A poem (BETTER THEN THE STORY!!)

Driller Killer

Insanity
Rage unleashed
Need to kill
Blood will spill
Drill the head
Lust for death
Mutilate
Victim's face
Force the drill
In the skull
Psychopath
Now will laugh
It is time
To kill again

thats not a poem
thats just weak rhymes
r u like running out of time to live or things to do?

ok is this better:

Nighmares filled with torment
visions of dead corpses
morbid scene of murder
gruesome bloody sluaghter
morbid thought of violence
voices order to kill
time for blood to be spilled
insanity
killing spree
cutting flesh, violent deaths
bloodlust unsatisfied
lust for death still you crave
torment of the insane

i dont think that still is a poem...your just saying disturbing images...imagery is good but put some more thought into. 😄 good luck

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