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Fallen: a (short) tale from the dark side

Kay this is something I wrote when I was really, really bored at school, loosely based on my char in CR's dark jedi RPG. It's kinda weird

Fallen
A tale from the dark side

For two years now, they’ve been hunting me. I can’t see them, can’t prove it. But I know they’re there. I can feel them. Always closing in on me, always finding me where I can’t be found.

For too long I have lived in fear of them. But what can I do to stop them chasing me? Nothing. I am powerless, just another shadow in a vast sea of darkness. I drive myself to the point of madness, spending my life running from them, leaving death and destruction in my wake.

There is no safe place for me in this life. Half the time I spend sprinting blindly in a futile effort to throw them off. The rest of my time I use looking for that safe place that I know doesn’t exist. Scrambling madly for a foothold, like a Kath Hound on a rain-soaked cliff. No dry spot for Quor.

The only thing that matters is that I keep my distance from the jedi. To me, so-called “comradery”, “friendship”, and “good will”, they are all meaningless. I look out for myself and no one else. The only thing I take pleasure in is battle. There is no better feeling in the world than that. The force flowing through my vains, my heart filled with pure hatred for my enemies. My lightsabers flash around me in a brilliant show of pure, silver death. There is nothing more beautiful in all the galaxy. When the job is done and my enemies lie vanquished at my feet, in that split second I am happy.

Some would call me insane. Maybe I am, that much I don’t know. I am a dark sider. I am Quor Anos, fallen.


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Nice! yes


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Thanks big grin


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thats frigin rad, great atmospher and wording


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really? thanks dude...


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Maybe you should continue... wink


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Yeah it's kinda short isn't it... I just don't know what else I could add to it


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