Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
Revan vs. Yoda story
The tiny jedi master's footsteps echoed through the halls of the Jedi temple. Yoda had been disturbed from his rest, there was a disturbance in the force. The dim illumination in the empty hallways left scattered shadows throught the hall, for once in his life Yoda was afraid.
"Having trouble getting to sleep master jedi?"
the voice echoed through his head in a low whisper, Yoda whirled around his hand clutching the hilt of his lightsaber and what he saw would be etched in his memories forever. There stood a sith lord in long black robes with a full helmet and cape, twin lightsabers drawn, the tiny jedi said only one word, "Revan."
"Yes master yoda," the whisper returned " I have searched far and wide for one worthy of my skill and finally I have come to you, I hope you won't dissapoint me." and with that he flourished his blades.
"For one such as you, time I do not have Revan."
"Master Yoda if you think you have a choice in this matter then you are sorely mistaken, you will fight me or i will slaughter the younglings as they sleep." Revan hissed in Yoda's head.
The tiny jedi ignited his green saber, "Then time it is for you to learn the true nature of the force."
With that the two master swordsmen clashed, sabers moving like lightening, Yoda sent a flurry of slashes at Revan bringing his saber high then faking downwards at the last second Revan took a step back and batted Yodas' saber aside with a flick of his wrist and kicked him square in the face, now Revan was on the offensive sabers humming as he slashed through the air, spinning he brought his crimson saber twards Yodas' middle, the jedi flipped over revans blade kicked off his chest and brought two midair slashes down on revan who parried them easily. Yoda landed behind Revan and sent a thrust towards his stomach but was sent flying by a chair. The tiny jedi master ducked as a chair flew over his head leaving a small crater in the wall behind him. He kicked off a flying piece of debris and sent a series of low slashes at Revan, who saw them coming before they had even entered the jedi masters head and deftly sidestepped brining his blades crashing down, he rained blow after blow on Yoda toying with the jedi penetrating his defenses time and time again, arcs of red and purple singed the very air as they flipped in deadly arcs with every flick of Revan's wrist, the powerful strokes came at Yoda time and time again but he didn't falter, he parried a low swipe and used it to propel himself over the sith lords head bringing his saber towards revan's middle with a powerful sroke. His arm froze in midair as much as yoda willed it to move but it only started to bend backwards, there was an audible snap then pain flooded his body, soon replaced by an intense burining between his ribs. Revan sent him flying with a burst of force lighting, the jedi looked down only to see his own lightsaber blade lodged between his ribs, it was the last thing he saw before his eyes clouded over and he became one with the force.
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Registered: May 2005
Location: A galaxy far, far away....
Good job. Well-thought-out. However, there is a thread devoted to stories. Everybody posts their new stories there (though maybe a new story thread would be nice, too - but perhaps excessive). Just thought I'd tell you - no offense meant, sir.
Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
Thanx sorry bout not knowing about the story thread i'm a newbie here and this was like my third post
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No, that's not how you become one with the force. Qui found out about how to do it and then taught Yoda and Obi Wan how to do it as it says in the movie Revenge of the Sith.
Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
My bad i always thought that whenever a force user died they became one with the force and the ability to appear through the force was something different entirely.
__________________ The whole world trembles in fear before my awesome unholy army of garden gnomes soon we will rule the world and from there...home depot!!!
Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
thanks i didn't know that
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great story frobo you have a talent for this stuff anyway a story thread would be a gd idea and sorry about this but i think the story could of ended a bit better like after yoda dies and becomes one with the force revan turns around says another jedi master not worthy of my skill and walks down the dimmle lit corridor his siloet slowly dissapeas and a wisper echos through the corridors saying revannn
Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
nice yoda thanks man
__________________ The whole world trembles in fear before my awesome unholy army of garden gnomes soon we will rule the world and from there...home depot!!!
Registered: May 2005
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
Yah it started not bad but the ending was kinda abrupt, I've posted a jango fett vs. maul story in the storytime thread which in my opinion is much better.
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May 26th, 2005 03:13 AM
