be watching the clock tick time by.

The clock ticks, it's last tick the moment my heart beats.

That last moment, when my eye's see yours upon the golden
Shore of time, and I finally feel alive, as the seas crashing into rocks.

The clock ticks.

-Kevin Traynor

You'll never guess what? I am in love again And I am counting the seconds till I see her again.

Opinions appreciated. Please.

And thanks KOB, nice to see you return, and thank you for the comments, I will endavour to try and improve more over time, but I like to wing it mostly.

Sometimes, But Always

Sometimes I sit down
To write you a poem.
As a token,
To try to express how I feel.

But, sometimes I never finish.
I lose focus, and
Doubt is cast.
I can't decide how I feel.

But then, sometimes I remember
How I feel about you, clear
As a cold blue winters sky.
Clear as the space between the stars.

I whisper it in your ear,
Sometimes;
I love you.

Sometimes, but always.

-Kevin Traynor

Message Ping

Everytime I arise from night,
I reach for that smartphone device.
The one connected to lifes stage,
In many ways the biggest vice.

The screen, a brightness in the dark,
Harsh against my gaze.
Mesmerized by the twinkled pixel,
Brighter than the sunny ray's.

And yet I have but one, or few
Reasons to look on here.
To look for that one message,
From the one that I hold dear.

And in this time of bated breath,
In waiting of that fated ping.
My heart will leap at every sound
That this device doth ding.

Thus, and tis the reason why
I come here for that one
Message from the one I love,
And yet I still have none.

Message ping!

- Kevin Traynor

Bridge / Between Us

From afar, my friend
Have we seen each other.
A distant land. Divided by an
Ocean.

For a while, my friend
Have we known each other.
But never had we met. Divided by our
Lives.

In the past, my friend
Have we been there for each other.
Like good people. Brothers and sisters
Apart.

And time passed, my friend
Have we gotten closer to each other.
My feelings for you. Poignant, sharper in
Focus.

And we are free, my friend
Have us both been here, meeting us.
And soon perhaps. Shall we be closer than
Friends.

Now, at last, my love
Have we both sat here, blue eyes locked.
My hand gently on your face. My heart offered to
You.

Will you, dear friend
Having reached this point.
Take my hand. And cross that bridge
Between us.

-Kevin Traynor

Just a poem for thought.

O.o scared to ask who inspired that poem.

Not DB, if that helps.

Well that makes it a better poem then.

Well sure it does how are you my old pal?

I've been better. Yourself?

Your Hands In Mine

The early days, time seems
Oblivious. It feels like an age
Even though we have known
One another only a few months.

When I'm around you. I see you.
I fall for you. So far
Without major injury (joke).
Those brief moments, an eternity.

We are apart oft. I miss
Your voice. I miss your presence
On my days. I long to make you happy!
To see laughter on your face.

I can't wait till I see your eyes,
Your face. Your everything! You.
Touching the stars,
Your hands in mine.

-Kevin Traynor

Sorry it's not better. it's a mess.... why do I always write these kinds of peoms?