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Biscuit
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Gender: Female
Location: England

a poem by me

...'but now i am found'

Engulfed by her welcoming wing,
on her two feet I stand.
Her beauty overshadows me and I
recall the overwhelming jealousy.

My emerald eyes are spiked,
with tears of losing her.
I cower in her wake as she protects
me from my clumsy failed attempts to strive.

Clinging on, I push her away,
and find comfort in her shadow.
I'm taunted by her excellence, although
I'ts always me to paint the picture green.

And then I see the sunlight;
I venture from her loving warmth,
and crawl away from everything I know
to seek my own mistakes in solitude.

Triumphantly I greet the welcome breeze,
uncovering myself, I set her free
and the glory astounds me.

But gone is the laughter together we shared,
the fun that we had and
the secrets we beared.

I miss the amenities friendship provides,
courageous and honest, I conquer the lies.
Pardon my arrogance, Lord
Forgive my deceit,
Your prodigal son has returned.


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Biscuit
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Gender: Female
Location: England

What do u think?


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wow i love that poem big grin well done


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Biscuit
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Gender: Female
Location: England

Bunny Sqwalkings
In a land, far away
Where the faries go to play
Lived a rabbit who, one day
Decided to hop along his way

He said goodbye to all his friends
And to his enemies, made amends
But when he reached the sheep he tends
He just set off around the bends

He soon got tired and thought it best
That he should stop to eat and rest
He took off his socks and vest
And spread them over an ants nest

As he set out his food and drink
He startd to ponder, started to think
What if he'd been born a mink?
Would his fur be pink?

Puffing his after-dinner cigar
He lay and looked at the evening star
Wondering why it was so far
And would it be so in a car?

Just as he started to whistle a tune
He gazed longingly at the moon
And then he exploded
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!


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