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i enjoy reading your story.

It better be continued

I think you should perform some grammar and spelling checks before your next upload, is this an original piece or something of a work of Fan Fiction, it seems to have much promise. But I do have some advice to give, and I would be quite happy to proof read the next upload. Just pop me an e-mail.

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Originally posted by Der_SpeeDer

There is also one problem, however. I could not find the word for a part of the armor, which protects the wrist and forearm (no such word in dictionary), so... I made up one... . Will anybody help me here?


the word that youre thinking of is i believe "vambrace"?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vambrace
http://historyshop.piratemerch.com/images/steel_vambrace_300348.jpg

im still reading everything youve posted here btw and i enjoy it dont be dismayed!

are you a professional writer or is this just a hobby? cause, its very good!