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Alright, I am rather new at this, this is actually my first, I came and got tips from King of Blades first and he even checked it over for me being it was my first one, thanks again. I am rather proud of my first one, it is about my love:

Her voice is a peaceful song of beauty
Affecting all within its vast range

It doth fills the air surrounding
like the Robin so angelic in the early morn'
With a sound that is naught but astounding
her voice is angelic even in scorn

The verbal lashing is deserved
But I cannot keep the smile from forming
For her voice is forever being preserved
Her anger slowly fading
'I love you' she says
'I know' comes the response

I gaze her in her pearl-like eyes
Asking for no forgiveness
But silently receive it out of habit
'I love you' I say
'I know' comes her response'

why

Why what?

Originally posted by General G
Why what? I think he doesn't like it.

No, I would guess not. It was my attempt, I am proud of it for my first one.