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AC/DC'S_LVR
the end of that part seems too mooshy-gooshy to me....mhmm idk
what do yns guys think?
Jack Daniels
Im 2 drunk to tell ya but I will be back! I love magic! Ill be back in between the world of sober and not so sober..hehe then I will read and give thumbs up or down
AC/DC'S_LVR
feel free to PM me about any of my stories
BruceSkywalker
you're a great writer keep up the good work
~Wålshy~
first ones great!
havent read the rest yet
Lord Knightfa11
pretty damn good
AC/DC'S_LVR
and thats just the beginning awesome
Rogue Jedi
Hmmm.....not bad.
Lord Knightfa11
:/ I said kratos+auron=me. Unsatisfied as my role of being stuck under wires.
Kosta
Great work AC/DC's LVR
. Keep it up.
Scythe
Haha, I look like my pet goat! Pretty cool, dudette.
Kosta
Remind me never to mess with Kay.
Getting better so far.
BruceSkywalker
Kay, keep up the good work
Lord Knightfa11
NEVER MESS WITH ME WHEN CUPCAKES ARE ON THE LINE!!! clap
AC/DC'S_LVR
i know that the reunion part is kinda cheesey but its like 2 am and im kinda tired
BruceSkywalker
its very good Kay
BruceSkywalker
Originally posted by AC/DC'S_LVR
thanks
ur welcome
BruceSkywalker
Excellent chapter Kay..
Have you ever thought of writing for any of the major film studios?
AC/DC'S_LVR
not really
but i do try to write as if its gonna be turned into a movie you know?
i use a lot of visual and details
AC/DC'S_LVR
well, i just had a little tiff with Slay about music and it got me kinda worked up so i came up with this poem: (*note: im not too good at poetry so....yeah)
Feel It:
music
i can feel it
it enters my body
it scrambles my neurons
rips me to pieces
i cant breath
i cant think
it's like sex~maybe better
music
it's enlightening
it's everything
rock 'n roll
hip-hop
metal
classical
the music is me
and i am the music
BruceSkywalker
Originally posted by AC/DC'S_LVR
not really
but i do try to write as if its gonna be turned into a movie you know?
i use a lot of visual and details
Perhaps someone will see your work
Originally posted by AC/DC'S_LVR
well, i just had a little tiff with Slay about music and it got me kinda worked up so i came up with this poem: (*note: im not too good at poetry so....yeah)
Feel It:
music
i can feel it
it enters my body
it scrambles my neurons
rips me to pieces
i cant breath
i cant think
it's like sex~maybe better
music
it's enlightening
it's everything
rock 'n roll
hip-hop
metal
classical
the music is me
and i am the music
thats a nice poem though
BruceSkywalker
Kay I like this chapter a lot
AC/DC'S_LVR
guess no ones reading lately huh?hmm
Wei Phoenix
I'm sorry but I can not accept the fact that Harley came up with a plan to get him out and Joker himself couldn't figure out one. He even had more questions on how to do so? I just can't see that happening. Would've been better if he just did it and once they got away she revealed that she didn't mind/wanted him to be free and whatnot.
AC/DC'S_LVR
hmm
i see what you mean
but really it was they both worked out the plan prior to the beginning of the chapter and she meant that he needed her cause shes the only one he could really take hostage without being being shot plus she was willing to help
its a little fuzzy, im gonna have to revise it then mhmm
AC/DC'S_LVR
okay i revised the first part of the Joker side-project thingy
i didnt feel like redoing the second part cause really its not that bad, but the first was a little confuzzling
anyway, hope this is a little better
BruceSkywalker
keep up the great work Kay
AC/DC'S_LVR
no comments then? mhmmsrug
BruceSkywalker
great story Kay
BruceSkywalker
i like it Kay, keep it going
Quincy
needs More intercourse
Slay
Wait, I actually pissed you off so much that you had to write a story about you brutally killing me?
Bit sad, innit?
The Grey Fox
Slay's too beautiful to die
AC/DC'S_LVR
i needed a traitor in the midst
i just so happened to choose the one person on my ignore list
i wasnt mad or anything when i wrote it
it was simply a necessity
EDIT: typo fixed
That ACDC Chick
okay doods and doodettes. ive been writting a story i simply call Vampires about two rival underground organizations
im on like chapter 16spark? lately so im stuck]
but its readable at here
and im taking a creative writing class at my library where my teacher is a pretty cool dood just out of college
laters!
OddDellaRobbia
ACDC chick oh thank god I found you my friend mikey dude told you could help me with my code lyoko story because I barely get time to write please help me
That ACDC Chick
Originally posted by OddDellaRobbia
ACDC chick oh thank god I found you my friend mikey dude told you could help me with my code lyoko story because I barely get time to write please help me
um... okay what seems to be the problem?
OddDellaRobbia
Well i have a ton of ideas but that's for other stuff I spend to much time on this because I have to do other stuff and the only times I do write on this is at night and some other times during the day.
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