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I close my eyes,slowly slipping away
Can you feel me in the Force?
A sinking surrender,

Like a exhausted swimmer,
Drowning in a rising tide.
Slipping into Vaapad.

My eyes open once more,then close again
Only to give my enemy a slight nod,
barely a show of respect.

I open them again,
They smoked with darkness.
Exhaling deeply
Relaxing,drawing another deep breath
Only to repeat, I shed the burdens of a Jedi,

To reach a deeper more receptive state of mind,
transforming myself into a conduit, accepting his fury,
accepting his hatred,

Transforming into a superconducting loop,
Connecting his fury,his hatred,along my inner darkness and my tranquil fury.
Which passes in and out through me,

In which I channel back towards my enemy.
I completely give myself to Vaapad,

My enemy,stands light saber, ignited,
Feigning a single - handed low guard,with the blade
angled downward at his side.

He draws a rapid "X" in the air with his blade,
I mirror his reply whipping my blade in curving slashes,
creating a constant near- invisible weave of lethal energy

Which flowed one into next with liquid precision.
This is the ready stance of Vaapad.
He advanced.

His crimson blade whirred,mine whirred faster.
The dance have begun,
Blood thirsty red vs Dark as night black.

How many blades do you see?
Our blades met with a horrified clash!
It was if the blackness of my blade was quickly trying to extinguish
the bright blood red color of his lightsaber.

Again,our blades lock,neither giving way,
Neither taking their eyes off the other.
His feigned attempt of Makashi was only an illusion

To quickly switch to Djem So 's Falling Avalanche,
followed by a fluid riposte.
Mimicing the elegant foot work of Makashi,

I side stepped,left then right,evading both attacks.
And quickly followed through with several of Assured strikes
Which successfully ended with a lightsaber butt to his head
followed by a mark of contact,Shiim.

Scarring his left arm and right leg.
To be continued. At a later date.

shit poem tbh

Originally posted by Trocity
shit poem tbh

Really? He probably spent some time on it.

Which makes it all the better when you say
Originally posted by Trocity
*neph-tier shit poem tbh

Emperordmb tier vs. Neph tier

mmm

Honestly, if it weren't for the random mention of Jedi and lightsabers, I'd think this was a poem written about and dedicated to all the drugs you needed to write it.

LMFAO @ both posts above me.

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Originally posted by Trocity
shit poem tbh

idk, if you are kidding, but if you aren't what's wrong with you?

He had to read a shit poem, for one.

Originally posted by Darth Demenos
idk, if you are kidding, but if you aren't what's wrong with you? People can be mean on KMC, Demenos.

Your criticism is noted.
I don't do drugs.
Nor do I criticise your respect threads.

If you didn't like it just say that,because I didn't write it for you.
Too many Jedi? There were only two.
Too many lightsabers? There were only two.

Unless you count the after images of Vaapad 's ready stance.
If I wrote about Revan, Darth Vader,or Luke Skywalker's style,
There would be no insults or no complaints.

Thank you to the guys that read it
If you didn't like it, you did it in a respectful way.

For you guys that said it was a shit poem.
Do me a favor write one better on this topic.
It don't have to be Vaapad vs Djem So.

Anything you want I challenge you to write one better.
If you're not scared,no reply just write a poem of your choosing.
Since this is still 3 against 1,and you're still bitter,I dare you to write one.

Again,thank you for your honest replies and criticism.
This won't stop my writings or replies.

The Great mistake is to anticipate the outcome of the engagement.
You ought not to be thinking whether it ends in victory or defeat.
Just let nature take its course and your tools will strike at the right moment.------ Bruce Lee.

Yeah, we don't have to be Grandmasters of Iambic Pentameter to criticize your poetry. The fact that we probably can't write poetry is exactly why we didn't try to and then post in online for everyone in the world to see and laugh at. That little bit of peer pressure at the end is nice though.

peer pressure?

Is that what you think I feel?
LoL, You're scared. To write a poem???
I think you need to get permission to a poem from your boys to write a poem.

Or have one of them ghost write it for you.
I'm glad my poem gave you a laugh,
But I'm laughing my ass off because you're afraid to write one.

The messed up part to this is you think I feel pressured??? LOL.
peer pressure? LOL

Your grasp of the English languages is so disgusting that it gave me leukemia. Let me spell this out for you in a way that even a small child should be able to understand.

1. I can't write poetry, so I don't. Fear has nothing to do with it.
2. You can't write poetry either, so you really shouldn't.
3. Peer pressure, you goddamn moron, is exactly what you call what you're doing right now. "Do it, unless you're scared," is peer pressure. The only thing odd, of course, is that I consider you my peer. You aren't.

little boy, I just asked you to write.
We know you can insult and say ignorant things without thinking.
Now you can't follow directions,too?

Ok since you feel pressured
I'm only gonna say this once.
If you can't be respectful to anything I write,don't commit.
don't leave no replies.

Because what you and your little boys are doing is harrassment.
I have no beef with yall.
All I asked yall to do is write? no reply just write.

Well,you to write.
That's not peer pressure,that's telling the world,that
1 you can't write
2 you can't follow directions
3 And the only thing yall know how to do on KMC is insult and disrespect people.

Did you not read the Forum's rules?
If you need help its right above this topic when you go back to the home page.

I'm a grown ass man, thanks. Contrary to whatever reality you live in, I don't have a leash. Criticizing you isn't harassment. No one has to write poems to judge you, and you throwing a ***** fit because no one likes your poetry won't change that. You don't get to set forum rules, so you saying, "write, well, don't comment if don't," won't make anyone have to. But I'll humor you with a haiku:

I clicked on this thread.
The poem in it was shit.
Tears won't ever change that.

Originally posted by juyomaster34
If you can't be respectful to anything I write,don't commit.
don't leave no replies. A m e n

Originally posted by juyomaster34

If I wrote about Revan, Darth Vader,or Luke Skywalker's style,
There would be no insults or no complaints.

There would be more.

If your're grown ass man then stop acting like a disrespectful little boy
who needs some approval before you commit.

I,too am a grown ass man.
What do you think the 34 is for?
I'll humor you right back,

I don't run with little boys
I don't play with other people's children.
I don't need drugs,a gun, or some lame ass pack of wanna be thugs and gangsters.

I'm a grown ass 38 yr old man who has more respect and more class that you lil boy.
Learn some manners and learn how to shut up when real men are talking.
I asked you nicely to not commit or reply to my topics.

Mr. Can't follow directions.
Did you read the rules on the home page?
Who wrote your haiku? you didn't.

You said you can't write a poem.
You did something right,you got somebody to write it for you.
last time stay off my topic.

You still small minded. grown ass men talk like men and respect each other.
Not insult and disrespect each other.
You're suppose to be a leader not a follower.
I forgot you're not a man,you're still a lii wet behind the ears lil boy
pretending to be a man.

Here's some advice pretender,man up and stop being so disrespectful and childish,real talk,
stop following what you see, cause you ain't bout that life,
I have seen it all and done it all,You ain't done nothing but pretend .

I can speak your language too,lil boy.
Who you think originated it?
Stay off my topics and stay away from me.

LMFAOOOOOOOOOO

I sure as hell didn't read that poem.

LALKEK.

Originally posted by juyomaster34
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Your butthurt is unreal.

See this is what I'm talking about lil boy shit.
A real man can stand on his own two feet,partna

So why drag your lil pussy ass wanna be's in a grown ass man conversation? real talk lil boy.
You need your boys? This shit got too real o'l crumb to brick lil ass boy.

I'm sick of childish lil pussy boys trying to play hard and don't know the meaning of the word.
This was a Man to boy conversation now he wanna bring the boys into mix.
Read the replies dude your lil boyfriend started this shit.

He didn't have to say a word.
All he had to say was he didn't like it or no commit.
This dude wanna act like a hoe and do hoe shit,

Then he had the nerve to say he was a grown ass man?
Where I'm from dude you get rushed to dirt,quick.
And it won't take 4 or 5 or 6 of yall,pimpin' it'll just take 1 grown ass man

To another. I know I just dropped english(R.I.P.)
But I had to give to give it to you in a language yall lil rabbit ass boys can understand.
Ain't nothing weak about me dude.
but it's something weak about you.

Like I said before I don't need a crew.
I 'm man enough to fight my own battles.
I can't say the same about you, though.

If you can't respesct me or my replies or my topics again,lil weak ass boys
stay off my topics,stop harrassing me.
I tried to be calm now you hoes just straight harrassing me.

Let me tell you a secret,first I want to thank you,because I love bullies,
especially cyber bullies.
Let me tell you something,I'm not gonna bow down,
I'm not gonna be quiet,

You have no power over me and I'm not afraid of you or them.
If I get restricted for standing up to this bully(s)
then again I understand. Its been an honor writing on this site.
Cuz I'm about to let these weak ass bitches have it!!!!!

Just say you and your weak ass boys don't like my poems,*****
Be a man about it,stop including people weak ass *****.
The whole forum hasn't seen it, so you can't talk for nobody but you,

weak ass *****.I can take criticism when its respectful and honest.
It's that weak ass lil boy shit that I won't take.
But you 're grown ass man right?

Wrong, I smell pussy on you boy.
If you had kept it real,honest,and respectful I wouldn't have to say this.
But you don't have no real in you.

let me take that back real pussy is what you are .
Do you see me involving this person,or that person?
Grown over here lil boy.

All by myself,boy.
Man,I'm through,ranting on this lil ***** ass bully wanna be,
go play with your lil boys,boy.

juyomaster wants to ****ing brawl freshest put your fists up

If he puts up his IP address, we can throw down.

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Your butthurt is unreal.

My butt hurt is unreal?
everybody read this childish shit.
sounds like he's trying to say something but he got too many dicks in his mouth to speak
Are you trying to tell us something?
Are you about to come out the closet?

A real grown ass man wouldn't say no hoe ass shit like that.
Is that real enough for you *****?

A real grown ass man would say how your jaw feel?
Is your nose straight ? Sit down ***** you bleeding.
Is that your teeth on the ground?

Next time you hear grown men talking shut the **** up,
before you get knocked the **** out.

Shit like that.
unless you sweet?
under cover,down low then you say hoe ass shit like you said.(bruh).

My butt hurt unreal,get the **** outta here bruh!!!
That shit ain't cool.

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_liy3933JkW1qbvw1a.jpg

You ain't gonna do shit,but get your boys.
Or get your ***** ass gun.
Do l look stupid?

Tell you what, bring your girl,and just maybe it'll be a fair fight.
almost...just barely though cuz she might go back to the "A" with me.
After that stupid ass reply you just made.

She just might slap your ass for that dumb ass commit.
You don't need my IP address
I just told you where I dwell.

bring your weak ass to the "A".
bring your girl,too.
You know you lil boys can't fight by yourself.
You need somebody or some pit bull or gun or something.

I'm so confused right now.

> argues as if Freshest is an ignorant *****, sounding like an ignorant ***** in the process.

> kek

Originally posted by juyomaster34
I'm a grown ass 38 yr old man who has more respect and more class that you lil boy.

https://caracaschronicles.files.wordpress.com/2013/12/bullshit.jpg

Okay, here's my go at a better poem:


"Nothing" by DarthAnt66

Once there was a man named juyomaster34,
He was a sad little man in a sad little village.
He could accomplish nothing,
For he was... nothing.

Due to his failures, he tried to an hero.
He tried to jump over a bridge into the water below.
The water denied him death and brought more pain,
For he was... nothing.

He joined KMC and made a poem,
But once again it was a kekworthy failure.
Some compared it to Bane himself,
For he was... nothing.

A man named FreshestSlice got him mad.
The sad little man picked a fight not knowing he was black,
He returned home the next day with KFC up his ass,
For he was... nothing.

Here's where I get off jack off.
I know how to use my words bruh,twisted and broken.
Hence the topic a dance with the dark side **** the rest of it.

Since you like riding the dicks of every mutha ****a who got all of a sudden a problem
with Juyo,lets start with your ****ed up ass name.

Bruh I'm hard as stone,cold as ice who gives a **** about a undercover name Freshest slice?
Slice of what? do I need to go there?
Hell yeah,that dumb ass butt hurt commit?

Mutha ****a do your butt hurt?
With a name like freshest slice,bruh the shoe fits your ass so perfect.
I told yall I love talking shit to a weak ass bullies
Now jump *****,you feeling froggy?

Man I'll roast your ass,and feed your ass to my blue nose and red nose pits.
My red nose ***** bark louder than you.
So here's a muzzle to that fill in the blanks cross word puzzle shit you be talking.


I'm still talkin' shit to you wanna be bully.
I'm not scared of you. First it was about a mutha ****a who still don't know what the **** he talking about,then Freshest Slice of a monkey's ass had to say something disrespectful then your lil crew had to **** with me,too.

Do yall get together and participate in undercover off the wall ,secret finger in each other asses
and come up with dumb ass shit to get me started?
You didn't like my poem cool,
That's all you had to say.

Yall under cover bustas just had to be disrespectful.
If I didn't know better I think all yall lil boys
are in your rooms jacking off to
each other's commits and ignorant replies.

On that note I'm done,I know when I log off
and can't log in is when you bitches start talking about me behind my back.
Why? Because you're too much of a pussy to say it when I was online.

aiight beauty shop bitches you can talk about me now juyo master34 is gone restricted.
It's been real thank you KMC!!!!!I'm out c/o 2015.........

Originally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
LMFAOOOOOOOOOO

I sure as hell didn't read that poem.

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For the first time on this forum, I'm literally speechless.

****ing BARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I literally just linked the entire ****ing thread in my bio since only pulling specific quotes from this thread is an injustice.

Originally posted by DarthAnt66
For the first time on this forum, I'm literally speechless.

It's the end of the world.

Originally posted by DarthAnt66
Okay, here's my go at a better poem:


"Nothing" by DarthAnt66

Once there was a man named juyomaster34,
He was a sad little man in a sad little village.
He could accomplish nothing,
For he was... nothing.

Due to his failures, he tried to an hero.
He tried to jump over a bridge into the water below.
The water denied him death and brought more pain,
For he was... nothing.

He joined KMC and made a poem,
But once again it was a kekworthy failure.
Some compared it to Bane himself,
For he was... nothing.

A man named FreshestSlice got him mad.
The sad little man picked a fight not knowing he was black,
He returned home the next day with KFC up his ass,
For he was... nothing.

Terrible and racist. A tepid combination.

Oh **** neph just called you out on your Tepig shit

Originally posted by Nephthys
Terrible and racist. A tepid combination.
Originally posted by juyomaster34
Man I'll roast your ass,and feed your ass to my blue nose and red nose pits.
My red nose ***** bark louder than you.
So here's a muzzle to that fill in the blanks cross word puzzle shit you be talking.

I've forced out rock-hard shits that had more flow than you tbh.

Originally posted by juyomaster34
weak ass *****.I can take criticism when its respectful and honest.
It's that weak ass lil boy shit that I won't take.
But you 're grown ass man right?

Wrong, I smell pussy on you boy.
If you had kept it real,honest,and respectful I wouldn't have to say this.
But you don't have no real in you.

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3rtyerfHZ1qir45xo1_500.gif

But he's not a rapper

juyomaster be like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbGs_qK2PQA&t=4m26s

Really Darth I forgot your name already.
Darth Bane sounds harder than...excuse me what's your name?
Never mind don't get me started about your respect thread to Revan,

Bruh my pit can write a better thread if she could write.
I use to like your threads,hence the words use to,

like I said never mind you slow too,
Your boy friend attacked me go back and read
and stay outta grown folks business.

like I said I don't need anybody coming to my rescue
Because he, your weak ass boy can't handle his shit like a man.
He called in his reinforcements,but he a grown ass man? right?

Get the **** outta here,bruh.
You come riding in on your white horse trying to save a bully?
hey Antman like the movie you sucked.

What kind of a name is Darth Ant?
No fear, nothing. your colony is ruled by a Queen *****
you're not even a drone or a soldier,

you're a worker,an errand boy who just follows any dumb cause
without reading or to have the sense enough to tell monkey's slice that he was wrong.
no,you had to say the same dumb shit,too. I thought we were cool?

Fooled me. wow,

You're a follower,I bet you'll blindly follow these ass holes straight to hell.
Change your slogan cause real christians don't participate in foolishness,foolish.
Nor do they cuss or put up immature pics on the internet. foolish.
Your name should be Darth Foolish because you do and post some foolish shit,foolish.

Ain't it pass your bed time?Go to bed lil boy.
run to your closet clique. and play Jack be nimble,Jack be quick,sit your lame ass
down before Freshest Slice take his dick, boy.

I told you I love bullies, check your mouth before you talk to me,with all that white shit on you Face. lil boy And stop playing church. All that dumb ass shit you say,All that bull shit you start?

No wonder you need a clique, you and freshest can't keep writing checks neither one of
yall weak asses can't cash. Yalls best bet is to gang up. because by yourselves none of you lame ass pussies can **** with me .

damn,shit, my bad Freshest did cash his check... in your ass,errand boy.


Sad man? Dude everytime I read your respect thread to Revan, it made me sad.
You don't do that thread any justice,so you loosing. Hang it up better yet delete it .
because I have read plenty respect threads on Revan and yours ain't even in the top 10.

Bruh Darth Power can write a thread better than you, remember him?

OH MY GOD

DARTHANT66 JUST LOST HIS CAREER

"Hey Antman, like the movie you sucked"

Originally posted by juyomaster34
Bruh Darth Power can write a thread better than you
I just got raped so hard that my future child died in the womb.

I mean, I've seen the Sun, but that much fire? I'm done...

I feel physically violated after taking a beating of that caliber.

HE DISSED REVAN RT BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

"hence the words use to,"

I want to marry this thread. Do I have permission to write it a poem, my boys?

Remi Boyz yah

Neph you,too? You with the clique? They bringing all the big guns.
It's them clique boys,again?
Yall through playing with each other?

Errand boy ,
I know how to use my words twisted or broken,

But who better that can't understand english,yet speak english
Who says R.I.P. to English?
post your pics funboy cause that's all you can do is pic a flic De'aigo looking ass sell out.

I'm through with this shit. lil boy attacks me and I'm the bad guy?
Entertain yourselves I'm out.

Oh shit. Juyo dropped the mic on every clique ***** in this thread.

He's your kin, from the looks of it.

Well this escalated quickly.

Originally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
He's your kin, from the looks of it.
The **** you talkin' 'bout, boy?

Juyomaster is making me want to kill myself due to my sheer inadequacy..

Originally posted by juyomaster34
Neph you,too? You with the clique? They bringing all the big guns.
It's them clique boys,again?
Yall through playing with each other?

Errand boy ,
I know how to use my words twisted or broken,

But who better that can't understand english,yet speak english
Who says R.I.P. to English?
post your pics funboy cause that's all you can do is pic a flic De'aigo looking ass sell out.

I'm through with this shit. lil boy attacks me and I'm the bad guy?
Entertain yourselves I'm out.

I was dissing Ant, so no.

I never should have said all that B.S.
I let my temper get the best of me.
I should have handled the situation better than that.

All I was trying to do was explain how Vaapad works.
How it was activated. From my P.O.V.
I failed in writing it from my eyes.

When I should have analysed both styles with its top practitioners.
I did not mean to turn this thread into one against many.
It was suppose to be me explaining Vaapad to the best of my abilities.

I'm gonna try hard,very hard not to have another verbal attack like that ever again.
If you like what I wrote,then fine.I appreciate it. Thank you.
If you didn't like it,then fine.I appreciate that too.

But you don't have to be disrespectful,and call my work,my thoughts,shit.
I agree sometimes about certain things and sometimes I disagree,respectfully
I don't call anybody's work shit or trash or anything else that's disrespectful.

I respect you,you respect me that's all I'm saying.
If you see something wrong with the thread,then say Juyo,you should have said this
Or maybe you should have said that.

Could you explain how or why you feel it should be or could be.
I'm gonna write another thread soon.
Hopefully that one won't get confused or disrespected like this one.

The Recovery Vol.2 featuring Vaapad

I was also getting an Eminem vibe from this.

So when Mace offers to dance, you better say never
cause a dance with the Vapaad may last you forever

That was pretty gay OP.

Originally posted by The Merchant
That was pretty gay OP. Says the one who masturbates to PalpatineXXXAnakin fanfiction. mmm

Vader X Palpatine is canon tho.

LMFAO.

I give this thread an A++ Rating. I don't know what's better. Juyo's ranting or the comments regarding his ranting. Err, I mean rapping.

https://metrouk2.files.wordpress.com/2015/07/woah.gif

I've been on KMC for years now and this remains its greatest thread.

Damn, just realised this Juyo guy has been posting in free verse this whole time, in every thread. Every word he speaks is poetry.

"This Juyo guy?"

Kill yourself, Beni.

You expect me to spell out his full name? You kys. uhuh

Originally posted by Beniboybling
this Juyo guy:
*the resurrected Son of God

Originally posted by Beniboybling
You expect me to spell out his full name? You kys. uhuh
I think when you address a god, you're supposed to show respect. That means saying his entire name.

This is the single most glorious thread in KMC.

Originally posted by Petrus
This is the single most glorious thread in KMC.


Juyomaster34, please take me under your wing, teach me epic hip-hop flows that resemble the finest poetry.