IS Darth revan a mary-sue.

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Revanchiste
If The other Revan have evident weakness like ignorance,, over confidence, being a ghost from the past, a broken shell, do not knowing what they are really doing...

I think that Darth Revan is really flawless, his philosophy lifestyle, etc etc let him flawless.
He is literraly above everyone, regarding the world with a delicat and pleasant :
"Hum, amusing", all his training pression...

Look at his ****ing damn god empire, he mannaged to make the sith great and powerfull without them being thirsty back stabbers, neitehr being castrated servants, according to the Holonet, his only real weakness his is mercy over piotential usefull tools, that is when you think about it also a strengh...

Let's test :
Does their personal morality always perfectly match objective reality? To put it another way, would there be any difference between describing their opinion and simply narrating what was actually going on in a scene?

YESS

Do they start the story at the pinnacle of achievement and have no way to grow or improve?

Er yes and no.. He start with Malachor V. wich is pretty big.. But the dude still improove....

Do they have unexplained frequent good luck, even when by all logic they should fail in that area?

Does that really count?

Is it a fan character that is better than the canon characters?

Wut?

Do they have physical features, powers or items that are impossible to have or extremely rare going by the rules of the setting (ie; a human with cat eyes and wings with no explanation in real-world based fiction, or a ridiculous item such as a weapon which is chainsaw, electric-guitar and machine-gun combined in a swords-and-sorcery setting)?

Her his connexion to the force, hsi knowledge, all of this qauiere in a record time + his stuff...

Do they have the most powerful ability or power in a setting, without any sacrifices? (For example a character that can use magic which would destroy any enemy, without any negative effects. But if character has that ability, and it reduces his lifespan, damages him forever and/or kills everyone including his comrades. it's not that overpowered.)

A yhea.. he have... So yess...

Are they connected to the canon characters or do they become connected to them? This usually takes the form of being a "long-lost" relative or love interest to a canon character.

WUUUUTTT?

Do they get a lot of shilling? For example; do all the canon characters suddenly start talking about a fan character, with their presence in the story largely relegated to providing opportunities for the new character to show how pure, powerful, good-hearted, etc they are?

Huh?

Do you never allow other characters to dislike them?

Or do you punish those other characters for disliking your character by portraying them negatively and/or making something terrible happen to them? (For example; making them unlikable, a secondary villain, or having the one character that dislikes the Mary Sue "coincidentally" have their home destroyed)

No....

Revanchiste
Do they always make good decisions? And/or bad ones that are suddenly revealed to have been a good choice?

When you can see the future with such accuracy. And not even be over reliatant on farsight power --> tactical genius cappable of forseen thing with the pure sheer intellelect of his brain...
Humhum yess yess .... + Being a tzeenchian mother ****er...


Do they feature an entirely contrived "weakness" that doesn't affect them any time it would harm them (such as being clumsy unless they are required to perform a great feat of athleticism) or isn't really a weakness (such as being too kind or righteous "for their own good"wink which was clearly added solely so the author could point to it when accused of writing a Sue?

He have no weakness so does this that count.. SO yeess !

Is the main problem in the story one that this character can easily fix or solve on their own? (Doesn't count if they're the only character in the story).

Cannot answer this one..

s it a protagonist character written by Matt Ward, Kim Dal Young, Stephenie Mayer, Ayn Rand or Terry GoodBadkind? (Note, a Mary Sue can be written by someone who's none of these people.)

Forget this one..

1. They are super-powerful/hyper-competent. In established settings, usually more so than canon characters. Better leadership skills than a McDohl, faster than Sonic, etc.
YESS

2. The story completely revolves around them, even in... No, ESPECIALLY in established settings.
A Big YEEEEEEESSSS

3. They can do no wrong.
Well the definition of wrong in star wars universe is kinda complicated but I would say yess...

Bonus points: A. The mary sue's competence doesn't match the player's knowledge
Bonus added.

C. Other characters comment on how much better at their own skills the Mary Sue is like they're happy for her, even if the character is known for being arrogant and standoff-ish.

I let you guess here..

D. Characters that don't react well to the sue's 'harmless pranks' see the light and begin to love the Mary Sue as well.

The same..

FreshestSlice
Yes, Revan is a Mary-Sue, no, it's not for the reasons you think, and no, he's not perfect in every way.

Nephthys
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Yes, Revan is a Mary-Sue.

NTJack0
Yes, and he's an absolute shit character, moving on.

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